Just a warm-up... - Page 14

Prophet Tenebrae · 01-20-2007

Well done Memopad, that's an excellent comic you put together - even if Xu gets relegated to being a side character, she'll still be memorable... and as everyone says, better to finish it off than let it languish.

Anyway, looking forward to seeing it coloured... definitely one of the best pieces of work of 2006/7.

Kirokusclone · 01-20-2007

You should make a bitg long comic series about this...

LK · 01-20-2007

God damn man. Those latest pages are friggin' awesome.

01-20-2007

*MetalCore music starts playing*
That's Right! Rock on MEMO PAD!

GOgre54 · 01-20-2007

I hope the the story continues from there.

01-20-2007

I see my chance of picking this up is lowering. XD I want to do this so bad but I don't want to ruin it's awesomeness.

Kajamakuji · 01-26-2007

This will be one of the first times I've ever even posted here, but I have to give tribute where tribute is due. First, seeing this lead me to Kohad, which is great on another level. Second this little tale of Xiaoyun Xu is amazing in art, humor, layout, and just general cuteness. I would say this is definatley up there in some of the best BE work. I mean it has PLOT. And Xu is an interesting character. It will be very nice to see her again in the future in any form, secondary character or her own little spinoff arc.

So yea. Go Memo pad. You rock as hard as a diamond, and are metal as adamantium. I've definatley became an instant fan of your work, and wish you the best of success in your endavors.

lalilu · 01-26-2007

wow, great comic. the series is so open ended it could be continued, but it would be hard to top the first part

Grant · 01-27-2007

Oooh, I quite like this. I love a good abundance of humor dude. This looks like it could shape up very well!
I loved the pacing, especially the fake out in panel 4 and the imagined super saiyajin (hmm forgot how to spell it, been to long out side of the fandom) You've got great comedic timing! Keep up the good work dude, I hope to see more from you.

gammera1976 · 01-27-2007

Sweet comic.

02-02-2007

Perhaps the first chapter is completed? Then will there be a second chapter after this one?

Uber awesome man, it inspires me to try to draw again.

Kirokusclone · 02-02-2007

I'd love to read more, but unfortunately it seems that this comic is complete, or so it seems.

01-20-2007	#157
Prophet Tenebrae Prophet Of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: UK Posts: 1,792	Well done Memopad, that's an excellent comic you put together - even if Xu gets relegated to being a side character, she'll still be memorable... and as everyone says, better to finish it off than let it languish. Anyway, looking forward to seeing it coloured... definitely one of the best pieces of work of 2006/7. __________________ Female Transformation Chat! Female Transformation Uber Blog BE Story Club

01-20-2007	#159
LK Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 3,258	God damn man. Those latest pages are friggin' awesome. __________________

01-20-2007	#158
Kirokusclone self proclaimed genious Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 257	You should make a bitg long comic series about this...

01-20-2007	#160
ddvz Guest Posts: n/a	MetalCore music starts playing That's Right! Rock on MEMO PAD!

01-20-2007	#161
GOgre54 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 139	I hope the the story continues from there.

01-20-2007	#162
Flip M Guest Posts: n/a	I see my chance of picking this up is lowering. XD I want to do this so bad but I don't want to ruin it's awesomeness.

01-26-2007	#163
Kajamakuji Leecher Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 2	This will be one of the first times I've ever even posted here, but I have to give tribute where tribute is due. First, seeing this lead me to Kohad, which is great on another level. Second this little tale of Xiaoyun Xu is amazing in art, humor, layout, and just general cuteness. I would say this is definatley up there in some of the best BE work. I mean it has PLOT. And Xu is an interesting character. It will be very nice to see her again in the future in any form, secondary character or her own little spinoff arc. So yea. Go Memo pad. You rock as hard as a diamond, and are metal as adamantium. I've definatley became an instant fan of your work, and wish you the best of success in your endavors.

01-26-2007	#164
lalilu spicy Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 613	wow, great comic. the series is so open ended it could be continued, but it would be hard to top the first part

01-27-2007	#165
Grant Lurker Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 17	Oooh, I quite like this. I love a good abundance of humor dude. This looks like it could shape up very well! I loved the pacing, especially the fake out in panel 4 and the imagined super saiyajin (hmm forgot how to spell it, been to long out side of the fandom) You've got great comedic timing! Keep up the good work dude, I hope to see more from you.

01-27-2007	#166
gammera1976 Process Master Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: West of Boston, MA Posts: 589	Sweet comic.

02-02-2007	#167
Gameseeker18 Guest Posts: n/a	Perhaps the first chapter is completed? Then will there be a second chapter after this one? Uber awesome man, it inspires me to try to draw again.

02-02-2007	#168
Kirokusclone self proclaimed genious Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 257	I'd love to read more, but unfortunately it seems that this comic is complete, or so it seems.