Angela's first day (My new series.)

[Kevin_Generic]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

Page 1 &2 are good!
Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying.
So far so good!

Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression.
Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings.
She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it.
Or she is not capable to understand the situation.

At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut.
For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed.

These are my suggestions what could be improved.
Hope it was helpful.

Greetings

Captain Ash

Yeah I think the problem is I didn't want to zoom in too much to make the shrinking more apparent, so the facial expression is not as clear as it could be. I was hoping the high soft curved eye brows would look less like an annoyed expression but I guess not? xD Thanks for the feed back though, next time I'll be way more prepared.

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Also, page 5! http://fav.me/d7e3das

My first time doing a hand held shrunken girl, I hope I got it right. xD

[zdarkness]

I have complete confidence that her host is telling the absolute truth and isn't hiding anything at all.

[Kevin_Generic]

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I always loved the combination of shrinking + BE, maybe I'm weird? xD

[scidram]

I like the series so far. Wonder what her boss has in store for her next.

Nicely done, and thanks for sharing.

[zdarkness]

Soooo....

>_>

<_<

How does one go about fiddling with those proportion files for 3DCG~?

[Kevin_Generic]

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I'm really enjoying the BE/shrinking mix. Hope you all like.

[Kevin_Generic]

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