Wish Cup! (A new BE story)

[Drybones]

Part 8 2-19-12

Nel sat outside the Westfield mall in her new Tron-Mobile and heaved a heavy sigh tilting her rearview mirror down to get swollen bust. At this size they were clearly visible even under her winter coat, which hugged them almost to an uncomfortable extent. She couldn?t even guess how big they were, G cup maybe? She shivered at the thought. She would have to burn through some wishes although she knew her old A cups were long gone at this point.

Nel moved the mirror back to its correct position and stared at herself with fierce eyes. Time to put on my big girl pants! Nel popped the door open and marched to Kojiro?s Import Toy store. She was determined to get through the rest of the day without letting her impractical bust embarrass her three times in one day!

Nel marched into the store just as Chuck rang out a customer. Nel stepped around the counter and clocked in. Her face was already turning red. Preying Chuck wouldn?t make a big deal out of this?

?Evening Nelda!? Chuck greeted.

?Hey Chuck, been busy today?? Nel asked trying to sound as casual as possible.

?Not as bad as yesterday, been steady I guess. Are you alright? Your face is a little red, and you look different.? He asked in a concerned tone.

Nel?s heart jumped and her face was glowing. She paused, her mind completely blanked at that moment. She cleared her throat and started to make a slow dash to the backroom. ?Nope! Just fine!? She replied. Once in the backroom Nel took off her jacket and hung it on the south wall with Chuck?s. She took a deep breath and stepped outside and began to clean up the store. Thankfully it was empty. It was just the two of them for the time being.

Nel tried to stay out of sight but knowing he would eventually see her was nagging in the back of her mind. She made up her mind. Stepping around the counter. Nel slowly bounced her way to the counter. The sight of her was enough to make Chuck?s eye bug out. Seeing that was enough to shake Nel?s resolve but she pressed on.

?Nel?? Chuck said in a loud whisper. ?Wh-what happened to you??

Nel averted her eyes. ?I am sure your talking about my chest. Well I would really rather not talk about it if that?s ok.? Nel murmured.

?Uh yeah sure, that?s fine, I mean? I just? Are you ok?? He asked.

?I am perfectly fine.? Nel replied. She looked back up at her boss and friend. ?Really. Everything is fine!? She assured.

Chuck nodded and Nel suddenly felt like a weight had been lifted off her. She turned to get back to work when Chuck called her back over.

?I almost forgot, your Spice and Wolf Blu-rays came in today.?

Hearing that made Nel?s eyes light up and she squealed like a kid on Christmas. ?Where where!? Nel yipped bouncing in place. Chuck turned his hand and raised a hand over his eyes.

?Nel, I am going to have to ask for you to NOT do that?? He asked politely.

[keybladeknight]

great story at least chudk was being a gental man. Chuck turned his hand and raised a hand over his eyes.

“Nel, I am going to have to ask for you to NOT do that…” He asked politely. If it was me i would keep looking lol

[keybladeknight]

great story at least chudk was being a gental man. Chuck turned his hand and raised a hand over his eyes. ?Nel, I am going to have to ask for you to NOT do that?? He asked politely. If it was me i would keep looking lol

[keybladeknight]

srry for the repost computer glich a bit can someone delete the repost plz and thank u

[keybladeknight]

great story at least chudk was being a gental man. Chuck turned his hand and raised a hand over his eyes.

?Nel, I am going to have to ask for you to NOT do that?? He asked politely. If it was me i would keep looking lol

[bstgate]

Why didn't she just wish that Chuck wouldn't notice anything different about her?

That's actually something I would like to critique about this story: for someone who scored the ultimate wish, Nel doesn't seem to want for much. What are her desires? Does she have any secret fantasies or fetishes that she can realize now? Any skills she want to aquire? Does she want to look different? Or help out some friends and family in that department? Wouldn't she at least want to see what it's like to be able to fly?

The world has become her oyster. Why isn't she wishing for something? (Other than a car and a cake.)

I'm actually very much looking forward to the BF (fluctuation) moments, but so far it's almost only been BE...

[Drybones]

Well simply put, if Nel wished away all her problems. There's no conflict, and if she wished herself perfect, she becomes a Mary sue.

If there is no conflict and the main character is perfect, then the story is boring and uninteresting.

Anyway here is todays AM chapter. (So yes I will be posting another tonight at some point)


Part 9 2-20-12 (AM)


Nel chuckled snatching up her DVD?s, ?I can?t wait to watch season 2!? She whispered to herself. ?I?m gonna go throw these in my coat I?ll be right back! She cheered skipping back to the store back room.

?Now hold on a sec Nel, that?s the good news?? Chuck called out.

Nel?s ears perked up and turned her head. ?The good news?? Her mouth mimicked Chuck?s words. Chuck looked at Nel with a slight bit of concern on his face. He walked up to Nel and started to explain.

?Well it would all be good news I guess if not for you?re um? Swelling? Corey called. You weren?t here so he said he was coming in?? Nel?s face instantly went pale. ?He wanted another game recommendation, I suggested Rayman, but no one listens to me!? Chuck continued faking a laugh. Nel didn?t say a word. ?Um, why don?t you go put those DVD?s in your coat?? Nel did an about-face and slumped her way to the back room.

Chuck sighed and rubbed his forehead. ?Sorry Nel?? He whispered angrily. Nel confided in Chuck about her secret crush on one of their regulars, Corey was a nice guy and almost a big a dork as she was. Nel was already apprehensive whenever he came in; her new breast size was not going to do her any favors.

Nel was standing in the back room hanging her head trying to think of what to do. The view of the floor was slightly obscured by her chest. She needed to think of some wishes and quickly. Get her girls under control! Her mind began racing, what! What could she wish for! She was drawing a blank.

?Nel, you ok?? Chuck asked poking his head in the backroom. Suddenly Nel got an idea.

?Chuck can you keep a secret!?? She yipped.

?Uh yeah?? He replied cautiously.

?OK heres the deal, but you can?t tell ANYONE not even Beth!?

?Sure sure fine, whats up?? Chuck assured.

Nel closed her eyes and took a deep breath. ?OK so? LastnightthatbottleItookhomehadagenineinitandIwish edtograntmyownwishesandthereasonwhyboobsaresobigto dayisbecauseifIdon?tgrantwishestheyswellupSOINEEDY OUTOGIVEMEWISHESTOGRANTTOMAKETHEMSMALLAGAIN!?

Chuck blinked and then smiled. ?Yeah right Nel? He laughed.

Nel sighed and said. ?I wish my genie was here!?

In a puff of blue smoke Shillan appeared several feet above the ground she hung in the air for a moment before she let out a scream falling to the hard tile floor.

?Ow! Master what is the meaning of this!? She barked rubbing her rear end. Then Shillan noticed Chuck staring at her wide eyed and slack jawed. ?Um greetings! My name is Shillan!?

Chuck tried to find the words. ?Um gu? GIVE ME FIVE MINUTES!? He panicked. Chuck dashed out of the backroom and started frantically looking for a note pad.

Shillan looked up at Nel from the floor and asked. ?Master what is going on??

[bstgate]

Boring AND uninteresting?? Curse your highly appropriate storytelling arguments! I'll just go stand in this corner here...

[Drybones]

Part 10 2-20-12 (PM)

In a few moments Nel had explained what was going on to Shillan. The genies laughter echoed through the store. Her bellows even got Chuck to glanced towards the backroom while he was writing down any wishes and desires he had at that moment.

As the door opened to the back room a puff of blue smoke escaped revealing Shillan in a strikingly similar uniform to her master. Except for her exposed mid-drift. “I am sorry for laughing master, its just you humans are so adorable!” Shillan chuckled.

Nel groaned and rolled her eyes, but didn’t give Shillan the satisfaction of a response. The two approached the counter just as Chuck hit a mental block. The pen was quivering on the notepad as Chuck struggled to think of anything else he might want.

“Are you ready now?” Nel groaned.

“Yeah. Here, time to make it rain!” He cheered handing over his list. Nel picked it up and perused the list Shillan leaned over her shoulder to get a look. It was more or less what Nel would hav expected from him. Nel hmmmmm’ed and humm’ed while she was going over the list. She furrowed her brow when she saw the final item on his list. Chuck merely shrugged as if he knew exactly which item she was looking at.

Nel sighed and took a breath, the store was thankfully still empty.

“Ok I wish for, a First Four Figures Knuckles figurine, an autographed drawing of Mario by Shigeru Miyamoto, A battle ready Master Sword…” Nel began to softly bark out wish after wish on the list, and each one was granted promptly each item conjuring themselves on the shop counter. However all eyes were on Nel’s (becoming) less impressive bust, the rapid-fire wishes were working. Nels breasts were slowly deflating shrinking under her red polo to a E cup, but Nel didn’t stop.

“…Chuck to have six pack abs, speak every and understand language ever, have a real live pet Vulpix…”

Her breasts continued their reduction wish after wish made then fade away on her chest, down to a pair of DD ‘s and quickly heading for the C range Nel continued down Chuck’s list while her shirt became baggier and baggier over her torso.

“…And finally… Ugh are you serious?” Nel groaned while Chuck smiled ear to ear and nodded energetically. “FINE! I wish for an amulet that when placed on Chuck’s wife Beth would turn her into a Felicia-esc catgirl. How are you going to get her to wear it?”

“Never you mind.” Chuck teased picking up the baby Vulpix from the store counter. “Gonna name you Vixy!” He whispered into the pokemon’s ear. Chuck gathered up all his wish-gotten gains into several plastic store bags before taking his stash to the back room.

Nel and Shillan on the other hand were examining her breasts, which had stopped around a C cup. Nel sighed. “They stopped there several wishes before the end Master.” Shillan said. “I imagine the wishes you made regarding your chest earlier today have made them permanently that size…”

Nel nodded, she didn’t want to believe it. But at least they were a normal size now! “Thank goodness.” Nel sighed to herself.

[Daichi Azure]

Nice...i wonder though what would happen if she gets into a car accident and is in a coma for a while...since she does have the Bonne emblem on her car and all...

[wilkem101]

A vulpix? Might as well wish for a Poke'mon that can at least fly!

On subject, loving the story so far

[opailopai]

Cute little story so far, nice art to go with it too!

I forsee the solution to the small narrative conundrum of too much magical build up - sending the magic into various items or just expelling it towards people to grant their wishes.

Could lead to some interesting shenanigans although for now the premise works fine.