My art - Page 10

ivan11422 · 04-17-2007

thanks

any critique? please

Cursebearer · 04-17-2007

I'd love to see you do a sequence like TRC. The trouble is, of course, getting a model that will pose for it step-by-step. Just after seeing your almost fully she-wolf picture, I can't help but think a sequence from you would be excellent! Either way, you're a really frequent poster with great talent. The only critique I have is to keep practicing, cause each one is better than the last!

UtopiaNH · 04-17-2007

Ivan's done quite a few TF sequences if you've been observing his art for a while; although generally he uses the same photograph for multiple steps in the sequence.

As for critiques; in your latest photo the fur is a bit too whispy (you may want to thicken it slightly) while her hair has some weird shading - do you have the original photo for comparison? Also her left ear is strangely out of focus compared to the distance it should be in the photograph.

I do like the model you chose for that one in particular and it's certainly a fine work (don't take my criticisms to heart obviously).

ivan11422 · 04-17-2007

no worries, i appreciate the critiques and feedback. thats what helps me improve. you guys are honest and i need that. im gonna post the original. and morph side by side.

ivan11422 · 04-17-2007

heres another one. beginning TF

jimi20 · 04-18-2007

Beautiful model, great work i especially like the ear

Wedge · 04-18-2007

Hey ivan1142 i have a good subject for your she-wolf transformations..

ivan11422 · 04-18-2007

looks like theres a sexy shewolf in there, muah ha ha ha ha!

UtopiaNH · 04-21-2007

The newest picture (09bwolf1) is actually one of your better. This shift of hue of the entire photo helps and works well with her already darker skin tone (it also draws out the new style ear which I actually like much better than your usual). The gentle shading under her eyes also draws more attention to her eyes. In fact my only complaint is her left canine tooth looks very flat.

ivan11422 · 04-21-2007

thanks! the pic that wedge put up is a tad too small to morph. perhaps a larger pic might work.

Tyger · 04-21-2007

you could always rescale the pic with photoshop can't you?

ivan11422 · 04-21-2007

not sure how to do it. but still would like a bigger pic.

04-17-2007	#111
UtopiaNH Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 104	Ivan's done quite a few TF sequences if you've been observing his art for a while; although generally he uses the same photograph for multiple steps in the sequence. As for critiques; in your latest photo the fur is a bit too whispy (you may want to thicken it slightly) while her hair has some weird shading - do you have the original photo for comparison? Also her left ear is strangely out of focus compared to the distance it should be in the photograph. I do like the model you chose for that one in particular and it's certainly a fine work (don't take my criticisms to heart obviously). Last edited by UtopiaNH; 04-17-2007 at 10:27 PM.

04-17-2007	#109
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	thanks any critique? please

04-17-2007	#110
Cursebearer The Semi-Great Slayer Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 944	I'd love to see you do a sequence like TRC. The trouble is, of course, getting a model that will pose for it step-by-step. Just after seeing your almost fully she-wolf picture, I can't help but think a sequence from you would be excellent! Either way, you're a really frequent poster with great talent. The only critique I have is to keep practicing, cause each one is better than the last!

04-18-2007	#114
jimi20 Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 401	Beautiful model, great work i especially like the ear

04-18-2007	#116
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	looks like theres a sexy shewolf in there, muah ha ha ha ha!

04-21-2007	#117
UtopiaNH Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 104	The newest picture (09bwolf1) is actually one of your better. This shift of hue of the entire photo helps and works well with her already darker skin tone (it also draws out the new style ear which I actually like much better than your usual). The gentle shading under her eyes also draws more attention to her eyes. In fact my only complaint is her left canine tooth looks very flat.

04-21-2007	#118
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	thanks! the pic that wedge put up is a tad too small to morph. perhaps a larger pic might work.

04-21-2007	#119
Tyger not Lurker...Prowler! Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 192	you could always rescale the pic with photoshop can't you?

04-21-2007	#120
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	not sure how to do it. but still would like a bigger pic.