My First Story: The Moon Coin

[Rei-Lin]

There's a couple more parts, and both are a little rough I think, I haven't had enough time to fine tune them yet, but I figured I'd put them up anyway. I know there's not a lot of transformation in the last two parts, but I thought it'd be a good idea to add a little more to the story and some history to the ring, for a sense of just what it could do. Tell me again, what you think, and of course throw suggestions out there as to what things she could turn into, or if I should focus on something else for the transformations, as I tend to focus a lot on the details of transformation since it's rare to get a lot of detail in stories. Thanks for the comments so far, I appreciate it.

[Dragon FangX]

From the sound of it, the ring can do almost anything physically to her. That means she can shrink down, becoming a mouse or cockroach or even a fish. One of those options would be nice as would an AR or AP transformation would be nice.

But hey, its you story, do what you want to do. ^^

[transfnight]

Really nice story. With the last part we understand clearly how the ring work. I hope to see more of it. Don't give up ^_^

[jimi20]

Easily one of the best stories i have read in some time

[SimRam]

nice. The more is posted the better i like it.


(late reply as i was unable to Reply because of a Email change validation error)

[Karbon]

I really enjoyed this story! I'd love to see more parts written!

[_Hiro_]

So far I love it...

You've got a lot of room to explore different changes with this too. Pixies/Fae... Full animal and anthro... Who knows what else?

[Rei-Lin]

~~~~~~~~~~~~PART VI~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sally's classes were going great as the month went on. Her medical studies were hard, but important, and the few elective classes she had were enough to keep her awake. During her off time, Sally had been spending some time at the university library, looking up all sorts of things to do with transformation. She looked into all sorts of creatures: dragons, gryphons, snakes, gorgans, wolves, sabertoothed cats, and any other creature whether they exist, existed or were just myth or legend. Sally was amazed to find out just how far the human imagination had gone, coming up with all types of creatures. It gave her some ideas on what to wish for and as the full moon day was approaching and Sally would have to come up with something exciting to become. In fact, she had come to depend on the coin's wishes as a sort of reality check. It seemed that between the wishes, Sally would always take things for granted, saying things to herself or outloud out of anger or frustration. Of course later she thought how stupid she felt saying those things, without realizing that her life could be even worse. Some animals never have much of a choice on how to live, and usually just focus on survival. They don't do the things humans do, and turning into them made her feel that even though things weren't always wine and roses, she wouldn't want to give up her humanity forever.

The full moon was tonight, and it was good that it was falling on a Friday night so Sally could have a nice quiet weekend. She finished most of her homework during the afternoon, and she'd finish studying over the weekend as she usually did anyway. However as the moon was slowly rising over the horizon and the coin regained it's usual glow, Sally knew what she'd be spending her time doing tonight. One thing that caught Sally's eye in one of the books was some pictures and descriptions of old gods that people used to worship. Though she didn't really want to become a God or anything, it was the description of how powerful they were that made her start to think of what it would be like to have a ripped body. One book had mentioned something along the lines that there used to be powerful women known as Amazons, and they were tall and muscular, and it was that idea that Sally was thinking of taking and running with. In fact, since she'd been thinking of it for the last few days, Sally had made a small stop on the way home to pick up a few old clothes from the Goodwill store. They were sort of small on her, but they still fit. In the back of Sally's mind, she knew what she was going to do and she giggled as she slipped on the tight shirt and jeans before heading into the bathroom.

The moonlight was starting to filter into the room, and the coin was warm in her hand as usual. Sally thought that tonight she should go all out and do something out of the ordinary, just to get some class frustrations out of her system. Sally closed her eyes, took in a breath and as she exhaled, she whispered to herself "I wish I would change into an Amazon woman with giant muscles, tanned skin, really long hair, and giant breasts." As always, the warm feeling spread from her hand over Sally's entire body and the sudden shock into her hand from the coin confirmed that her wish was granted. Sally placed the coin down onto the counter and looked into the mirror.

As Sally stared into the mirror, she felt her heartbeat speed up, and she could see beads of sweat starting to form on her brow and neck. In seconds she was starting to pant as her nipples began to harden, easily showing through her tight shirt. Her pussy started to get wet and Sally felt her clit swelling, becoming erect. Sweat was starting to run down her face and arms as the warmth began to turn into a burning sensation that spread over her from head to toe. Her shirt was starting to become wet with sweat, and Sally could only moan as her pussy began to soak the crotch of her pants with her love juices. Looking up at the mirror, Sally saw her flesh starting to pulsate and could see that her face was starting to become more toned, making her look slightly older. She could hear a strange sound and noticed that it was from her hair growing longer. It began to flow down to her shoulders, becoming thick and straight as it grew. In seconds it was past her shoulders and neck and was still growing.

Sally looked down at her arms as they too began to pulsate with oncoming change. She looked at her hand and watched as her nails began to thicken and grow longer, out to almost an inch long. The nails on Sally's other hand did the same, giving her perfectly manicured nails in seconds. Sally moaned as she watched her veins puff up along the underside of her arm as they filled with blood, causing the muscles to grow larger. She watched as her arms tensed up and grew bigger and bigger. Her biceps began to grow larger, and Sally felt the blood rushing into them as her veins puffed up on the top of her skin, like those of a body builder. Looking back into the mirror Sally watched as her neck began to puff up and gain mass as did her shoulders which had already began to pull her already tight shirt even tighter across her chest. Sally moaned as she watched her nipples harden further than she thought possible pushing the shirt out several inches more. She watched as her breasts began to grow larger, she could feel the rush of blood going down her neck and into her chest the heat of which was really turning her on.

Sally continued to stare into the mirror as her breasts continued to grow larger, straining the fabric of her shirt to its limits. The small shirt was already soaked with sweat and small holes were forming between her increasing cleavage. Sally could hear the shirt ripping as her breasts continued to swell, and it wasn't long before the sleaves ripped apart at the seams as her shoulders pushed out, gaining muscles as hard as steel. The seam continued around her neck and with a small moan as Sally's breasts inflated again, the small holes on the front of the shirt ripped all the way up her torso before sliding off of her now massive chest and onto the floor. Sally could only stare at her new upper body in the mirror. Her breasts were now at least DD cups and were heading past F cups as she watched, and it seemed as though they still weren't stopping their growth. She noticed her hair was now hanging almost halfway down her chest in the front, and could feel it starting to touch the the base of her back. A pressure in her back forced Sally to lean over the sink slightly, and she could feel her back muscles tense up and then begin to grow. The pressure moved across her shoulders, then slowly down her back as every muscle grew larger and larger on the way. The pressure stopped at her buttocks and Sally felt even they were tensing up and then growing larger, straining her jeans a bit. Sally reached back and squeezed the cheeks of her ass and they felt as hard as rocks and just touching them made Sally moan from the pleasure.

Sally felt her stomach tense up and when she looked into the mirror she watched as her ribs suddenly grew out some, and became very defined in muscle. The burning sensation continued to spread lower and she watched as her stomach muscles began to puff out, then grow large and hard. It took only seconds for her abdomen to harden into a very well defined six pack of pure muscle. The heat then moved further down and she felt her jeans digging into her side as her hips and legs began to gain mass. Sally felt her pussy gain mass as well, becoming much stronger and she couldn't help sliding a couple fingers into it, making her bite her lip from the pleasure it gave her. The muscles lining her vagina were definitely stronger and she squeezed her fingers far harder than she ever could have before. Sally wasn't even finished with her transformation and she was already cumming all over her hand. She threw her head back and groaned as it hit her and the strain on her jeans caused the zipper to unzip itself and the button to break off, tinking off the mirror. Sally's new buldging leg muscles kept the tight jeans from sliding all the way down, but as she looked back down and felt the heat moving further down her legs, she felt her calf muscles buldge out causing the jeans to rip up the seam to her knees. Sally grabbed the tattered jeans and in one swift tug, she ripped them completely off, which surprised her. Sally couldn't believe just how powerful she had become, and was starting to wonder if maybe she wished to become too powerful.

A creaking and cracking sound brought Sally's attention back to the mirror. Sally watched in amazement as her entire body burned and began to gain in height. Sally could only stare as she watched her legs grow longer, and her torso and arms lengthend. As she gained height, Sally also noticed that her hair was still growing, and now reached down to the back of her knees. It was long and straight, thick and beautiful. Sally felt the growth slowing down, and just before her head touched the ceiling, she felt it stop. Sally figured it was over, but the warmth moved back down to her breasts, which had continued a slow growth all throughout the change, but now they began to swell much faster, making her moan as she watched her hard nipples grow out at least another half an inch. Sally could only stare as she watched them continue to balloon outwards for several seconds before the warmth moved downwards and the growth finally stopped leaving her breasts in the J cup range, but still very firm and muscular. The warmth moved straight down to Sally's pussy and it made her gasp in pleasure. It felt as though she was in heaven for a brief moment before the warmth again spread quickly over her entire body. Sally watched in the mirror as her skin began to darken from it's usual semi-pale white color to a deep rich brown tan, making her look like she'd spent two weeks on a beach somewhere. The warmth then faded away leaving Sally staring into the mirror at a seven and a half foot tall, tanned, muscular and very sexy looking Amazon woman with long black hair that reached almost to the floor. Sally couldn't help but think that she really did seem to look like one of the Goddesses in the books she'd read in the library.

Sally had to crouch down to make it out of the bathroom and into her bedroom where the full length mirror was. As she stood naked in front of the mirror the moonlight flooding into the room made her body glow with a powerful aura. Sally ran her hands over her body and felt the pure energy of each muscle as it moved under her skin. She ran her hands through her incredibly long black hair and felt how powerful even the strands of her hair were. Her hair was very straight and full and gleamed when the light hit it. As she ran her hands over her breasts she was amazed to find that though they were very large compared to any normal woman's, they were firm yet soft, not big balls of muscle. Her nipples were quite dark and she could tell they were already hard as she twisted them in her fingers, which sent sexual shivers down her entire body. She decided to stop thinking about sex for a minute and Sally did the only thing she could think of and struck a goofy body builder pose, watching as her muscles tensed up and made her look even bigger than she already was. A few more poses and Sally was conviced that she was most likely the most powerful Amazon on Earth. Sally felt uncomfortable and decided that this time, though she did look out of the ordinary, she wanted to go outside for a bit. She grabbed one of her bed sheets and wrapped it around herself. The sheet barely covered her upper torso and stopped just past her crotch.

Sally decided to go out the backdoor so she wouldn't be seen. Again she had to practically crawl on her hands and knees to make it out the small door, but once she got outside and stood up, Sally felt very invigorated. Her sight was better as was her hearing and sense of smell, though only because she was so much bigger all around, not really because she was more than a big human. Sally walked over to the edge of the woods and carefully made her way into them, listening as she snapped twigs and branches as she walked over them. Sally noticed that even barefoot, she had no trouble walking over the sharp objects on the forest floor as if she was wearing boots. She figured that maybe she was a little more impervious to some things because of how muscular she was. Further behind her little house there was a little pond, and as she reached it she made sure to look around to make sure nobody else happened to be around. After that, Sally walked over to the water and found it to be surprisingly clear and the moon reflected off of it and the surrounding foliage, creating a very pretty atmosphere. Sally decided to try out her new body, and walked over to a rather large fallen tree. Bending down, she gripped it tightly and tried to lift it up, which to her surprise wasn't hard at all. The tree, even dead was still pretty solid, but to Sally it felt like it was made of foam it was so light. Sally twirled it around her head without any trouble at all before sitting it back down out of the way.

Sally couldn't believe that she was so strong, and decided to try something else. Sally stood on the edge of the pond, crouched down, and then sprang forward, easily clearing the entire pond and landing on the other side. Sally gasped at the fact that she was more than just a big human, she was indeed boarding on super human. Deciding to try yet another idea, Sally took off her sheet, and leaped into the pond, submerging herself underwater. Sally kept track of how long she could hold her breath, and just as she thought she couldn't hold it any longer, she surfaced with a time of almost 20 minutes. Sally laid back in the water, floating easily on top despite her weight. She stared up at the full moon and it's beauty while thinking of all the wonderful things she had experienced, and all the wonderful things her new found coin could bring her. The words the spirit had told her resonated even stronger now, as she saw that the coin could do just about anything she wanted without her even meaning it to. It was designed more for a sense of protection, so it seemed that any wish came with the added benefit of being better than the normal version of what she changed into. She giggled to herself as she thought of how funny it'd be to be a "super" mouse or fly of some sort. Sally was definitely glad that in the day and time she lived, it wasn't as necessary to defend a village or a town by transforming into creatures to kill people, and again she shivered at the thought of ever doing so.

Sally floated around in the pond for hours before deciding it was getting late. She got out and let herself stand naked in the moonlight as she slowly dried in the slight breeze of the woods. It wasn't long before she was dry and Sally wrapped the sheet back up around herself before heading back to the house. She snuck slowly back inside, again on her hands and knees, and decided that using her bed would only end with a broken bed, so she took another couple of sheets into the living room, and laid out on the floor. It didn't take long before Sally was asleep, dreaming again of her transformation and it's meanings, the power, the beauty, and the dangers of what she possessed. The full moon sank behind the horizon, and as the sun broke the night sky with it's light, Sally slowly shifted back to her normal self, allowing her to cuddle fully under the sheets as she grinned slightly as she slept.

[Rei-Lin]

-------------Part VII-----------------


Another month had almost flown by for Sally, and her classes had really ramped up into full speed. She had already done four research papers between her 5 classes. and there were at least 5 more due by the end of the quarter. Sally felt really tired and stressed since her last transformation and was really looking forward to blowing off some of that stress with another wish. Though Sally fell into the same hardships as everybody else, she was happy to know that she wasn't the only one that she could relate to. She'd met a few nice people in her various classes and was glad she had them to study with, as it helped make the best of all the classwork. But even with her new friends, the coin and her wishes were something she was still keeping to herself, not because of them, but because of what she was afraid might happen if they knew the power she had. Sally wasn't thinking of being selfish, but she knew there was always the posibility that she could wish something out of frustration without meaning to, and put her friends in a bad situation. Sally could never forgive herself if she was to hurt somebody else because of her own shortcomings. Friday night was here and the full moon would be rising soon as Sally wished her friends a good weekend and headed for home. It was a short drive, and the moon was already in the sky as she pulled in, got out and made it inside the house, letting her backpack fall into the beanbag chair by the window.

Sally sighed some relief as she sat down on her love seat, looking at the glowing coin in it's ring mount on her finger. Sally wanted to make a wish, but wasn't even sure what to wish for at the moment. She'd been so busy with her studies that she really hadn't gotten a chance to make it back to the library to look up any other interesting creatures. There were thousands of things or even people she could become, but she couldn't really think of any one thing in particular that stood out. Sally thought a bit and decided to do something out of the ordinary. Ever since her first wish, she hadn't done anything much in the way of sexuality. Sure, that first wish to have a penis like a horse was pretty awesome, but Sally still didn't know how it might work the other way around. She was still pretty nervous around guys, so much so that she was really starting to think she was a lesbian. Sally thought that the best thing she could do was relieve some tension with sex, but had no idea how to do it at first. She didn't want to do it with some guy, and she was certain none of her immediate friends were lesbians, but at the same time, she wasn't completely turned off to the fact of having some rough sex. Sally closed her eyes and thought hard about what she wanted to do, it was another deep desire, something odd and strange, and she couldn't get it completely out of her head. Sally opened her eyes and had an idea, she knew what she was going to try. Sally got up and went into the bathroom, stripped off her clothes and took the ring off, holding it in her hand.

Sally closed her eyes and thought about how to say her wish, then whispered outloud "I wish my hair would grow all the way to the floor and that I could use my hair to do anything I demanded, making it form into anything I wanted, my breasts would fill with delicious milk until they were three times as big as now, my vaginal muscles would be much stronger and I would crave sex until sunrise." Sally blushed as she felt the warmth spread down her hand and then across her entire body, her hand getting the usual shock. She opened her eyes and placed the coin onto the counter and stared into the mirror, thinking how embarassing this wish must have sounded.

It was only a few minutes before Sally's heart began to beat faster, sweat forming across her brow and chest, quickly spreading across her naked body. Her nipples hardened, her clit became swollen and erect and her pussy became wet. Sally watched in the mirror and could hear the sound of her hair beginning to grow, pushing out of her scalp, growing down into her face, then down past her shoulders in seconds. Sally turned slightly as her hair continued to grow down her back, down to her ass, then further down to her knees before slowing to a stop as it reached floor. Sally had a thought and almost instantly her hair moved upwards on it's own and wrapped around her arms. Sally gasped slightly as she realized that she could actually control her hair, strand for strand, like long tentacles.

Before she could continue her tests, a tingling in her crotch brought Sally's attention back to the mirror. Sally felt her pussy burning with heat and felt as the muscles in her vagina puffed up, and grew larger inside her warm folds. Sally reached instinctively down and pushed her fingers inside and felt that her pussy was a lot stronger than before, almost as strong as when she was an Amazon.

The heat spread upwards and Sally moaned as she felt it centering on her breasts. She felt something flowing into them and she could hear a slight gurgling sound as her breasts began to produce milk. Her nipples hardened further than normal, growing out to over two inches, and Sally watched as they turned a slight purple color and began to throb. Her skin stetched outwards as their weight increased pulling her skin tighter and tighter. Her breasts continued to fill with milk, making her chest feel hot and heavy. Sally could only watch as the veins on her chest began to show more and more as the milk continued to expand her skin. Sally could only moan as she felt the milk filling her breasts as it felt wonderful. Slowly her breasts began to stop growing just as they had reached three times their normal size as Sally had wished. They were now very large F cups and hung down quite a bit from the weight of the milk. She reached up somewhat hesistant and squeezed them, being rewarded quickly with two little steams of hot milk shooting from her nipples. Sally gasped when she saw the milk go shooting and giggled as it hit the mirror in front of her.

The heat went down her body once again, then flared up into a burning that seemed to shock her pussy. Sally threw her head back and squealed from the pleasure and felt herself cumming hard as the warmth faded away. Sally leaned onto the counter for balance and looked into the mirror. Her breasts were huge and full of milk, her nipples were hard as stones and her hair seemed to be rubbing her all over with small hands that she had subconsiously formed. Sally quickly went into the bedroom to look into the full length mirror. Her hair was long and black as she'd wished, and it didn't take much for her to change her hair into any shape she wanted, as if she was controlling a liquid form instead of just hair. She seemed to be able to use one strand or many strands to form shapes like hands or more bulbous forms that resembled the tentacles of an octopus. Some of her hair was already rubbing her body in spots that made her feel really good. It was an amazing feeling, her hair was very soft and felt good on her skin, not at all alien in any way, which is what had made Sally worry when she'd made her wish.

However, other thoughts were starting to enter into Sally's mind which made her stop for a second, sitting down on the bed. She felt dizzy as sexual thoughts began to force their way into her consciousness. Sally quickly remembered the part about craving sex, and as she licked her lips, she knew she was getting hungry for it. Her body was responding to the thoughts and Sally watched her nipples harden again as her pussy began to become soaked with her jucies. Her mind was racing and it wasn't long before she was commanding her hair to wrap around her arms and legs, holding her up off the bed. A few strands wrapped around her engorged breasts, the points of which turned into what looked like suckers, attaching themselves to her giant nipples. Sally moaned as they began to suckle on her breasts, she could feel them milking her, suckling squirt after squirt of hot milk out of them. Other suckers started to form from her hair, attaching to her neck and back, make it feel like small kisses all over her body. Sally was moaning and her pussy was aching badly. Her thoughts were being received and a strand of hair moved upwards to her pussy, laid over it and began to suck on her clit and swollen folds. Sally screamed out in ectasy and she felt herself cumming hard as her new hair sucker seemed to lap up her juices without a problem. It continued it's assult and Sally couldn't stop herself from squirming and moaning outloud at the incredible feeling of bliss she was getting, from her own hair of all things.

But Sally craved even more and couldn't hold back any longer. She watched as a mass of her hair gathered in front of her pussy, quickly forming into a giant penis shaft. It was large and black and began to probe around Sally's wet folds. Sally was breathing quickly as she felt her little tentacle poking her crotch, and she leaned her head back as the penis slowly slid into her dripping folds. Sally yelled out in pain for a moment as the tentacle pressed deeper into her, filling her pussy completely. She could barely move at all until she felt the pain subside, replaced with an overwhelming desire to be screwed by her own little hair demon. It responded to her desire and began to slide into and out of her now dripping pussy. She couldn't believe it was happening and she began to buck her hips in time with the thrusts of her hair penis while the rest of her hair contined to suck and fondle every sexual pressure point on her body. Sally felt herself cumming and the tentacle seemed to grow even larger and continued to thrust into her. Sally felt herself gripping it tightly with her more powerful vaginal muscles and was drooling from the pleasure she was receiving. Sally came again, soaking the bed sheets below her with hot juices. She was gripping her hair tightly as it continued to assult her body from all directions. Sally had a tinge of a thought and she watched amazed as more of her hair formed into a smaller looking penis shape in front of her face before slowly sliding into her mouth. It went in and out slowly and Sally was blushing over her entire body, but she knew she didn't want to stop, it felt so good, and the tentacle in her mouth had a sweet taste that she couldn't resist sucking on.

Sally felt herself cumming again and a muffled moan could be heard from her tentacle stuffed mouth. Another odd thought poured into Sally's mind, and in response, her hair turned her over, making her large breasts dangle over her soaked bed. Another group of hair began to form another penis shape, and this one started to probed Sally's ass. Sally could barely look around as the tentacle poked her little asshole. Sally was starting to worry since her thoughts were beginning to grow dark and eerie now. However, she was also curious and she couldn't help herself. She felt the large hair penis in her pussy slowly pull out, sliding a long line of hot cum along her ass, before covering the new hair penis with some before slowly sliding back into her pussy. Sally's resistance was fading and she closed her eyes as the hair penis began to slide into her asshole. Inch by inch it went in causing Sally to scream in pleasure. In seconds her pussy and ass were full of giant hair penises and she was being assulted by them. The penis in her mouth pumped faster and faster and her pussy and ass were full and hot. It wasn't long before Sally had cum at least five more times, harder and harder each time. By the time Sally had exhasted herself and her hair laid her gently down onto her soaked bed it was already almost dawn.

Sally's thoughts cleared up slightly, no longer completely craving sex for a moment. Sally knew she was grinning from ear to ear because of the unreal experience she'd just had. She had no idea that having sex would be so exhilerating, even though it was hardly normal sex. Sally thought to herself that at least this form was definitely not one she'd think she would hurt anybody with, though she understood that having hair that could do her biding could be used to do a hell of a lot of damage to other people's bodies. Sally giggled at the thought of making love to somebody else with hair tentacles, but the giggle turned to shock as she realized she could end up raping somebody. With the power she had now, not to mention the perverse thoughts in her head, she could really do a lot of harm, not just physically but mentally as well. She could ruin somebody's life.

Sally rolled over off the bed, now sticky with her own juices and stood up. She was tired but she didn't seem sore at all. In fact, even after all of that wild action, she figured she could almost do it all again. Her hair seemed to sense this and in seconds it had wrapped around her waste and was beginning to suckle on her nipples again. Sally moaned and tried to stop it, but she knew she couldn't, she'd asked to crave sex until morning, and she had at least another half hour to go. Sally slowly staggered into the bathroom, and turned on the water to fill the tub, letting it fill with hot water, all the while her hair was starting to get more into her thoughts, kissing her all over while another few strands played with her now dripping pussy folds. As she slinked down into the hot water, Sally couldn't stop her feelings and she knew her nipples were rock hard and her pussy was dripping wet again. In seconds her hair slid up into her soaking vagina once again grinding her, the hot water splashing hard against the walls. For another half an hour Sally was assulted with her new creations of sexual bliss. Sally came hard one last time before passing out from exhastion. The last thought she had was of drowning and the last of her hair pulled the stopper on the tub just as it began to shrink back to normal. As the water slowly drained out of the tub, Sally was in a deep sleep and moaning slightly as her body returned to normal.

[Rei-Lin]

Ok, here's two more parts. They're not quite finalized, so I may end up adjusting things at some point. I want to mention that I'm trying to appease several different styles of transformation as I go along. Some are sort of weird, more sexual in nature, some are just the basic old transformation thing. I'm really working to get a nice description of the changes as they happen to Sally, and eventually I'll try to get some other fetishes in there. The only problem I have at the moment is that some fetishes aren't really my "thing" so to speak, as each change I try to keep somewhat sexual or sensual in nature, like you really get that idea that it's an enjoyable thing. Some fetishes like shrinking don't leap out to me in a very sensual way, but I think I want to at least try to write something for every taste, so please bear with me. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate the kind words.

[Karbon]

This is awesome!
I can't stop reading them

[SimRam]

Great as usual. Keep up the good work.