Hide 'n Grow. - Page 2

DragonMasterX · 08-29-2010

Well, I intended it to be a thread for people to read and discuss the narration I made, not discuss the comic Ryuakira drew, lol.

In my defense, the comic doesn't precisely focus on the macro growth (Instead does so at the last few pages) and it goes on finely depicting the muscle expansion, but my adaptation mixes it all into healthy proportions, or so I'd like to think.

Like I said in the note at my first reply, I was undecided about where to put this, so if there's a conflict of any kind, it can be moved.

Quantum Heart · 08-29-2010

No offense to the OP, but I didn't really read your story... I don't usually read macro stories (or really any erotic fiction) as a general rule so it's not a slight against your writing, just not where my interests lie. Also, I know it's to the specifications of the dude who did the commission but... a Guilmon with hair looks very strange to me. But the guy's FA page does have a lot of growth and macro (some muscly) that I found more to my personal tastes, so it turned out to be worth it. Thanks!

DragonMasterX · 08-29-2010

Okay...

Any more comments on the story, then? D:

geno13 · 08-29-2010

Well, I enjoyed it. Anthro is usually not up my alley, but I do like to delve into BE/GTS of any flavor, so I found this to be a real treat.

DragonMasterX · 08-30-2010

I've found that to actually be most of my readers' case here; they don't like anthro but still enjoy the process.

Well, if that means people here will still read and comment, can't be all that bad, huh?

08-29-2010	#13
DragonMasterX Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mar del Plata, Buenos Aires, Argentina Posts: 219	Re: Hide 'n Grow. Well, I intended it to be a thread for people to read and discuss the narration I made, not discuss the comic Ryuakira drew, lol. In my defense, the comic doesn't precisely focus on the macro growth (Instead does so at the last few pages) and it goes on finely depicting the muscle expansion, but my adaptation mixes it all into healthy proportions, or so I'd like to think. Like I said in the note at my first reply, I was undecided about where to put this, so if there's a conflict of any kind, it can be moved.

08-29-2010	#14
Quantum Heart froppy Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 230	Re: Hide 'n Grow. No offense to the OP, but I didn't really read your story... I don't usually read macro stories (or really any erotic fiction) as a general rule so it's not a slight against your writing, just not where my interests lie. Also, I know it's to the specifications of the dude who did the commission but... a Guilmon with hair looks very strange to me. But the guy's FA page does have a lot of growth and macro (some muscly) that I found more to my personal tastes, so it turned out to be worth it. Thanks!

08-29-2010	#15
DragonMasterX Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mar del Plata, Buenos Aires, Argentina Posts: 219	Re: Hide 'n Grow. Okay... Any more comments on the story, then? D:

08-29-2010	#16
geno13 Milky Meister Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 4,511	Re: Hide 'n Grow. Well, I enjoyed it. Anthro is usually not up my alley, but I do like to delve into BE/GTS of any flavor, so I found this to be a real treat. __________________ DA Account (Stories and Commissions) - The Council Rp Forum - 3DS Friend Code: 3067 - 4780 - 9062

08-30-2010	#17
DragonMasterX Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mar del Plata, Buenos Aires, Argentina Posts: 219	Re: Hide 'n Grow. I've found that to actually be most of my readers' case here; they don't like anthro but still enjoy the process. Well, if that means people here will still read and comment, can't be all that bad, huh?