Heather's Bad Day

[Lyinginbedmon]

I was thinking prostitution, but the principle's the same

[ryohji]

Originally Posted by Flip M

Okay, I'm not so sure I should be posting this since there are much better BE comics such as BE Avenger but I'm going against my better judgment and going to post it anyway.

You did the right thing. For years I was hardly criticized about my art, my firsts drawing sucked so much taht I burried them and shrod them and burned them, all in once. I.E you can managed to do fine art (trust me).To tell the true your comic reminds me my firsts drawing , which doesn't mean I want to burried a documents shredder on fire with your sketches in it .
I give you hints :Buy some books about anatomy/ art technics (unlike me) and practice as often as you can (yeah that's what I did) and don't be discouraged, it's a long but fascinating path. It will take time but the final result will be good. And to tell the true, your scenario is really good and funny.

Originally Posted by Lyinginbedmon

I was thinking prostitution, but the principle's the same

She rather should sell one of her kidneys and lungs.

[Kirokusclone]

ii'll give her a home!

She could always open up a pay-site, and just prance about in a tight t-shirt, and simple pants, because most people never look below the rib-cage in a web-cam thing, EVER.

XD thanks everybody, I'll try to get page 4 up tomorrow or Tuesday. Also I want feedback but please do not tell me to get a book on techniques or anatomy. I want to get better but I'm will never use skeletons, I want to see if I can get good without them.

[AhziDahaka]

I hate to break it to you, but if you want to do it without skeletons, then you're trying to fly with a sailboat--and this isn't Arcadia, last time I checked.

Believe me, you're heading down the path to being like this guy, who has barely improved since he started two years ago.

[ryohji]

Originally Posted by AhziDahaka

I hate to break it to you, but if you want to do it without skeletons, then you're trying to fly with a sailboat--and this isn't Arcadia, last time I checked.

Believe me, you're heading down the path to being like this guy, who has barely improved since he started two years ago.

I never used skeletons... Throw rocks at me!
But I agree using this technic is the fastest way to improve your art.

[Mattariel]

See, what skeletons allow is the ability to shape a more natural limb. Without a basic skeleton as a guide, and as you show in your art, is a case of 'rubber-limb' where there isn't much of a human shape. This gives not only an inhuman appearance but can lead to needless mistakes due to over/undersized limbs, unusual bends and other inaccuracies.

From what I can tell, though, you can get simple skeleton guides online for free...you just need to look for them.

Ya, but if I use skeletons, I have to re-train my way of drawing. The last time I used a skeleton everything looked really fat. Plus I like a challenge and to prove you don't need skeletons =P

[AhziDahaka]

Well, it's your decision--and your loss, if you ask me.

At any rate, I still do look forward to the upcoming pages.

Originally Posted by AhziDahaka

Well, it's your decision--and your loss, if you ask me.

At any rate, I still do look forward to the upcoming pages.

Yup, my decision and thank, page 4 is almost done. I'm having issues with two panels. It should be up tomorrow.

[vaxon]

Originally Posted by Flip M

1.) Bunny Girl

2.)English is my main language but thats what happens when someone fails English through out middle and high school. I can't write worth shit to be honest.

::EDIT::
I saw my first typo. In the first page 4th panel I wrote "The B.E. Ray Is Should Double The Size Of My Boobs". I was original going to say "The B.E. Ray Is Going To Double The Size Of My Boobs" so you see how bad it was going to be.
::EDIT2:: I fixed that typo ^^;

i can write pretty efficiently,enough to get me through the imprudent and worthless crap i go through day in day out,so if you ever need help with grammer i'll help