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Join Date: Jul 2007
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Re: Midna BE Story
I'm starting the like the curse more and more as a character, insted of just a... curse
great read none the less |
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#338 |
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Re: Midna BE Story
UPDATE.
Saria’s panicked explanation seemed to fall on deaf ears entirely, for Ruto was more concentrated on her own body. It didn’t matter much, though, because the events to come would be inevitable. Saria had seen it before multiple times, so it wasn’t even that odd anymore. Ruto’s breasts gradually grew in size. Saria couldn’t see her hips underwater very well, but she guessed those must be changing as well. Saria was almost sure that on Ruto’s otherwise pale cheeks, she could see pink. ‘Ruto… whatever you do… don’t give in to any desires you feel…’ Saria tried to explain hesistantly, not knowing how the unstable Princess Ruto would respond. Ruto looked up at Saria, and frowned. ‘Desires…? I’m being possessed by some lust demon and you’re talking about not giving in to desires?!’ she said, with somewhat forced anger. ‘If you don’t fight it, it’ll only get worse…’ Saria said, half knowing her words wouldn’t help. Ruto’s breasts were already significantly larger than they had been, and she seemed to take it lightly. She just looked at them, not displaying anything in particular. No fear or desire. ‘If she keeps being this composed, the Curse may not be able to do that much…’ thought Saria. But gradually, Ruto’s posture changed. She had been standing upright, much like she had been when speaking to Saria. She was gradually more relaxed, floating in the water and almost lying down rather than standing up. Saria tried to get eye contact, but Ruto’s eyes had gradually been closing and were only the slightest bit open. She lay completely on her back, floating on the water, her breasts still growing and now approaching three times the size they had been. Saria tried to speak to her, but no response came. Ruto seemed to hum a soft tune, as her right hand began to move. It seemed to head for her right nipple. Saria knew that, would she so much as touch it, the desire would become unbearable. She quickly grabbed Ruto’s hand. She half expected Ruto to become furious, but instead, she giggled, quickly freed herself from Saria’s hand and dove down in the water where she was invisible to Saria’s eyes. ‘No! No! Ruto, please!’ Saria pleaded, knowing Ruto would eventually give in without help. Under the water, Ruto was lying on the bottom, softly massaging her breasts. The urge to touch her nipples became unbearable as her breasts reached four times their original size, and she gave in and pinched them. Saria heard distorted noises coming from under the water, sounding like both moans and giggles. What disturbed her more, though, were two clear streams of a white substance rising up from some place at the bottom. ‘Ugh! This is not how I wanted to get Zora milk at all…’ Saria angrily shouted. She panicked, not knowing what she should do. Should she dive down? Ruto was a lot stronger than her, especially underwater, so would it help? Speaking to her didn’t help. At that point, she saw the Curse standing a few yards away again. ‘Oh please! Stop this! Just stop this!’ she shouted, swimming in its direction as fast as she could. ‘Green girl? Don’t you see fish girl’s enjoying herself just fine with my Magic…?’ the Curse chuckled. ‘That’s only because you’re forcing her!’ Saria said, stepping out of the water, and now standing right in front of the cloaked form of the Curse. ‘Forcing her? Green girl, all I do is stimulate and suggest. You people do the rest…’ he said. Saria wondered if all the Curse said were lies. ‘Regardless, you do force changes on these people!’ she added. ‘But once again, they enjoy it, green girl. You did, too,’ he added in very smug and content sounding voice. ‘Pleasure does not necessarily mean enjoyment, you demon! And yes, you do force it onto us. Soften our minds, and then make your suggestions,’ Saria said, standing hardly half a meter away from the Curse and shouting right into the empty space under his hood. A moment’s silence fell, and then the Curse chuckled. ‘Persistent little green girl… you’re absolutely determined to make me the bad guy, aren’t you? Despite of all I have given to others. What do I take? I have nothing…’ he said. Saria merely frowned at the last statement. ‘Well, green girl, here’s a plan. Maybe if you’ll stop writing me off as some demon, maybe I can make a few arrangements…’ the Curse almost whispered. ‘Arrangements?’ Saria said, with no trust in her voice. The Curse held out its hand, and in it was a small blue bottle containing a dark liquid. ‘Drinking this to the last drop will eradicate my magic from the person you give it to completely…’ he said. ‘Will it turn anyone back to how they used to be?’ Saria asked. ‘I said, it’ll remove my Magic. How you look isn’t my Magic, it’s merely the results thereof. So, no. And this bottle is just to make it more like a game… I can leave anyone at any point if I want to. But I want you to choose one person…’ the Curse went on. Saria took the bottle from the Curse’s hand, but as she touched the hand (which felt like any normal human’s) a shiver went down her spine. ‘I really just want to see how you respond to this opportunity…’ the Curse began explaining again, much to Saria’s annoyance. ‘You seem to enjoy upholding this idea of a battle between good and evil… so, show me how it is on the “good” side. You are given this bottle which can “un-curse” one individual, and one alone. And it’ll work only within the next 12 hours. Who do you use it on and why?’ And Saria realized this was a more serious choice than she imagined. Nabooru seemed to have the biggest trouble, but despite her size, might be hard to find and much harder to contact. Saria was deadly afraid of the Curse affecting her again, as well. And then there was Ruto’s predicament, which was really her fault. And Malon had suffered for so long. ‘Malon!’ Saria gasped. She decided it’d be selfish to use the cure herself, but giving it to Nabooru and Ruto might be impractical considering both were occupied. ‘Ah. The milky horsy girl, huh? Why? I think the big girl has worse problems,’ the Curse said, mockingly (but in a disturbingly friendly way). ‘Malon has suffered so long, and so much… and I doubt I’ll find Nabooru quick enough…’ Saria said, honestly enough. ‘Well! I’ll be off now. And don’t bother getting the Zora girl’s milk – if you try feeding it to anyone, the results will be… unpleasant. Or very pleasant! It all depends!’ he said, even more light-hearted than before. With that, he disappeared in a Flash. Saria turned and saw the rather unusual amount of milk all floating in the waters of Zora’s Domain. ‘This decision… ugh… what to do? Malon, or Ruto?’ Before you go "OMG YOU PRETTY MUCH AVOIDED ANYTHING OF RUTO'S CHANGES THERE BESIDES SOME BE/LACTATION", it's because I wasn't sure about that yet. I knew we were going to do something with Ruto, I just wasn't sure what. So let's make this the simple question of the day: Does Ruto get transformed to a Hylian? YES OR NO. |
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#339 |
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Re: Midna BE Story
no
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#340 |
Long and Hard
Join Date: Oct 2007
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Re: Midna BE Story
yes
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#341 |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Re: Midna BE Story
no i cant really imaged ruto as a hylian shes better as a zuro(and WOW is my spelling bad!)
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#342 |
Chop, Chop, Chop, Chop
Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 547
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Re: Midna BE Story
nice chapter, I was able to picture the sound Ruto is making in the water
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#343 |
Fourm Firefighter
Join Date: Mar 2008
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Re: Midna BE Story
nes<no and yes...so a 50/50 split>
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#344 |
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Re: Midna BE Story
YES all the way for me. I vote YES a thousand times!
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#345 |
Process Fan
Join Date: Aug 2008
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Re: Midna BE Story
Yes
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#346 |
Milky Meister
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Midna BE Story
I'm not sure which choice to choose, but I'd just like to say it's adorably sexy how Ruto is taking her changes.
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#347 |
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Re: Midna BE Story
I hope MagicWritings is OK...I'm worried about him.
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#348 |
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Re: Midna BE Story
No worries. Real life has a tendency to be time-consuming sometimes, you know... there might be long pauses up ahead.
But since the majority said 'yes', here's a new part with the transformation to Hylian. If you totally hate it, I'm sorry but I couldn't just come up here all update-less AGAIN and go 'hah hah well I'll wait another two weeks until I get a clear vote". So yeah, enjoy... or not. Saria was already more than half set on choosing Malon, as she sad and dull look in her usually enthusiastic and sparkling eyes. But she deeply regretted being unable to help Ruto already, and wondered if somehow, the decision wouldn?t make itself easier. In the meantime, Ruto had been thoroughly enjoying herself on the bottom of Zora?s Domain. Unlike most of the other Sages, she had been thinking about her love life more and deep down, had much desired to be with her former fianc?e. She had desired pleasure more than the others. She didn?t even think of anything like ?a curse? or even Saria anymore. The mere stimulation of her nipples caused her to experience a pleasure ten times better than anything she had ever felt before, and it only just kept getting better as she felt her breasts grow on and on. The Curse was clearly making easy work of her, as her breasts, hips and buttocks had already nearly reached the size of Saria?s ? a development that had taken days with her, and was a manner of minutes here. ?I bet no Zora has ever been as attractive as I am now?? she sputtered dreamily through her moans and giggles. Her figure was now quite as feminine as Saria?s, but because she was a good bit shorter than Saria it looked more curvaceous already. But as her pleasure grew and the surface above her became completely covered in milk, so also grew a desire she had been cherishing from years ago. Though perhaps an impure thought for a Sage, she desired to be with a man. It seemed to darken her very mind. ?I am too attractive for him to refuse, now?? she muttered to herself, almost as a childish reassurance. ?But? he refused me before? and my face hasn?t changed since then? why? Why did he refuse me?? she began to growl rather than giggle. ?Is it because? because I?m a Zora? I?m still a woman, am I not? But? I would give this Zora body up just to share one night with him?? she muttered, in a more sad than angry tone. She closed her eyes and tried to stop thinking as she kept stimulating her nipples. But in doing so, her desire only got worse. It became almost unbearable in the end. Her body seemed to become sore all over because of it. She sat up with a groan and put her head in her hands. Moving them again, she noticed something odd. ?My hands? they?re kind of pink? was I getting that excited?? She examined her body and found that though some areas were still fairly white, it was all quickly darkening to the color of human skin. Putting the hands on the sides of her head, she felt something strange about them as well. It was shrinking ? her head already almost had a perfectly normal egg shape, like any Hylian. In the meantime her nipples ? now also of a warmer color ? began itching furiously. Though she only casually brushed past her nipples, the effect was critical. The streams of milk soon doubled in size and strength, and the pleasure that had been ten times as much as she had known, was now ten times that amount. She couldn?t help but moan and do little else. As she lifted her arms from the floor again, she realized she was missing a certain weight. Looking at both her arms, she soon saw what was amiss even though she could hardly sit still. The wings on her arms had shrunk back, and were soon completely fading away into the arm. Quickly feeling her hips for the wings that should be on them, she realized the same process was taking place there. Though the pleasure had concealed it so far, she realized she was also in a good deal of pain. She tried to scramble to her feet to look at herself. Feeling the top of her head once more, she felt something else that was new and odd. She had felt it before, but never on herself. ?Hair?!? she sputtered. And as she did, she realized she was getting extremely short on breath. As the hair kept growing and soon tickled her shoulders, she found herself gasping for air and incapable of staying in place under the water. In the end, she couldn?t breathe at all anymore. She swam up to the surface to face the truth at last. Taking a deep breath, looking at an extremely shocked Saria and then at herself, she finally realized it. ?I?ve? turned into a Hylian?? she muttered, shocked. Saria, though extremely surprised at the transformation, was happy Ruto seemed to have regained her common sense. Her happiness was quite turned to panic as a smirk appeared on Ruto?s face. Wiping her long hair (which was gold with a hint a silvery blue) out of her face, she began talking to herself. ?Well? this means I finally have a chance at getting Link! Hah hah!? Saria rolled her eyes. ?Ruto, come to your senses! Don?t let the Curse control your thoughts and use your desires!? she tried, knowing it wouldn?t work. ?Curse? This is no curse, this is a blessing! I?m going to find Link and we?ll be together, forever. See you later, Saria!? Saria was glad that Ruto?s behavior irritated her somewhat. This made choosing for Malon, who was far more troubled, a lot easier. By the time Saria began swimming back into the exit, Ruto had already left through the Zora River. She felt a bit sorry for the Zora who had to clean up the milk, but she had no choice but to hurry once more. As she surfaced in Lake Hylia, she was quite surprised to see the massive silhouette of Nabooru standing right in front of her. She was surprised to see no more milk came from her breasts. Apparently, the Curse had calmed down on her. It startled Saria quite a bit when Nabooru?s rather loud voice echoed through the Lake. ?Saria? Are you there?? ?Yes!? Saria yelled as loud as she could. Nabooru got down on her knees, something that caused a small earthquake, and looked in the direction the sound was coming from. She soon saw Saria, who wasn?t much larger than a marionette in compare to herself. ?It?s a long story,? Nabooru?s incredibly loud voice blasted at Saria (although she herself thought she was speaking in her normal voice), ?But I know you?re off to Lon Lon Ranch. I can bring you there, okay?? she said. Saria was very confused, and would?ve loved to hear the story. But her ears still buzzed from hearing Nabooru?s loud voice, so she simply agreed to be picked up and brought to Lon Lon Ranch. It was a frightening experience to Saria. She was rather disappointed that, even after being able to face diving through dark tunnels, she was still rather nervous about being dozens of feet above the ground. Frightening though it was, she safely arrived at Lon Lon Ranch in the darkest part of night. After bringing her, Nabooru quickly (and earthquake causingly) slipped away before Saria could consult her about the potion. Saria sighed, and walked around the Ranch. She was incredibly tired, but she couldn?t just go sleep. Not yet. |
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