Fairy Study 2 - Page 3

The Warlock · 03-03-2008

Awesome as always, Jack.

The Warlock

foxmaster5 · 03-03-2008

possibly the best $2 ever spent

Sucht17 · 03-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by jollyjack

Don't get them wet!

Next you'll be telling me not to feed them after midnight...

03-03-2008

Great comic though it may be, I have some thoughts..

First off, in the first Fairy Study you supported the story with text. Perhaps I just cannot see the text because I cannot buy the comic ( so I cannot say whether any text appears throughout the entire thing ), but maybe some textual support in this part would've made it better... or maybe that's just my taste.

Secondly, her figure makes only one big jump from one picture of the other. What I mean is this: In your comic 'Island Fruit', you can already notice proportional changes after the first bite she takes of the fruit ( if I'm not mistaken ). In this comic, you see her normally one moment, and the next she has already gone through a big change. Maybe it would've been better to change her figure a bit after every drop that hit her.

Well, that's about all of it. For the rest this comic is awesome! The character is quite cute and you have a perfect way of showing the character's emotions. Another very positive part is that it is a sequel; and I love sequels. I hope we can expect more sequels then. Perhaps one to Island Fruit next time?

Keep up the brilliant work.

jollyjack · 03-04-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miracle overloading

If this anything like the last one, which it certainly looks like, wouldn't it be better suited to the GTS section?

Contains a bit of both, but I figured there was more BE than GTS.

evileye · 03-04-2008

Love your work!

mcsteel2 · 03-04-2008

I don't mind that. =)
I think this is the best thing you have done so far. =D

Matsu-sensei · 03-04-2008

I'm not one to buy these kinds of things (I only buy commissions), but the quality here looks pretty nice from the preview. I also really like how you drew her breasts in the last panel: I'm trying to perfect that, as I either end up making them too "orange" or too "lemon" (shape-wise).

Magniphile · 03-04-2008

Purchased this the other day- great stuff!

SufferingPlanet · 03-04-2008

Very nice :3

Darkhunter75 · 03-04-2008

I love your two fairy comics!

Do you consider wishes from your costumers? Please make a 3d part with the ocean (to answer wolf?s question *cough*

)

clumbum · 03-04-2008

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but it has already been uploaded on to ****** by anonymous, thought you might like to know considering this is you losing your hard earned dosh. I personally stopped reading it when i realised what it was.

03-03-2008	#25
The Warlock Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 318	Re: Fairy Study 2 Awesome as always, Jack. The Warlock

03-03-2008	#26
foxmaster5 Fx Artist Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 361	Re: Fairy Study 2 possibly the best $2 ever spent __________________ Just Add Water DA: http://just-add-water99.deviantart.com/ BE and Giantess Comics and Pin ups updated bi-weekly!

03-03-2008	#28
theshoelace Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Fairy Study 2 Great comic though it may be, I have some thoughts.. First off, in the first Fairy Study you supported the story with text. Perhaps I just cannot see the text because I cannot buy the comic ( so I cannot say whether any text appears throughout the entire thing ), but maybe some textual support in this part would've made it better... or maybe that's just my taste. Secondly, her figure makes only one big jump from one picture of the other. What I mean is this: In your comic 'Island Fruit', you can already notice proportional changes after the first bite she takes of the fruit ( if I'm not mistaken ). In this comic, you see her normally one moment, and the next she has already gone through a big change. Maybe it would've been better to change her figure a bit after every drop that hit her. Well, that's about all of it. For the rest this comic is awesome! The character is quite cute and you have a perfect way of showing the character's emotions. Another very positive part is that it is a sequel; and I love sequels. I hope we can expect more sequels then. Perhaps one to Island Fruit next time? Keep up the brilliant work.

03-04-2008	#30
evileye Lurker King Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 30	Re: Fairy Study 2 Love your work! __________________ Steps out from the shadows.... My DeviantArt page: http://evileye1.deviantart.com/

03-04-2008	#31
mcsteel2 ...like well grown babes. Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Land:Sweden, County:Jamtland Posts: 73	Re: Fairy Study 2 I don't mind that. =) I think this is the best thing you have done so far. =D

03-04-2008	#32
Matsu-sensei Oppai Guy Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 787	Re: Fairy Study 2 I'm not one to buy these kinds of things (I only buy commissions), but the quality here looks pretty nice from the preview. I also really like how you drew her breasts in the last panel: I'm trying to perfect that, as I either end up making them too "orange" or too "lemon" (shape-wise).

03-04-2008	#33
Magniphile Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Canada, eh? Posts: 171	Re: Fairy Study 2 Purchased this the other day- great stuff!

03-04-2008	#34
SufferingPlanet Growth Fantatic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Quebec, Canada Posts: 47	Re: Fairy Study 2 Very nice :3 __________________

03-04-2008	#35
Darkhunter75 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 131	Re: Fairy Study 2 I love your two fairy comics! Do you consider wishes from your costumers? Please make a 3d part with the ocean (to answer wolf?s question cough )

03-04-2008	#36
clumbum Biscuits and tea Join Date: May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 110	Re: Fairy Study 2 Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but it has already been uploaded on to ****** by anonymous, thought you might like to know considering this is you losing your hard earned dosh. I personally stopped reading it when i realised what it was. Last edited by clumbum; 03-05-2008 at 04:38 PM. Reason: Stupity and for opening the flood gates.