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Re: Attribute Theft/Transfer
boob envy comic parts 1-4 more to come!
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![]() Also Altered Realities is live on Amazon, the paperback will be live soon. I'm still having problems with smashwords but it'll be on smashwords as well. Hopefully you all enjoy the book.
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update
part 5-6 http://cahunk100.deviantart.com/art/...eviation_stack http://cahunk100.deviantart.com/art/...eviation_stack ENJOY SO SAY THE FULL METAL HULK ! |
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Join Date: Jun 2008
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hmmm, I'm drawing kind of a blank myself. I guess this is the problem with reading so many fetish stories lol. Since I've seen the same premise as that several times but with different things. I remember one with a ring that did it, but that's as close to the premise your describing and I think only one person used it in the story. One place you could look though is https://thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/ they have alot of stories people find and backup onto there from various authors. So it's worth a good look, and most people label the stories correctly.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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Though it could be a coincidence that both do start this way, but Tithing that Angelus suggested does start with her improving her Eye sight from the campus populace.
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Permutations on overflowingbra.com is what you'really looking for.
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Cinderella's sisters steal her beauty:
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He tried his best to wrap things up in the final chapter, unfortunately, it left me thinking. The old Heather, from all that time ago, was lost forever and that our protagonist was going to suffer or learn to love it. I'd have loved to have seen a couple of more chapters, him working with the other character in the story that knows the secret. Devising a way to balance the scale so to speak, to break the spell that Heather had been trapped in, when she had only hoped to help her friend. The entire story is a tragedy when taken in with that context. Not only that, it's a tragedy without a proper ending. The author says something about an old cartoon, where Wiley finally caught the Roadrunner and held up a sign that said "now what". It's actually a rather famous scene in cartoon history. Because a child wouldn't know what came next, so neither did Wiley. That's not really what happens here though. The author tries to say the protagonist longed for Heather his entire life, but when he had her, he didn't know what to do next. That's not at all what happens in this story though truth be told. Heather is a maniacal super worldly being trapped by dark magic to consume, the more she consumes, the more darkness inside of her grows in strength. The truly tragic part, she didn't want this, she didn't want any of it. She even mentions at a certain point near the end, she didn't want this, but it's almost like she has two different personalities. Which in truth, she probably does. The one that hungers and the innocent child that doesn't want to hurt anyone. I hope this author is here somewhere, I'd love to see him follow this up with a proper ending. Ending Heather's suffering in some way or form.
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This was really fun and interesting because it seems as it was written as a much as psychological horror as much as tragedy. That would be a really interesting approach that I've rarely seen taken in the genre. Sure, some people may swap so many attributes that they can't return to their normal lives, but rarely does the character go on as quite a terrifying power trip as Heather. Really hope this story inspires someone. ![]() |
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