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12-01-2015
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Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
More stories like...? Which part is the "like this" that you were hoping for more of? And, actually, originally it was just going to be her going to the party and just infecting Jason. No demons or anything involved. How things change
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12-01-2015
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Join Date: Jan 2015
Location: Potatoe world
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Like the end part with a lot of people being transformed or something
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12-02-2015
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Process Master
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Really great story! The ending was a surprise but not at all an unpleasant one. I got a really great horror B-movie vibe from the whole thing.
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12-02-2015
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Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
@770megaman - I have one other story with a mass transformation called The Gift that you might like if you enjoyed a bunch going at once. All werewolves. I think I posted it here but, if not, it's going to be on my own website or FA or DA or somewhere as well.
@blackshirtboy - Thank you so much! Yay! It was a kind of B-movie horror story. And, man, I wouldn't mind seeing it as a movie Well, maybe minus the bugs at the end. That might be creepy. But, slow corruption with a furry were-rat type lady and temptation driving her to sin? Yessssss Glad you liked it
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12-02-2015
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Enjoyable read. I liked it.
Going from innocent to sin makes it all the better. And who can resist a cute were-rat girl. :P |
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12-03-2015
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Lurker
Join Date: Sep 2007
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Personally I prefered the first chapter more then the rest of it. Once things ramped up and the tf actually became linked to evil, loss of self, and world conquest instead of just being a girls confusion about her body, it kind of lost me.
It seems from your comments that you origionally were going to stay in the same vein as the first chapter, but others seem to like the way things ended up.
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12-04-2015
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 423
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
i really liked it. it hit just about all my TF buttons
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12-04-2015
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Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
@Pedestal_Guy - yeah, I don't often do loss of self stories but I like them occasionally and after thinking about the story a bit (after chapter 1) I decided that that's the way it'd go. One of those things where I like changing things up occasionally to try different ideas. I'm glad you at least liked the first chapter!
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12-05-2015
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Process Master
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 709
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Reading it now. Really enjoying it.
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12-05-2015
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Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Thank you! Would love to hear what you think when you're done!
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12-28-2015
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Process Master
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 709
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Re: Filth [Story / Rat]
Sorry to necro-post. Absolutely loved it.
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12-29-2015
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Process Master
Join Date: May 2005
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Well done
Good stuff. Interesting take with the ratvision and pack mentality at the end. Touching in a twisted way.
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