Midna BE Story

[MagicWritings]

Originally Posted by geno13

- Very very good
- That sounds interesting, though it may take away a little bit of the mystery surrounding it if we know too much about what it thinks.

Much appreciated.

Yeah, as you can see I describe the curse's thoughts on the occasion. I just wondered if it bothered anyone.

Originally Posted by Lock

Well done, Magic my boy! Bravo!

Thank you!

Originally Posted by DarkSage8

*walks out of the shadows applauding* Bravo, Magic, Bravo! This is precisely the quality of AP I had hoped to see with Saria. Keep it going man!

Man...if only I wasn't so poor, I could afford a commission to go with this. A man can dream though...a man can dream.

Thank you very much. I hope I can keep it up.

Grim made some artwork around the story. I wonder if he's still around and cares about this story? Might have to send him a note, but I'm kind of afraid he's angry 'cause of my year-long break.

Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

A) yes it was nice and drawn out for added effect
B) of course, every good story needs to have the villians input every once and a while to add the dark side into it....oh wait did i make a small star wars joke?

Thank you. And thanks for your opinion on the curse's thoughts and whatever.

Originally Posted by HC-911

Awesome work, Magic. Love how the Saria arc is looking. Going with the tree stump, novel idea.

What I'm wondering is . . . if these are other worlds.. are there other Links? Other Zeldas? To include them would be confusing, but how would you not? Other than just avoiding Hyrule Castle Town in (Ocarina of Time World)?

I'm merely curious what your take on that is, really.

All in all, I'm impressed.

Those Ruto ideas going around... I've never been a fan of TF ideas myself, but moreso I agree with Magic, I can't see a way to link it together.

I like Ruto as a character though, second only to Midna really, I thought the whole tomboy sprouting into one foxy fish and suddenly coming onto her fiance, the dumbfounded adult Link, was a neat twist.

But... how would you apply it to this story? That... I can't figure out. But truth be told (and since you mentioned the other Sage locations) I'd rather Ruto over Impa. AHAHAHAHA. *ahem!*

So . . . Cremia, Anju, Ilia and Lulu have been all wrapped up huh? Leaving only Nabooru and Saria correct?

Forgive me if I seem out of bounds, but although the story's kinda wrapping up, you just got back . . . so, it kinda leaves me wondering how much is left of this story. I'm just curious.

BTW, ya recognize my name, Magic?



Anyways, glad you decided to resume this story!

Thank you!

Whether or not I include other Links/Zeldas depends solely on timeline and location. I could engineer in Link returning from Termina if you guys want him in the Saria story arc.

As for Zelda, I could potentially have any of them appear, but since Link and Midna are kind of the focus of the story I figured it might be best to curse TP Zelda, if any.

Ruto's a pretty nice character, yeah, but the transformation ideas would all be more fitting for a story by itself.
I dunno if I want Ruto to transform to a Hylian, 'cause I am kind of a Zora fan. So I'll have to give that some more thought later.

Whether or not the story is almost over really depends. There's many more arcs we could set up. If you guys want it to go on, I doubt I'll be done any time soon.

As for your name, I think I recognize it, but my memory's a little vague.

[Lock]

Well, as for the Ruto thing...Again, I said have her become a Hylian so she could snag her Link. Also, here're ideas for other victims:
Tetra(Wind Waker era): Another AP case here.
Aryll(Wind Waker era): Same as above.
Medli(Rito from Wind Waker era)
Agitha(Twilight Princess)
Din
Nayru
Farore(The Oracle series versions of the three listed above)
Impa(Ocarina version)

[HC-911]

Here's my views on that list Lock provided.


Tetra(Wind Waker): If you were going to use her, I'd say stick to her as a pirate. Her connection to the royal family is fine, but personally I think adding too many "reincarnations" would just confuse things.

As for AP, I can't say I'm a big fan. Saria's a special case because she is an untold amount of years older, kept in the body of the Kokiri.

But what about this? Why not "re-envision" Tetra so that she fits within Twilight Princess/ The original realm. Maybe she's related to Zelda in some way but is distant? You could play around with her age there and it'd give Link and Midna something to do to flesh out their realm a bit more.


Aryll(Wind Waker): Isn't that Link's sister? I dunno. AP's one thing, but personally I see it as a sort of one-time-use ticket. It works for Saria, it really does. But I wouldn't abuse it, myself.

Medli(Rito from Wind Waker era): Same as Aryll. However that does add another race into the fold.. variety IS the spice of life.

Agitha(Twilight Princess): Interesting but I can think of better candidates.


Din
Nayru
Farore: Very interesting, but myself I'd instead recommend the versions of the three from the Minish Cap. And speaking of minish cap, I can think of some interesting predictaments Link could get himself in as a Minish... cool:

Impa(Ocarina version): I've already stated my opinion of Impa. (sorry, she's just such a flat character...

Here's my additions:

What about Iza (The canoe/rafting minigame lady) and her fisherman sister, Hena? (Twilight Princess)

They're minor characters, but characters add depth: Misha, Kili, and Hanna, the three girls that swoon over Link if you win the clawshot minigame in Hyrule Town.

And for more Zoras there's the late Queen Rutela (The Zora Queen from Twilight Princess)

Short descriptions of them can be found here:
http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-...characters.php

Twilight Princess has the most varied amount of characters, and it's still rather fresh in my mind, but I'm probably excluding someone, somewhere. Windwaker's a close second (in variety) but I can't recall anyone in particular.

As for my name, I'm the guy that sent you that file on DA. *cough* *cough*

Ha ha! Anywho, lookin' forward to what you got in store for us next!

[cyero]

I'd love to see Din and Nayru got processed...

Also, the Saria business is lovely.

[Forze]

We can focus on increasingly obscure characters, however, Zelda herself could use some attention. Or we could always just make Midna bigger :P

[cyero]

As mentioned, the Oracles would be lovely targets...

As would that one chick, oh what's her name, it'll come to me.

Maybe a small AR of Telma, to make her not rotund?

[HC-911]

It is possible to add a fair amount to this story.

I've always liked this particular story, and not just because of the BE. But because of the.. story itself. The characters, how they interact, it's interesting. I must admit, something about Twilight Princess that always got me was how Link seemed to have Midna falling for him, Zelda falling for him and Ilia falling for him. And all the while he'd just smile and you get those faint moments of "Okay, who's going to snap and claim rights to the poor boy first?"

In this story, Midna and Link have the stronger relationship. But Ilia and Zelda are just as much a part of it.

Now you've got Saria and Nabooru in the mix as well.

I have a question though. Are Nabooru and Saria in the realm of Ocarina of Time? Are we dealing with three realms? Twilight, Ocarina and Majora? Ocarina and Majora being in the same universe merely separated by unrevealed amounts of distance.

I just want clarification.

If so, and if another Link was in that realm... Would he be younger.. or older? Since he's young in Majora, but older/younger in Ocarina?

Hmm...

Peace!

[MagicWritings]

Lots of suggestions. Officially, right now, I'm supposed to be writing up a Nabooru bit. I doubt it'll have a lot of process, but it'll be story vital.

I'm not sure if I can take a third plot arc at a time... :P


Nabooru and Saria are in the same realm, by the way, HC-911.

Originally Posted by cyero

As mentioned, the Oracles would be lovely targets...

As would that one chick, oh what's her name, it'll come to me.

Maybe a small AR of Telma, to make her not rotund?

Ah... the Oracles. You mean the literal characters from the Oracle games, then, and not the Goddesses they represent?

What game is the girl you're referring to from?

As for Telma... I'll see about that later.

EDIT: So here's the new Nabooru bit. Tried to get the plot going again, might not be one of my strongest works though.

"Nabooru felt something odd as she teleported back to the Gerudo?s Fortress. As though a weight fell off her shoulders. She wondered if the curse had been defeated that moment it fell before her. Little did she know that the curse had split up to widen its influence.

She appeared in her beautiful, cool room in the center of the Gerudo Fortress. She had the urge to just fall down on the bed and sleep, but she had a few matters to attend to. To tell her people that it had been a curse that changed her, and to have her messenger recovered.

She called a meeting, and soon all the Gerudo were crowded around Nabooru. ?My sisters,? she began, ?As you know my body has changed and grown in odd ways lately. I found out that this was the doing of an evil curse.

The Gerudo looked shocked and looked at Nabooru?s breasts as though they could begin spitting fire any moment. Suddenly, a Gerudo wearing a black bra and pants stepped forward. ?How can you be sure? exalted Nabooru?? she asked.

Nabooru looked surprised. She had seen this Gerudo a few times, but she had never stood out much. She was however more voluptuous than the other Gerudo, and her skin just a tone darker than that of the others.

?I have seen this curse face to face. It desires to control me, and corrupt you all,? she answered. The Gerudo in black turned and faced the other Gerudo. ?I think that our great leader has misunderstood a few things,? she said slyly.

?For the Goddesses themselves spoke to me last night. And in their great wisdom, they told me that a sign would be given if it was their will that these changes occur. And a sign will occur. Now,? she said.

All the Gerudo looked at Nabooru, who raised an eyebrow. She wondered what was supposed to happen, when suddenly, she was struck with a strange pleasure. ?Nghh?? Nabooru bit her lip to prevent herself from moaning.

Her nipples now poked through her expensive, handmade bra. But the worst was yet to come. Her breasts swelled up with amazing suddenness. They bounced fiercely as they tore the massive bra apart. Nabooru let out a moan but quickly covered herself with her arms.

Her pants became tighter and tighter as she felt her buttocks swell along with her hips. ?Why?? she thought. It finally stopped, and the sly Gerudo in black laughed. ?The Goddesses have cleared all doubt around this matter, have they not?? she yelled.

?I suggest that we all touch the exalted Nabooru, and share in her wealth!? she said. A few Gerudo stepped forward when Nabooru spoke again. ?Stop! I don?t know what has gotten into you, but an evil curse could be called to do anything at any moment to fool you!?

She panted as she looked around. The Gerudo seemed to have divided emotions over this matter. ?That girl is a traitor. Imprison her at once,? she said after a short breather. The Gerudo obeyed, much to Nabooru?s relief, and took her away. But the traitor kept laughing.

?The curse cannot have manifested itself in a physical form again? can it?? Nabooru wondered."

[geno13]

One of my friends suggested Twinrova (as in the super-tall woman Koume and Kotake merge into)... but how that would be possible, I have no idea. Maybe they're resurrected, but stuck merged?

EDIT: Ooh, the plot thickens once more.

[Ryu_Knight]

Originally Posted by geno13

One of my friends suggested Twinrova (as in the super-tall woman Koume and Kotake merge into)... but how that would be possible, I have no idea. Maybe they're resurrected, but stuck merged?

EDIT: Ooh, the plot thickens once more.

if you wanted to use that twinrove but put a twist on it, I wouls sugest that this would be a thing for the Nabooru arc's as since they're related in some way

my idea for twinrova would be that the curse were to resurrect her but insted of just cursing her how about merging with her and becoming a more powerful and now a being of its own curse kind of deal

just a suggestion

[cyero]

Hmm, Twinrova has some potential, I suppose...

But please don't do Koume and Kotake themselves without AR.

And yeah, I mean the Oracles, not the Goddesses. 8D

[Lock]

Not a bad chapter.