Night/N647 Commission Comic - Page 4

AoitsukiDS · 10-04-2007

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Originally Posted by Kelta

He's unable to do to DA's rules..sooo we probally will only see these here.

We're such lucky people.

ProfessorMishap · 10-04-2007

Once again, and awesome sequence by Night.

Good work buddy!

Wolfen · 10-05-2007

As Illpalazzo put it, "Visually Appealing".

gawdzilla · 10-05-2007

I don't post much (read: at all) but SWEET JESUS!
Awesome work mate!

jthm22 · 10-05-2007

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Originally Posted by AoitsukiDS

We're such lucky people.

high-fives?
anyone?

thanks again Night
and dsojourn for the awesome comish

kuriboh_fan · 10-05-2007

Very good, Night. It's worth putting on DA.

10-05-2007

I bow down! Great comic Night!

Agent M · 10-05-2007

*golf clap*

night · 10-09-2007

thanks, glad people like dit, how do you think the sequence flowen in the second and third pages?
was too fast to slow, not notorius enough?
also did you like how i did the greys?

well many thanks to all for posting and comenting on this work, let`s hope i finish the next comission soon ^^ (with the uni how has it been lately that`s been quite hard...)

Greenish_Funk · 10-09-2007

I rather enjoy your artwork/sequences night. This particular sequence however....

...is no exception.

You have growth, you have BE, you have breasts pressed against one another, gold stars all around.

As for constructive criticism, the font size and frames change after page one was a little weird. After page one was up (but before page two) I figure the rest of the story was going to be done in that fashion, so seeing page two made me go 'oh...*shrugs* ok'. The font size in the page 2 and 3 are also eye squinting tiny.

Also, I feel page two would have benefited a little bit with an extra frame. Have Inoue say a little something, then next frame have her grow.

But again, those are nit picks. Overall it's a great (albeit kinda short) sequence. Thumbs up all around.

saberstryke · 10-10-2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by night

thanks, glad people like dit, how do you think the sequence flowen in the second and third pages?
was too fast to slow, not notorius enough?
also did you like how i did the greys?

2nd page, frame 2 it looks like orihime got smaller

greys are excellent, story moves at a good rate

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night · 10-10-2007

well about page 2, originally wath you see as page 2 and 3 where a single page, folowing the same format of pages 1 and 4

10-05-2007	#40
gawdzilla Leecher Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 3	I don't post much (read: at all) but SWEET JESUS! Awesome work mate! __________________ With great breasts come great power.

10-09-2007	#45
night Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 146	thanks, glad people like dit, how do you think the sequence flowen in the second and third pages? was too fast to slow, not notorius enough? also did you like how i did the greys? well many thanks to all for posting and comenting on this work, let`s hope i finish the next comission soon ^^ (with the uni how has it been lately that`s been quite hard...) __________________ DA gallery: http://n647.deviantart.com/ now that I have one :P

10-10-2007	#48
night Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 146	well about page 2, originally wath you see as page 2 and 3 where a single page, folowing the same format of pages 1 and 4 __________________ DA gallery: http://n647.deviantart.com/ now that I have one :P

10-04-2007	#38
ProfessorMishap Oh dear, not again! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: I'm standing right behind you!! Posts: 2,158	Once again, and awesome sequence by Night. Good work buddy!

10-05-2007	#39
Wolfen Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 141	As Illpalazzo put it, "Visually Appealing".

10-05-2007	#42
kuriboh_fan Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 84	Very good, Night. It's worth putting on DA.

10-05-2007	#43
mehappy Guest Posts: n/a	I bow down! Great comic Night!

10-05-2007	#44
Agent M Process Master Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Nova Scotia, Canada Posts: 595	golf clap

10-09-2007	#46
Greenish_Funk 2? Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 38	I rather enjoy your artwork/sequences night. This particular sequence however.... ...is no exception. You have growth, you have BE, you have breasts pressed against one another, gold stars all around. As for constructive criticism, the font size and frames change after page one was a little weird. After page one was up (but before page two) I figure the rest of the story was going to be done in that fashion, so seeing page two made me go 'oh...shrugs ok'. The font size in the page 2 and 3 are also eye squinting tiny. Also, I feel page two would have benefited a little bit with an extra frame. Have Inoue say a little something, then next frame have her grow. But again, those are nit picks. Overall it's a great (albeit kinda short) sequence. Thumbs up all around.