The Mystery Box

[grtcaligal]

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Part 22 is up. Where is it? In the first post. I made everything a little more reader friendly

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Part 23 is now in the first post.

[magnus knight]

Good story so far. It's plot, which is always great to have in a fetish story, is interesting on it's own to keep one reading. The transformations come up often too which is another plus.

Only ccritique I can say is more detailed during the process of the change, especially clothes bursting, would be nice, but then again that's just a personal kink of mine.

Otherwise keep the good stuff coming my dear.

[grtcaligal]

Yep, I remember how much you enjoy the clothes bursting. It's been a long time since we talked. My Yahoo got hacked, so now I'm using a new account. It's grtcaligal instead of grtcaligal530.

It's been fun trying to keep this going through 23 parts. I'm still surprised there's a plot running through it somehow.

[Expansionist]

I just read it from start to the most recent entry and I love where it's going! I'm with Magnus on the clothes bursting but I always enjoy whatever you write. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^

[grtcaligal]

Everybody grab some damn cake, it's done.

All 25 parts are linked to in the first post. I am damn proud of the way this thing ended. If you haven't read the whole thing, don't just skip to the end. You'll miss out on a lot.

I cleaned up the comments to make it easier to scroll through. All the parts are lumped in on the first post.

Thank you for all your support the last three months. I don't make a dime on this and I just do it for the joy of doing it and the hopes it might inspire someone to make something great. Nothing makes me happier than someone creating something based on what I created. It shows the impact my work had on them. If you really want to do something for me, just commission something based on this. The more OC we have here, the better this place is.

Big thanks to Balugawhale, slicer15201, and the elusive magnus knight for all your suggestions. It's things like that that kept me going. Also an equally big thanks to those of you who made more private suggestions, you know who you are.

Thank you to everyone who read it and enjoyed it.

Now do me two favors: Comment away and bring on your own OC.

[FULGOREY2K]

simply great girl, you are an excellent story writer

[grtcaligal]

Aww thanks hon. I'm just happy I finished one, much less one this long. Not sure what I'll do next. Probably something much shorter. Been thinking about writing for single panel pieces like the one I did for immortaltom.