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[BaconExpert]

Originally Posted by ekachi

uhhh matt i don't kno if that was a good idea

Eh? What's wrong with him gathering ideas?

Originally Posted by BaconExpert

That was uncalled for. :/

I agree. If I am indeed freaked out, its by the awkward nature of that post in general...

[zaroff]

To help us along, what are the characters' personalities like?

A story is mostly about motivation of the character.
Now if it's a short story (i.e. - joke) then maybe not so much.

To be a bit more specific, I'm looking for (not limited to):
goal in life (win the lottery, be the best at something):
person type(bully, geek, loving):
most of the time their moods are(shy, mean, nice, confident):
motivation(loving parents leads to normal life, mean mother leads to shyness):

Take this and run with it. These things will help flesh out each character a bit more and lead to interesting situations that work for that character. Right now everyone seems to be coming up with basic generic ideas for any character. People here love a good story and good artwork to go with it. If that wasn't the case, WOOT would not be as legendary as he is.

aside: take a look at his stories, that's inspiration enough.

[BaconExpert]

Originally Posted by zaroff

To help us along, what are the characters' personalities like?

A story is mostly about motivation of the character.
Now if it's a short story (i.e. - joke) then maybe not so much.

To be a bit more specific, I'm looking for (not limited to):
goal in life (win the lottery, be the best at something):
person type(bully, geek, loving):
most of the time their moods are(shy, mean, nice, confident):
motivation(loving parents leads to normal life, mean mother leads to shyness):

Take this and run with it. These things will help flesh out each character a bit more and lead to interesting situations that work for that character. Right now everyone seems to be coming up with basic generic ideas for any character. People here love a good story and good artwork to go with it. If that wasn't the case, WOOT would not be as legendary as he is.

aside: take a look at his stories, that's inspiration enough.

From what I know of Mattie, her goal is just to life live and write comic plots/create character designs, outwardly she's mature and hotheaded, inwardly she's caring and considerate, and not sure what her motivation is.

[zaroff]

Just trying to get back on track, is all.

[Kelberon]

Hmm.

Well, if Mattie's Ego is about being nurturing, maybe that should be the reason it happens in this particular case-for example, perhaps Otome has endured a rough day, so when Mattie sees her, she's very upset. This triggers Mattie's Ego, or causes her to drink some milk and trigger it, with the idea of trying to calm Otome down.

Of course, if that's too serious, you could end it on a silly note, like Otome bouncing back to happiness before Mattie does anything, leaving Mattie in her Ego form for the next few minutes/hours for nothing.

I know you've probably had ideas like this already, but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate.

[Punchmechanic]

Hmmm, most of those ideas, subway car, everything seems to be simple and standard issue hentai.

How about this... What if Mattie and Otome went to some bowling league tournament as fill-ins (How this happened, I do not know.) But end up where they both aren't doing so well until Mattie sits down all flustered with her low score with a glass of milk (Again, this could happen many different ways.) She ends up in ego form and discovers because of the huge amount of displaced weight, that she's able to bowl like a champion of some sort. Otome notices that the other team is getting distracted by the sudden set of upsized breasts and follows suit, discovering she becomes a decent bowler as well.

Later, they both get into it, competing who can bowl better between the two and end out punching some guy because he said one and not the other then immediately corrects himself once he gets hit in the face.

Maybe this could be a good plot? Also, there is chess and other assorted games.

[zaroff]

Now we are back on track!

I like the second idea that Otome gets happy and leaves Mattie in Meushi Mattie form. That seems more Matsu-sensei's style. What if after the punchline of Otome not needing her, Meushi Mattie justs falls over.

Just to hit the other side of the spectrum, what if Mattie changes into Meushi Mattie to beat out some girl who won't stop flaunting her body, though this maynot be ideal with Meushi Mattie's personality.

Or. Otome and Mattie come across a seasaw in the park. Otome wants to play on it. Mattie agrees. They sit on the seasaw and they don't go up and down (not heavy enough). Otome unwraps and shoots Mattie up. Mattie retaliates by becoming Meushi Mattie and sends Otome flying.

I like the second one better. Isn't Meushi Mattie the biggest of the two?

Now I understand the difference. In the earlier posts, all of the ideas were created with the thought that the entire comic would build up to the BE, and everything else was just a service to it. However, now it seems that the better idea is to have the BE worked into a situation, and have the joke be about how the BE affects the situation, not just about the BE itself. (Of course, we still don't have any confirmation of whether or not that is indeed what the artist intends...)

So, with that in mind... perhaps the joke would be about a lack of BE. Like a situation where Mattie would want to activate her Ego, but, comically, there would be no milk around. Or, instead, she can't find any milk, so she goes as far as to steal a cow to get milk.

Like, say they were at a beauty/bikini contest. Otome wears a normal bikini which shows her normal figure, and gets her a lot of points. Mattie decides to activate her ego to one-up Otome, but is unable to find any milk. Finally, after a elaborate search, she steals a cow (I mean, you could have her just go and buy some, but I think stealing a cow is funnier), but by the time she gets back, the contest is over.

Or, as an alternate ending, she arrives carrying the cow, but eventually collapses under the weight. Otome goes to help her, and since helping someone triggers her Ego, she shrinks down, and the judges vote her down. In the end, neither of them win.

There a few more possibilities with that one, and a lot of places where it could probably be improved much more, but I feel this is a lot better than some of my earlier ideas....

[Punchmechanic]

Originally Posted by Blind_Seraphim

Now I understand the difference. In the earlier posts, all of the ideas were created with the thought that the entire comic would build up to the BE, and everything else was just a service to it. However, now it seems that the better idea is to have the BE worked into a situation, and have the joke be about how the BE affects the situation, not just about the BE itself. (Of course, we still don't have any confirmation of whether or not that is indeed what the artist intends...)

So, with that in mind... perhaps the joke would be about a lack of BE. Like a situation where Mattie would want to activate her Ego, but, comically, there would be no milk around. Or, instead, she can't find any milk, so she goes as far as to steal a cow to get milk.

Like, say they were at a beauty/bikini contest. Otome wears a normal bikini which shows her normal figure, and gets her a lot of points. Mattie decides to activate her ego to one-up Otome, but is unable to find any milk. Finally, after a elaborate search, she steals a cow (I mean, you could have her just go and buy some, but I think stealing a cow is funnier), but by the time she gets back, the contest is over.

Or, as an alternate ending, she arrives carrying the cow, but eventually collapses under the weight. Otome goes to help her, and since helping someone triggers her Ego, she shrinks down, and the judges vote her down. In the end, neither of them win.

There a few more possibilities with that one, and a lot of places where it could probably be improved much more, but I feel this is a lot better than some of my earlier ideas....

Very Very tasty! This is an idea made of awesome and win! <3 Let's just hope someone doesn't recommend a travel-quest kind of story. >.<; The typical "Go here and find out there's massive evil in just a standard delivery run." scheme.

Originally Posted by Punchmechanic

Very Very tasty! This is an idea made of awesome and win! <3 Let's just hope someone doesn't recommend a travel-quest kind of story. >.<; The typical "Go here and find out there's massive evil in just a standard delivery run." scheme.

Well, that you. I like to think most of my ideas are delicious. XD

I just hope that the artist feels the same way...

[Matsu-sensei]

WARNING, LONG POST IS LONG.

Originally Posted by Kelberon

Hmm.

Well, if Mattie's Ego is about being nurturing, maybe that should be the reason it happens in this particular case-for example, perhaps Otome has endured a rough day, so when Mattie sees her, she's very upset. This triggers Mattie's Ego, or causes her to drink some milk and trigger it, with the idea of trying to calm Otome down.

Of course, if that's too serious, you could end it on a silly note, like Otome bouncing back to happiness before Mattie does anything, leaving Mattie in her Ego form for the next few minutes/hours for nothing.

I know you've probably had ideas like this already, but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate.

I have to say that I really like this idea. Great first post, btw. :B I think I'll use this if I get the chance. :3

"but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate."

;w; I agree.

Originally Posted by Drybones

What do ya think of this?

Mattie starts drinking some milk and she drops something, or something falls out of her pocket, whatever just before she swallows the milk. And a gentleman is nearby and they both reach down at to pick it up. The guys head just happens to be under her chest when she swallows causing her breast to shoot out and slam his head into the floor.

I like this one as well. Maybe I'll compose some short 4komas bundled in one deviation, each 4koma being one of the ideas I like. :P

Originally Posted by Punchmechanic

Hmmm, most of those ideas, subway car, everything seems to be simple and standard issue hentai.

How about this... What if Mattie and Otome went to some bowling league tournament as fill-ins (How this happened, I do not know.) But end up where they both aren't doing so well until Mattie sits down all flustered with her low score with a glass of milk (Again, this could happen many different ways.) She ends up in ego form and discovers because of the huge amount of displaced weight, that she's able to bowl like a champion of some sort. Otome notices that the other team is getting distracted by the sudden set of upsized breasts and follows suit, discovering she becomes a decent bowler as well.

Later, they both get into it, competing who can bowl better between the two and end out punching some guy because he said one and not the other then immediately corrects himself once he gets hit in the face.

Maybe this could be a good plot? Also, there is chess and other assorted games.

Interesting, but a little too random for me. I guess if I have to have an involved situation, I'd rather tie it into a plot.

Originally Posted by zaroff

Now we are back on track!

I like the second idea that Otome gets happy and leaves Mattie in Meushi Mattie form. That seems more Matsu-sensei's style. What if after the punchline of Otome not needing her, Meushi Mattie justs falls over.

Just to hit the other side of the spectrum, what if Mattie changes into Meushi Mattie to beat out some girl who won't stop flaunting her body, though this maynot be ideal with Meushi Mattie's personality.

Or. Otome and Mattie come across a seasaw in the park. Otome wants to play on it. Mattie agrees. They sit on the seasaw and they don't go up and down (not heavy enough). Otome unwraps and shoots Mattie up. Mattie retaliates by becoming Meushi Mattie and sends Otome flying.

I like the second one better. Isn't Meushi Mattie the biggest of the two?

"That seems more Matsu-sensei's style."
You're right about that.

"though this maynot be ideal with Meushi Mattie's personality."
Also right. :O

Last idea is ok, but I don't really see it in their characters to randomly play in a children's playground. ^^;

Originally Posted by Blind_Seraphim

Now I understand the difference. In the earlier posts, all of the ideas were created with the thought that the entire comic would build up to the BE, and everything else was just a service to it. However, now it seems that the better idea is to have the BE worked into a situation, and have the joke be about how the BE affects the situation, not just about the BE itself. (Of course, we still don't have any confirmation of whether or not that is indeed what the artist intends...)

So, with that in mind... perhaps the joke would be about a lack of BE. Like a situation where Mattie would want to activate her Ego, but, comically, there would be no milk around. Or, instead, she can't find any milk, so she goes as far as to steal a cow to get milk.

Like, say they were at a beauty/bikini contest. Otome wears a normal bikini which shows her normal figure, and gets her a lot of points. Mattie decides to activate her ego to one-up Otome, but is unable to find any milk. Finally, after a elaborate search, she steals a cow (I mean, you could have her just go and buy some, but I think stealing a cow is funnier), but by the time she gets back, the contest is over.

Or, as an alternate ending, she arrives carrying the cow, but eventually collapses under the weight. Otome goes to help her, and since helping someone triggers her Ego, she shrinks down, and the judges vote her down. In the end, neither of them win.

There a few more possibilities with that one, and a lot of places where it could probably be improved much more, but I feel this is a lot better than some of my earlier ideas....

Kinda like the bowling and playground ideas, I think it'd be too awkward to jump into a situation like that. But the stealing-a-cow idea gave me a chuckle, and if I'm bored, I might doodle Mattie hauling a cow on her back.