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Re: Midna BE Story
That's a mixed group of votes.
Lactation seems to be unanimously agreed to. But there seems to be a group who likes the idea of a Centaur TF and a group that says it'd be a major turn-off... So, what do I do? Maybe I should just make it a partial horse TF... like a few simple things. Horse shoes, tail, ears, possibly a little bit of general growth. How does that sound? (Of course that would be paired with the usual BE and the lactation) |
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Re: Midna BE Story
sounds good to me chief...
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Re: Midna BE Story
Ooh, second, growth is definitely an awesome touch. I can't wait to see how messy her milk makes things. XD
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Re: Midna BE Story
Thirded.
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Ah, great.
![]() Now, the story needs to get to that point first, so you'll have to wait a little bit. Here's a very long story part... Nabooru had decided to take the road to Lake Hylia. Going by the Zora River would mean leaving their horses behind early on and making a few long jumps, while they would only have to swim a small distance from Lake Hylia. Both Saria and Nabooru stayed on the look out for the Curse. But it seemed it had no interest in catching them anymore. It had surprised Nabooru that he hadn?t even made an attempt to get them even though they were in reach. The trip went along smoothly, although the bouncing of her breasts caused the milk bottle to nearly fly out from her cleavage a number of times. After the fifth time, she hoped Saria wouldn?t be asking for an explanation. Nabooru listened for any sound from behind her, but all she heard was Saria?s gentle breathing as she lay with her head against Nabooru?s back. Nabooru smiled. ?Poor kid has had a rough night?? she said to herself. From the position of the sun, Nabooru could tell it was noon. She soon saw the passageway in between the rocks leading to Lake Hylia. ?Finally?? she said, pushing the milk bottle a little further down her cleavage to prevent it from flying out. Nabooru?s two Gerudo bodyguards went ahead through the passageway to make sure everything was safe. Nabooru knew that, if there was an ambush, a narrow passageway would be the place for it. They soon returned with the news that the coast was clear. Nabooru still wondered what the Curse was up to. Was it preparing a particularly nasty ambush? Still pondering, she and her bodyguards stopped their horses in front of the huge Lake Hylia. The sun?s reflection on the water was quite blinding, but Nabooru knew where the entrance to Zora?s Domain was. She gently nudged Saria to wake her up, and carefully helped her down from the horse after she herself got down. Saria yawned and blinked a few times. Nabooru told her guards to wait and guard their horses. Together with Saria, she walked to what seemed to be a ruin of a once larger structure. Two pillars stood proudly by the waterside. Suddenly, something she hadn?t thought of before struck Nabooru. ?Kid? can you swim?? she asked, turning to Saria. ?A little. There?s a small pond in the Lost Woods where I would swim sometimes,? she said. ?Okay, but can you dive and hold your breath for a longer period of time?? Nabooru asked. Saria seemed unsure. ?Come in the water with me, okay?? Nabooru said. The two of them gently stepped in the water. Nabooru was glad to see Saria could at least stay afloat, even in deep water. ?Now, look down there. There?s a hole in the wall,? Nabooru pointed out. Saria looked at the whole and turned a little pale. ?Will I fit through there?? she asked. Nabooru smiled. ?I?m sure you will,? she said in the most reassuring voice she could find. ?Now, just swim all the way through the tunnel. It?s a little dark, but don?t be scared.? Nabooru said she?d go first, and instructed Saria to watch. She dove down, and gracefully swam in the whole. But she had forgotten she didn?t have the figure she used to have, and got stuck with her breasts for a few moments. She managed to get in, but her breasts kept rubbing against unpleasantly rocky feeling bottom. She swam as fast as she could through the dark, narrow tunnel and just concentrated on the light that was now just a few yards away. Saria had been very nervous, but she took a deep breath and dove down. She swam in the direction of the hole. Soon she was in it, and the world around her was pitch black. She felt it was very narrow, and wondered if Nabooru had any trouble getting through. The light in the distance was broken by a moving shape that was hard to distinguish. Saria guessed it was Nabooru. When she was just a few yards away from the light, the figure disappeared and Saria guessed Nabooru was already out of the tunnel. Saria was glad to leave the tunnel. She was already short of breath and panic had been creeping up on her. She quickly swam up the moment she left the tunnel and gasped for air. She saw Nabooru right next to her, looking relieved. She looked around. It was a strange room that looked like a cave and the many torches the water reflected created a strange moving pattern on the walls. Suddenly, something jumped out from the water out of nowhere right in front of her. Saria screamed. ?It?s just a Zora, kid!? Nabooru said, trying not to laugh. Saria looked at the figure that had appeared in front of her. It looked like a very white, black-eyed man with strangely fish-like features. ?Good day, travelers,? the Zora said. ?What brings you to Zora?s Domain?? ?Well?? Saria stammered. Nabooru took over, and said ?We?re here on an important errand that concerns the future of Hyrule.? The Zora frowned. ?So, what do you need from us?? ?To create a magic potion, we need? a Zora?s scale,? Nabooru said. The Zora didn?t seem sure what to think ?Well, if you want a Zora?s scale, you need to prove yourself worthy of being one of us,? he said after some thought. ?And how exactly do we do that?? Nabooru asked. ?Follow that winding path up to the King?s room. Turn left and you?ll find yourself standing at the top of that waterfall,? he said, pointing up. Saria thought it looked unpleasantly high. ?Talk to the Zora you meet there.? Nabooru and Saria imagined it wouldn?t help to push the fact that their errand was of great importance, and neither one was in the mood to explain exactly what they were fighting either. So, they went up the winding path. The king was asleep, so they simply turned left. Like the other Zora had said, here stood a slightly more masculine looking Zora. He looked a little bored. As soon as he saw the two rather exotic looking women, however, he became quite lively. ?Good day, ladies! Have you come to play the diving game?? Saria and Nabooru looked at each other. They had already been afraid they would have to do something like this. The Zora saw the doubtful faces. ?There?s nothing to be afraid of! It?s fun. I throw some Rupees in the water, you dive down, and get them!? he said enthusiastically. ?Of course you?ll have to do it in 30 seconds,? he added. Nabooru groaned. A dive like that, and then a lot of swimming ? with those breasts. ?Although 60 seconds is fine, too?? the Zora added, seeing Nabooru?s discouraged face. ?I suppose we?ll have to pay for playing the game?? Nabooru asked. ?It?s ten Rupees per person? so, if you two would like to try, that?d be twenty Rupees,? the Zora said. Nabooru didn?t have money, and asked Saria to search her pockets. The old dress had some Rupees in its pockets. Ten in total, Nabooru counted. ?Ah? that?s enough for one person. I guess I?ll go,? she said. ?But wouldn?t it be easier for me, considering? well, you know?? Saria asked. Nabooru frowned. ?But are you sure you want to?? Nabooru asked. Saria nodded. ?Alright. Just? be careful, okay, kid?? Saria nodded again, and handed the money to the Zora. ?Alright. On three, I?ll throw these Rupees down and you need to dive and get ?em. One, two, three!? For Saria, everything seemed to go slower than usually. She saw the Rupees glitter and reflect the torchlight as they fell down, hesitated for one terrible moment and then dove down. In a matter of moments, she hit the water. She had been closing her eyes for the duration of the fall, but knew she had to look for Rupees now. She swam up to the surface, took a deep breath and frantically looked around. It seemed the Rupees were pretty close by, and all close together so she dove in their direction. She counted each Rupee she picked up. ?One, two, three?? She found herself short on breath again, and resurfaced. She looked around. She saw something blue glitter a little distance away. She quickly swam in its direction and grabbed it. ?That marks eight?? She knew at least 15 seconds had passed, and imagined she wouldn?t be given a full sixty seconds. She looked around frantically, and saw something green glitter right under her. She dove and picked up the two remaining green Rupees. ?Time?s up!? she heard from up the waterfall. She triumphantly held up her collected Rupees. ?Oh, you did it! Good job. Come back up, I?ve got a prize for you,? the Zora yelled. She got out of the water and walked back up the winding path. As she walked, Saria noticed that her wet clothes were unpleasantly tight and moving around in them was annoying. But she soon forgot as she reached the Zora, who handed her something flat and oval-shaped. It was transparent, and silvery blue. ?Because you?ve proven yourself worthy, here is a Zora?s Scale!? the Zora said. ?Maybe you can give it to the Gerudo woman over here? It would make much finer decoration than that bottle of milk,? he chuckled. Saria glanced at the milk bottle in between of Nabooru?s breasts. Nabooru quickly removed it and handed it to Saria. ?Mind carrying it in your pocket?? she asked. ?Of course,? Saria said. ?And don?t worry, I can carry the Zora?s Scale as well.? Cheerfully, the both of them went back down. Nabooru wasn?t particularly happy to have to go through the tunnel again, but Saria felt she could face any water-related danger now. They went through the tunnel much like before and soon stood by the edge of Lake Hylia again. It was late in the afternoon, but the day was still clear and bright. Though they did not speak, Nabooru?s bodyguards seemed very relieved to see her return safely. Nabooru had been to many places and learned many skills, but most of the Gerudo couldn?t even swim. Nabooru felt unsure about leaving the Gerudo Fortress for this long, so she sent one of her bodyguards to get a report on anything that might be wrong. ?The rest of the ingredients are pretty easy to get?? Nabooru said, reading the list again. ?I have a plan. I?ll bring you to Kokiri Forest, where you can get a Deku Nut, Deku Stick and an oak tree?s leaf. I?ll head back to the desert and retrieve pure water, a coconut (the list says any fruit will do) and a palm tree leaf. Then we?ll meet up tomorrow,? Nabooru explained. Saria agreed, but she wasn?t particularly happy being reminded of Kokiri Forest. As she mounted the horse, she wondered. Would the Kokiri children believe her if she told them who she was? Would they begin ignoring her because she was an adult? These thoughts flashed through her head as the trip began. Saria wondered if the horses weren?t extremely tired by now. The horses didn?t seem to mind running long distances, however, especially after the long break in which they could eat lots of grass. Nabooru couldn?t help glancing around and behind her on the occasion. The curse wouldn?t just sit around, doing nothing, he was obviously doing something right now. But what? Even Nabooru?s bodyguard looked troubled. After several long minutes of pondering, they arrived at the entrance to the Kokiri Forest. ?Well, take care, kid,? Nabooru said. ?If you see anything wearing a black cloak, be sure to stay hidden.? With those words, she turned and left. Saria felt a cold shiver going down her spine as the sun finally began to fall behind the horizon. |
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Re: Midna BE Story
Hee hee, excellent chapter. But I wonder if the curse is through altering those two?
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Re: Midna BE Story
I DOUBT it very seriously.
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Re: Midna BE Story
Nabooru + Scale in cleavage = GARDEVOIR
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Re: Midna BE Story
THE TRUTH HAS COME OUT
... anyway. I'm writing longer chapters to get to Malon's transformation faster, but it's still taking time. Be patient and enjoy this completely sick Saria chapter first. Saria?s bare feet hardly made a sound on the wooden boards of the old bridge. She sincerely hoped no Kokiri were up and about. She was in no mood to explain her situation, especially if the chance it could get worse still existed. The carefully peered around the quiet village, which looked so pleasant and familiar under the setting sun. She gasped as it turned her luck had run out. A group of four Kokiri was patrolling around the village, shouting her name. She hadn?t been trained in stealth, and her dress kind of stood out in the otherwise green area. But she had to try and wait for the right moment. She quickly snuck behind a house and observed the group. It was quite a run to the entrance to the Lost Woods, and it would require a climb. ?Saria?!? shouted a bossy sounding Kokiri who Saria recognized as Mido. ?Maybe she?s still in the Lost Woods?? another Kokiri suggested. The other Kokiri agreed that this might be possible, and they all climbed up the wall and went into the Lost Woods. ?Hey, someone should stay behind in case she comes back,? Saria heard Mido say. Saria saw a stocky, red haired Kokiri climb back down and look around. ?That?ll make things a lot harder than they could?ve been?? Saria said, sighing once or twice and looking around the edge of her hiding place again. She observed that the situation might not be hopeless, because the Kokiri was not standing still. He mindlessly walked about. Saria decided to make a dash for the wall and climb as fast as she could the moment the Kokiri was far away enough. When the Kokiri had begun jumping over the stones in the small lake that lay nearby, Saria decided it was now or never. She made a mad dash for the wall, and climbed up as fast as she could. The moment she arrived on top, she heard a voice. ?Hey!? yelled the Kokiri who apparently couldn?t have missed a shapely woman running past him. Saria kept running. Soon she was in the Lost Woods. She saw the search party led by Mido just a few yards to her right, so she dove to the left path which led to two tree trunks- one tall and one short- standing in an open area. She hid behind the larger one and listened. The search party seemed to have moved away, and apparently the Kokiri standing guard wasn?t in the mood for chasing them down. But then she heard footsteps coming from the quiet, darker part of the woods to her right. It was a Skull Kid with a mask that looked like an animal skull, and it looked like it was going to attack. ?Wait! It?s me! It?s me! Saria!? Saria quickly said, frozen with fear. The Skull Kid stopped. He removed his mask and stared at her. ?Saria? What? what has happened to you?? the Skull Kid asked. ?It?s a long story? but I was cursed and that?s how I got to be in this state,? Saria said. ?Oh dear. I better tell the other Skull Kids. If they see an adult, they?ll attack immediately?? the Skull Kid muttered. Saria was amazed at how lightly the Skull Kid seemed to take the matter. Then she got a plan. ?Do you want to help me out?? she asked. The Skull Kid nodded. ?Can you find me a Deku Nut and a Deku Stick?? she asked. The Skull Kid hesitantly agreed. The items being very common, the Skull Kid had brought them back in a matter of minutes. ?The Kokiri are looking for you, Saria. I suppose you?ll want to remain unseen from them for the time being?? the Skull Kid said, handing her a Deku Nut and Deku Stick. Saria nodded. ?Alright. That?ll be a fun game! Here?s the plan? you will go north from here until you reach a ledge. Climb down the ladder. Us Skull Kids will guide the search party to our side of the wood and keep them there for as long as we can,? he suggested, quite excited. Saria had never expected the Skull Kids? love for mischief could actually help her for once, but agreed to the plan, since she still had to find a leaf of an oak tree. She climbed down the ladder as instructed, and soon heard the search party passing by guided by a Skull Kid. She couldn?t help but chuckle a little as she climbed back up the ladder and went deeper into the forest. Right by a small pool, she knew she could find an old oak. As she walked, she began worrying about the Curse again. She wondered how fast the Curse could move. It had been going in the direction of Gerudo Valley, but if it flew as Nabooru had described, it could be in the Lost Woods already. She became very nervous and started looking around. She began running, and mentally thanked goodness her dress covered her cleavage so none of the falling leaves would fall in. Just when she was about to calm down, she nearly fell in the small pool she had been looking for and had to make a sudden stop. She had to recover from a shock a few moments, and then observed her surroundings again. There was a beautiful old oak tree standing right by the pool, as she knew. She breathed a sigh of relief as though it might?ve disappeared. She picked a handful of freshly fallen oak leaves and put it in her pocket with the milk bottle and Zora?s scale. She breathed in, and faced the way back when her worst fears suddenly became realized. Right there, mere yards away, stood the black cloaked figure she had seen at the Ranch. She heard breathing from under the dark hood, but she couldn?t see anything human about it. She just stood there, petrified, and the Curse seemed content to do the same for some minutes. Finally, a sigh came out from under the hood. ?You are set and intent upon plotting my destruction, aren?t you?? Saria was confused. It seemed that the Curse had a different attitude from before. There was a tone in his voice that held deep anger, but also loneliness. ?But, I will survive. And I will gain more power, whether you do or don?t help me...? he said in almost a whisper. Then, in almost a shout, he added: ?Now! I do believe I promised you my undivided attention. Enjoy!? he said, making a gesture with his arm. ?AAAIEEEEEEEE?!? Saria shrieked, as she fell on her knees. A strangely pleasant but forceful feeling surged through her entire body. ?No?? she protested as she felt her body grow again. In one horrid moment where she could still think about it, she made an altruistic decision. In a few swift moves, she undid the precious old buttons of her dress and threw it off. The Curse didn?t seem to care- it stood perfectly still, just staring. She felt her legs grow even longer and her entire length increasing, which perplexed her, but she was in no mood to ask the Curse. She felt her bottom become broader and rounder even more, and her breasts too were steadily increasing in size. She tried to look at her rear, to find that her hair was long enough to partially be laying on the ground. Two locks grew over her shoulders, and were tied in a knot in her cleavage. She tried to undo the knot, but it wouldn?t budge. She was only growing longer and longer. She stood up to her full length, and the world turned black for a few brief moments. She nearly fell over because of the dizziness, but she only just managed to stay standing. As her breasts just kept increasing in size, and her hips and buttocks kept on swelling she felt this had to stop right away. ?STOOOP!? she shrieked desperately. She panted and observed that apparently, her request had been heard. She saw the Curse had moved. It stood by the pond, seemingly looking down in it. ?Come and look at the water,? it said. Saria didn?t know why, but something about his voice sounded deep and different again. She came and stood beside him. She did, and the water seemed to be strangely reflective. She could see her entire, nude voluptuous body in the water. And when she turned sideways to see how her body looked from the side, something strange clicked in her head. She saw, in her movements, something strangely graceful and almost exciting. The skin on her breasts, buttocks, and her body in general was silky smooth and seemed to beautifully reflect the first stars and moon that had appeared in the night?s sky. The curve in her back was perfect- in fact, every curve in her body was perfect. She stood staring at herself completely entranced. This could?ve lasted for hours, but then, the image in the water became muddled and changed. She saw herself, standing on the bridge between Hyrule Field and Kokiri Forest. Besides three leaves covering her most vital parts, she wore absolutely nothing. A handsome young man entered the bridge from Hyrule Field, and as soon as he saw her, stood completely still. Saria noticed that the man was rather more of a boy, 17 years of age at most. He wore green and had a friendly solemn face. His arms and legs were unusually masculine for someone his age, however. So they looked at each other for a time. Then, Link fell to his knees, and offered her something. Saria squinted to see what the small and gold object was. It was a ring. ?What does it mean??? Saria whispered gazing into the water. The Curse still said nothing. Soon, the scene changed to something that deeply disturbed Saria. The pool turned almost completely black. She could only make out some vague shapes, but she heard sounds rising up from the pool. The most prominent sounds were moans. She gasped as she heard it was her own voice. She was temporarily broken from her trance and looked at the Curse, who still was looking at the pool. ?Keep watching. All will be explained,? it whispered. Saria kept watching as the scene changed again. She saw herself at a doctor in Hyrule Castle Town. Link was with her. They held hands and smiled. Saria was amazed at how incredibly large her breasts and hips really were, but Link didn?t even seem to take notice. The scene changed again, and Saria sat in her own house with Link. She gasped, because this time, something else about her was big. Specifically, her belly. It stuck out like a sphere attached to her body. She had seen a pregnant woman before, so she knew what this meant. The scene changed one last time, with Link and Saria sitting in her home with two babies ? each suckling on one of her now even more massive breasts. Link massaged her shoulders and stroked her hair, and kissed her on the cheek. Finally, the image faded and Saria looked at herself again. She almost fainted because of how bizarre it all was. ?Was that? the future?? she asked. ?Yes? and no. It?s a future I made possible for you,? the Curse said, turning to her. Saria frowned. ?Didn?t I tell you my goal is to serve happiness? Do you believe me now that I have shown you this?? the Curse said. Saria had to swallow a few times because her throat was quite dry, and she slowly began to speak. ?I think that you have a distorted image of what happiness really means. To begin with, you could?ve offered me that future without giving me enormous breasts and a big rear end? you could?ve just made me old enough,? Saria explained. ?Oh, yes, but we have to be altruistic? I?m offering you that future, but if that is the future you?re going for you might as well let a lot of people enjoy it also?? the Curse defended. ?By what? Making me an object of lust?? Saria responded, getting a little angry. ?You need not lie to me. You yourself just admired how you looked. I saw the way you moved, the way you looked? the look in your eyes was not unlike that of a hungry man!? the Curse said, apparently getting irritated by this conversation. ?Those are feelings that you abuse to justify your means! And anyway, you have no right to just cast this future onto someone. If you want to do the things you do, justifiably, you?ll have to ask someone beforehand and not do anything unnecessary,? Saria went on. ?But there are so many women who are not offered such a future because the selfishness of men! Shouldn?t women have the power to, in their turn, refuse them when they come crawling back?? the Curse went on. ?You can keep harping on the same point over and over, but not everyone ? not nearly everyone ? wants the things that you offer. There are advantages, but the disadvantages are too significant to just throw them on someone. You have no right to do so!? Saria said. ?I guess it was too much to ask from a little girl to understand that the needs of the one are nothing in compare to the needs of the many. Imagine how many people you can bring joy, and yourself also! But I will not hear any more,? the Curse said angrily. ?Your ideas are twisted and even the simplest soul can see through them,? Saria said, not hiding her disgust for this creature anymore. ?Talking about simple souls, I paid a visit to the Ranch again. I had a lot of fun there, I have to say?? the Curse said, hardly hiding a laugh. ?And once I have a third person completely in my grasp, my power will grow even more yet?? he added, turning and floating away. ?A third person? Did you--?? Saria was about to ask, but the Curse was already out of sight. ?This cannot wait until tomorrow. I need to speak to Nabooru immediately!? she said to herself. |
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Re: Midna BE Story
WOW great chapter, I like the vision she saw, it made me wonder if she was gonna agree to the curse and stuff
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Re: Midna BE Story
That! Was! Awesome!
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