Golden Sequence (Story) - Page 2

grimmy · 04-11-2013

Loving the story so far! Please keep it going!

Grbldena · 04-11-2013

Pretty fantastic work.

Minor criticisms: I'll admit, I'm not an expert, but the idea of her screaming about her hair and other small details... just seemed a little odd to me. Maybe an alteration of wording would have helped, but... yeah... just a little thing like that adds and/or takes away from the story and experience.

Otherwise it's a solid, sexy, splendid work. Keep it up good sir.

casperp · 11-12-2016

Sorry for the necro, flame me to bits in recompense, but does anyone know if this fantastic story was ever finished? I've been checking can for a long time now, and still hold hope for an update.

04-11-2013	#13
grimmy Lurker Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 12	Re: Golden Sequence (Story) Loving the story so far! Please keep it going!

04-11-2013	#14
Grbldena Tounge Tied Tit Lover Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 6	Re: Golden Sequence (Story) Pretty fantastic work. Minor criticisms: I'll admit, I'm not an expert, but the idea of her screaming about her hair and other small details... just seemed a little odd to me. Maybe an alteration of wording would have helped, but... yeah... just a little thing like that adds and/or takes away from the story and experience. Otherwise it's a solid, sexy, splendid work. Keep it up good sir.

11-12-2016	#15
casperp Lurker Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 22	Re: Golden Sequence (Story) Sorry for the necro, flame me to bits in recompense, but does anyone know if this fantastic story was ever finished? I've been checking can for a long time now, and still hold hope for an update.