New captioned photo series/universe

zdarkness · 08-23-2021

The concept has promise and the animated captions are neat but the very blunt matter-of-fact writing style and mediocre grammar really knock me out of it. I'd give your captions one or two more proofreads before posting them. Maybe read them out loud to yourself at least once as you make them.

jigglypuff · 08-23-2021

These were made in a rush, my living situation prevents me from spending too much time on drafts. Didn’t think the writing would be that bad, probably won’t get any better since I won’t be getting more time to write them. Really feel like I wasted a bunch of time making mediocre captions.

Gonna delete them later today.

tghobby · 08-25-2021

Well, I liked "workout buddies". I'm sorry you deleted the blog site after only one person's feedback. Your style is well, your style. If you get enjoyment from doing the captions then by all means continue.

I for one enjoy all the different prose styles - even those with poor grammar skills and English isn't their first language. Sometimes these are the captions with the best plot ideas.

If you are looking for encouragement - here it is. Keep writing and posting. You won't please everyone with your work. But more importantly, does your work please YOU? If so, please continue. I'd enjoy seeing what you come up with next...

08-23-2021	#1
zdarkness Zone of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 5,454	Re: New captioned photo series/universe The concept has promise and the animated captions are neat but the very blunt matter-of-fact writing style and mediocre grammar really knock me out of it. I'd give your captions one or two more proofreads before posting them. Maybe read them out loud to yourself at least once as you make them. __________________ Can't really draw well. I can write when I find the time. But mostly I'm here to leech! thumbs up

08-23-2021	#2
jigglypuff Boobs for everyone! Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 56	Re: New captioned photo series/universe These were made in a rush, my living situation prevents me from spending too much time on drafts. Didn’t think the writing would be that bad, probably won’t get any better since I won’t be getting more time to write them. Really feel like I wasted a bunch of time making mediocre captions. Gonna delete them later today.

08-25-2021	#3
tghobby Leecher Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 2	Re: New captioned photo series/universe Well, I liked "workout buddies". I'm sorry you deleted the blog site after only one person's feedback. Your style is well, your style. If you get enjoyment from doing the captions then by all means continue. I for one enjoy all the different prose styles - even those with poor grammar skills and English isn't their first language. Sometimes these are the captions with the best plot ideas. If you are looking for encouragement - here it is. Keep writing and posting. You won't please everyone with your work. But more importantly, does your work please YOU? If so, please continue. I'd enjoy seeing what you come up with next...