Midna BE Story

Okay, '' Not Nearly Over '' is it then? I kind of lost what exactly it was that you guys wanted. Don't be sad if you would've very much preferred another one: I can always create a sequel... but let's not haste ahead. First, this story has to be finished. I'll write you something later, I've been busy lately, but I think I can finish another bit today.

[cyero]

Mayhaps an interdimensional portal opens up at the end of this, allowing you to do the other three ideas?

[kingnitros]

keep goin dood, I like your story alot!

[dameat222]

One Problem Gone, Another to Go sounds nice

Originally Posted by dameat222

One Problem Gone, Another to Go sounds nice

I'm afraid that I have already continued according to the choice '' Not Nearly Over '', but I may very well make this one as well, if so many people like it, okay?

Here's the next part of the story. Tell me if you like it!

'' Link made haste towards the figure he saw on the ground. As he approached the figure, he could see that it was Midna, on her knees with her hands on the ground. From afar, he could see that breasts had no become smaller. In fact, they had become slightly bigger again, he guessed. Eventually, he stood in front of her. Midna looked up, with a rather dumbfounded look on her face. Link worried himself a bit about her. They looked at each other this way until Midna broke the silence.

?? Link... it?s all been for nothing...??, she said, making a depressed impression. Link put his hand on her shoulder and smiled at her: his comforting smile never failed. Midna was thankful, and she regained hope once again. Though she nor Link had the foggiest idea how to stop this curse. They decided to consult someone how?d helped them before, the old magician at the market. Link asked Midna to turn him into a wolf, and so with Midna on his back he ran off to the Hyrule Castle Town.

Midna, on Link?s back, looked around. Hyrule Field was beautiful. Concentrating on other things could make her worries less. She wondered if Link felt anything of the change of weight. He ran as fast as ever, making haste on Midna?s behalf. Link, in fact, did feel that Midna was heavier. It cost him more effort than he liked to keep running at such a high speed. He was glad to see the town came closer and closer. Eventually, he was in front on the gate. Midna turned him back to human, and together they went in.

It wasn?t a busy day today. There were only a few people out and about, and Link lost a good part of his hope to find the same mysterious man again. But he was mistaken. In front of the fountain in the square, sat a lonely old figure, begging everyone that passed by for some Rupees. Link walked straight at him, and the old man quickly saw Link as well. ?? Kind sir! Kind sir! Please, a few Rupees for a hungering man.??, he cried. Link searched his pockets, and found a red Rupee. He gave it to the man.

The man seemed to be very happy. ?? You ARE kind. Kindness deserves a reward. Go home, Link and take your friend, Midna with you. In Ordon, you will find a solution to your problem.?? He stood up and disappeared in one of the alleyways, leaving Link rather surprized. Midna had not shown herself yet, but because no one was in the centre any more she now rose from Link?s shadow. ?? I guess we should try everything to stop... this.??, she said, weighing her breasts on her hands again.

Link turned around and hasted out of the town. He called for his horse Epona and mounted her quickly. Midna jumped behind Link, and together they made haste for the Ordona Province. The sun was almost under when they reached the Faron Woods. They saw a man beside a bowl of soup, but they had no time for a chat. They ran on, until they came past the Ordon Spring. Link caught a glimpse of many fairies flying about. And then finally, Link?s house. He was glad to see it again.

?? Do you think... we need to look in your house? It?s worth a try, but have you got any powerful magical tools there???, Midna asked. Link shook his head, but he climbed up the ladder in front of his house, and entered it. It was a bit dark, so he grabbed his lantern and lit it. A warm light filled the room. An opened treasure chest stood in the center of the room. Memories came back to Link, about a wooden sword which he had gotten quite a while ago. He put his hand on the bottom of the chest.

He felt something, and this surprized him. He picked whatever it was out of the chest. It was a piece of wood. Probably something that broke off. Link threw it away without giving it another thought, but Midna caught it. ?? Link... this has something carved on it..??, Midna said. ?? This is Hylian... it means ?Ordon Spring?, I think.??, she said. ?? It?s highly illogical that a message like this would be here. It?s almost as though someone is playing a game with us... but who is it???, she asked Link. Link shrugged his shoulders.

Link walked out the door together with Midna, and walked back to the Ordon Spring. It was already dark, but the many fairies shone brightly, making it easy to see there. ??Yes, this is very nice, but... there is nothing here.??, said Midna, somewhat disappointed. Link?s face looked mournful, and together they stared for quite some time at the fairies flying about. What they did not see, was a dark figure sneaking into the Ordon Spring from behind them. ?? Eventually, these breasts will become a particularly huge problem.??, Midna thought. ''

[Huzzus]

Your writing in this part is rather well-done. I, Huzzus, hopes that you are going to either bring Zants back or possibly a OC villain in the LoZ World.

Also, If Midna has grown from Grim's picture, exactly how big are they now ^^; I, Huzzus, am kinda losing track of the size so it might be a good idea to compare it to something.

Originally Posted by Huzzus

Your writing in this part is rather well-done. I, Huzzus, hopes that you are going to either bring Zants back or possibly a OC villain in the LoZ World.

Also, If Midna has grown from Grim's picture, exactly how big are they now ^^; I, Huzzus, am kinda losing track of the size so it might be a good idea to compare it to something.

Why, thank you, Huzzus. I am already thinking of some possibilities for a villain.

I understand that you are losing track of that- it just goes like '' they are a bit bigger again ''. I cannot describe it very well- let me think... They should be 25-50 percent bigger now. Not lower than 25 nor higher than 50- and I mean the moment the latest piece ended.

[Huzzus]

Originally Posted by theshoelace

Not lower than 25 nor higher than 50- and I mean the moment the latest piece ended.

It helps but thats rather far apart. Plus, is there a limit to how big she gets since you used percentages?

Also, I, Huzzus, happen to freelance as a villain if your interested XD

Originally Posted by Huzzus

It helps but thats rather far apart. Plus, is there a limit to how big she gets since you used percentages?

Also, I, Huzzus, happen to freelance as a villain if your interested XD

I guess. Well, let's say thirty percent. Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's around that. No, there is not a limit. I mean, she is that amount bigger of what she was.

Hehe... I think I prefer to think up my own villain; otherwise it's a lot more difficult to keep the character the way it should be- but thanks anyway.

[Huzzus]

Alright, my mind set was that she was twice as big as the grim picture ^^; This is why I'm not a big story guy but this story is rather good to skip it or pick at it ^^

And darn DX

[Sir Kibble]

Are you still going with her butt expansion? I'm not a big fan of it in most cases, but a little bit doesn't hurt
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Originally Posted by Sir Kibble

Are you still going with her butt expansion? I'm not a big fan of it in most cases, but a little bit doesn't hurt
I can't wait to see what happens next!

That's my opinion, exactly. I might include some more in the next part. I might write another part today.