Why does that spell even exist? (BE story)

[Chaos Echo]

Slow day today.

Anyway, once again, sorry for the delay. This time I was doing rudimentary sketches of like... 75 characters, a vast majority of which will never show unless I pick this up again after I'm done or I do some other story and put them in it.

Chapter Fifteen

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After rereading all the various notes and such Carline had stuffed into the book several times, Anni nodded, ready. ?Oh, I?m gonna go whip me up a nice pair of titties~ For someone else~? She heard her stomach growl, so she pushed open the door to leave the kitchen and go find Jessica, and maybe while she was out there she?d find some other servant of Carline?s to buxomize. Instead, she came face-to-face with Tuicia. ?Zere you are!? ?Crapcakes.? ?Did you really sink zat you could get away wizh ze mess you left in Madame?s study?? ?Yeah, that?s kinda what I was hoping for.? ?Well, it is not ze reality!? Tuicia grabbed her by the arm and began walking her toward the room. ?Ah already ?ave bozh Allie and Denise cleaning up in zere, but do not sink zat means you get off wizhout any punishment for your ?oggishness, Annee!? ?C?mon, Tuicia, can?t it wait until after lunch?? ?No! In fact zat is a perfect incentive for you to get it done quickly!? ?Why do you gotta be so strict alla the sudden?? ?Why do you ?ave to take Madame?s sings and leave a ?uge mess in ?er study??


They reached the room, and Tuicia let her go. ?Madame?s apprentice or no, Ah am still ze ?ighest ranking person ?ere after ?er. You stay ?ere and ?elp zem clean up your mess, and zen you can eat wizh everyone else! Denise, Allie, make sure zat she ?elps and does not leave until you are all finished!? Tuicia clicked away in her heels, and Anni surveyed the wreckage. She had indeed left Carline?s study a proper mess in her attempt to find the book with the buxom spell. Allie was standing with a stack of books several feet high, and the Denise one was on a stepladder, calmly putting them back one by one. Allie was all smiles though. ?Oh good, since you?re here Miss Annilitia, maybe you could help me out with- whoops!? One of the books fell off the top of the pile. ?Bah, leave it, Anni can-? ?No, I got it?? She squatted down to get it, but as she leaned a bit to grab it, she lost her balance and fell, and every book she?d grabbed came with her. Denise stifled a laugh, and hopped off the ladder to help her. ?Still clumsy as ever, Allie, just like when you lived with me.? ?Sh-shut it, Denise!?


Anni flung the thick book she was holding at the table, where she manipulated it into landing gently, and walked to where the two maids were. She crouched down to help the effort. ?So how?d you two get suckered into doing this?? ?We were done early. I ate my lunch speedily, and twinkletoes brought her own.? ?Hey! I just? prefer to do my own meals, that?s all!? Anni wasn?t bothering to put much effort into the cleanup as she listened. ?How was it?? ?It was delicious, as usual.? Anni inwardly pouted. She was getting screwed out of whatever the chef had made. It was amazing, really, how good she was with how young she was.


Anni tried to put her mind off of food. ?So Allie, you seem happy today. What?s the occasion?? ?Oh! N-nothing!? ?Allie, you?re that kind of stupid-happy that means something good happened.? ?Really, miss, it?s nothing!? Denise snorted. ?That?s not what you were saying earlier.? ?Fine! I? I just?? Allie dug her foot into the floor nervously. ?I have a crush.? She said in a small voice. ?Oh? Who on, if I might ask?? Allie suddenly became interested in the floor. ?I? don?t actually know her name yet. I?m not actually sure what she does around here? I?ve just been seeing her a few times lately? I think she?s really cute. But she keeps to herself, and doesn?t talk to anyone? I tried talking to her once, but she was really shy and she said she had something urgent to do.? ?Hm. Can?t say I know who she is, or that I?ve ever tried anything love-life-wise myself, so I don?t really have anything to say here.?


She worked for some minutes to help put the books back, but couldn?t help but think back to the food. Everything was probably going to be gone by the time Anni was done here. She groaned. ?Bah? Why isn?t there a faster way to do this?? Allie looked curious. ?Can?t you just magic at them and make ?em go back?? ?No? I don?t have any idea where they all go. I?d need to direct them.? ?Oh. I had no idea magic was so specific.? Denise came down from the ladder she was on and joined the conversation.


?Speaking of magic, Anni.? ?Okay, Carline and Tuicia are my superiors, so they can call me that, but not you. You call me Annilitia.? Denise blew a puff of air. ?Alright, Annilitia. Like I was saying, speaking of magic? I couldn?t help but notice Jessica?s tits.? ?What about them?? ?They?re obviously bigger. And you?re going around with one of Miss Carline?s spellbooks.? ??so you want me to give you the same. Didn?t you get enough during the Great Boobening?? ?Yeah. Kinda. Well, it?s about her.? She pointed to Allie. ?She looks damn fine, I do say. She had men drooling over her when she lived with me. I wanna outdo her. On both ends.? ?Both ends?? ?Yeah, T and A. I?ve got these great hips, but no ass. I want an ass that people?ll stop and stare at. And my boobs are nice, but? I?m looking to find someone, and I need some serious boobage if I?m gonna go hunting.? Anni was surprised about how well this worked out for her testing out the spell some more. ?Well, um? I can do your boobs fine, but I dunno about your butt. I?ve never done that before.? ?That?s fine. I can handle that; I?m a low sorceress.?


?A what now?? ?A low sorceress.? Anni blinked, not comprehending. ?A? a low sorceress.? Denise repeated. ?Don?t tell me you don?t know what that is.? Anni shook her head. ?Doesn?t Carline teach you anything? A high sorceress is like you or her, where they just can do everything they please. A low sorceress is when you got the whole magic in your bloodline, but it?s diluted-like, or something didn?t carry over, or whatever. Means you don?t have all the fun benefits. Like me, for example. I use magic fine, but I can?t actually produce it.? ?So what then?? ?So you give me your buxom spell there, and I?ll direct it as needed.?


Anni hesitated. ?You sure you know what you?re doing?? Denise waved her hand dismissively. ?Yeah, yeah, it?s fine. I was already kinda gauging it when Carline was givin? it to me.? Anni shrugged and let her hands glow with the spell. Denise smiled pleasantly. ?This?ll be good?? She put her hands beneath her breasts and lifted them. ?C?mon, you beauties, let?s see what you can do!? A faint light came from her hands, and she moved them down to her miniskirt. She lifted it in the back and placed her hands on the admittedly small butt. ?And let?s get this lump all big and nice too!?


Anni watched her with disinterest. Much as she liked breasts, she wasn?t so into butts. ?Don?t you think you?re a bit old to be wearing miniskirts?? ?I?m only twenty four, thank you, and I am plenty youthful and sexy to be wearing it! And it still comes almost halfway down my thighs! It?s not like a hooker?s or anything.?


Her nipples perked up through her shirt. ?Oh! Just like last time!? She gave an experimental poke to one of the nubs. ?This is really impressive? they go through both my blouse and bra?? She grabbed both her nipples. ?Normally I?d be pretty self-conscious about this, but given my company here with the lesbo and the buxomizer, and what?s gonna happen anyway, I don?t really care.? She began to roll them a bit with her fingers, and the pleasure part of the spell kicked in. ?Oohhh this is great? Carline did it much less pleasurably?? Her nipples began to grow a bit as well, and Denise enjoyed it greatly. ?C?mon, let?s get the parts everyone sees all the time??


Now her breasts began to swell, and the blonde gasped. ?I really should?ve invested in a lower-cut shirt? ooh?? Her breasts already started at a decent size, comparable to Anni?s own, but as they grew, they were looking amazing. Anni hated to admit it, but between watching the growing mounds and Denise?s self-groping, she was getting turned on. Denise?s blouse was starting to smooth out around her chest, any loose parts or wrinkles being straightened. She began to pant a bit. ?Oh, momma. Did you make me all hot like this or is it just me? This is so much more than what Carline did.?


Her butt started expanding as well, and debatably unlike her breasts, it sorely needed some volume. The sad thing started filling with meat, growing and pushing its way against skirt and underwear. ?Yes! Yes yes yes! Let?s get some booty!? She let one of her hands switch to her butt, and it felt the growing plumpness. ?Th-this is great. I?m gonna get me ooh~? I?m gonna get any man I want with what I?ll have?? Her skirt began to rise and tighten from her butt?s increasing mass.


Meanwhile, her ever-enlarging breasts were pulling her blouse tight. Denise tried to figure out what to do about it, but she felt far too good to be bothered. ?Oohh? this is so good? I think I might actually cum by the end of this?? ?NO.? Anni said firmly. She sent out a wave of magic, and suddenly Denise?s growth stopped. ?Wh-what are you doing?? ?I?m not gonna have any of that kind of thing.? ?What? You mean me enjoying the spell?? ?No, I mean you trying to get off on it.? ?F-fine. If you want me to stop that, I will. But don?t cut me off from some delicious curves.? Anni nodded seriously and raised her hands to let it resume. ?Wait, Annilitia, first!?


Denise turned away from her and lifted her shirt, with some effort, over her breasts. ?Help me get this thing off.? She jabbed her thumb toward the hook on her bra. ?It?s pinching me pretty bad.? Anni quickly undid it, and her breasts came forth. Allie blushed on sight of their bare forms. ?Oh, Denise, they?re beautiful.? ?Well thank you.? She went to pull her shirt back over herself, but then had a realization. ?My boobs are gonna be restrained pretty badly by it anyway. Might as well let them free.?


Anni then let the spell resume, and felt Denise?s butt growing against her legs where she stood. With the spell again came the oddly concentrated pleasure. ?Anni, how do you expect me to not touch myself like this? It?s wonderful? it?s like sex, but with growing boobies instead of? sex.? She paused to think of a better metaphor. While she did so, her hand drifted to her breasts, which had definitively beat Tuicia?s and were well on their way to Allie?s. She began to take in handfuls of the swelling flesh. ?Why do you have anything against this? It?s so fulfilling? I wouldn?t even need a man if I could just do this every day?? Allie approached, having watched in mostly silence the entire time. ?Denise, can I??? She stopped and trailed off, looking unsure of herself. Denise was welcoming though. ?I know you want to touch them. And I really should see how they feel with someone else. Go on,? she said, bouncing slightly to jiggle her enlarging melons. ?Give my hooters a squeeze.? Allie tentatively put her delicate hand on one of the filling mounds and squeezed it gently. Denise gasped and quietly moaned. ?O-okay, maybe not. Not if Anni doesn?t want me to take it too far.? ?It?s Annilitia!? ?I don?t care.?


Allie removed her hand disappointedly and watched the expansion for a moment. ?You?re so hot, Denise. Er, I mean temperature-wise!? She blushed even deeper. ?Well, you?re pretty attractive too?? ?Not for you, Allie. I?m straight. Thanks for the compliments, though-OH!? Allie slapped her breast, a bit put-off. ?Why is it that just because I like girls I can?t compliment another one?s prettiness without them assuming-? ?Geez, sorry, Allie, I didn?t think you?d-? ?No, no, it?s fine?? Allie moved around to her back, and kneeled to see what was going on there. Denise?s butt had gotten huge in its absence of attention; her striped panties stretched dangerously tight against it and her skirt was beginning to ride up it. ?Truth be told, I kinda think I like butts better anyway.? She leaned forward and pressed her hands into the soft, flabby flesh of Denise?s butt. ?Whoo, Allie, what are you??? Allie leaned back again and began to run her hand over the soft cheeks. ?You?re lucky, Denise. You?ve got a nice, well-shaped butt. Just like mine.?


?Just keep it below third base down there.? Denise felt her breasts coming to a stop, as they?d had less to go to start with. She squealed with glee. ?They?re enormous! Allie, lookit!? She quickly turned around, allowing Anni to see them for the first time since they?d been bared. They jiggled nicely from the rapid motion, and their pale, supple skin looked so inviting. Allie stood up, or at least tried to, but she ran into the orbs on the way up. ?Oh? OH! Sorry, Denise!? She grabbed and held them to quell the resulting movement from them. ?A-Allie, they?re still so sensitive from the growth! D-don?t ohhh?? Allie released them, the blush she?d had for a while deepening further. ?S-sorry!? Now that both of them were standing front to front (or as close as they could get without contacting each other), it was apparent that there was only the smallest difference in size between the two maids? bosoms, in Denise?s favor.


?Y-yes! Yes!? She bounced a bit, trying to set her breasts in motion again. ?This is perfect! Now I just need-? She stopped talking as she heard and felt a small snapping. She hadn?t realized how very tight her panties had gotten from her growing rear, due to her pleasure and focus on her breasts. ?N-no! No! My underwear! I don?t care who I?m with, nobody?s seeing that much of me here!? Her hand went down to secure their place, lifting her skirt to reach her crotch as her butt went through the threads quickly. In moments, her panties gave way, and Denise stood with her hand being the only thing keeping them over her. ?A-a little help?? Allie crouched again and put her hand over them as well, inadvertently rubbing them against her. ?Allie, not like that!? She did a quick, reactionary swat with her hand, only too late realizing what that did. Allie blushed her hardest at the brief glimpse of the moistened slit, and Anni jerked her head away hastily.


Denise screamed. ?D-don?t look!? She hurriedly pulled her skirt as far down as it would go in the front, covering herself again. ?Just? no one say a word, okay?? Allie nodded, unable to form any words. ?S-see if my butt?s getting close!? She moved around behind Denise again and checked her butt out. Her skirt had ridden almost all the way up, only covering the very top of her juicy ass, and her butt itself was large, womanly, and enticing, though the growth was visibly slowing down as it neared completion.


?Oh, Denise,? Allie said, bending over and framing it with her hands. ?It?s beautiful. So big and round and soft?? ?Th-thank you, Allie.? Denise turned her torso to see herself. Her butt was big and round like she?d said; it stuck out very noticeably from her. Allie suddenly looked suspicious. ?Is my butt really that big?? She half turned and looked down herself as well. ?I didn?t think it was that big.? She muttered, lightly feeling her rear. Denise giggled. ?I might?ve overdone it a bit.? She dropped down to kneeling, and cupped her huge breasts happily. ?They?re so big and full? it?s amazing! And so erotic? you have no idea how wet I am.? ?DON?T! Want to hear it!? ?And this?? she said, stroking her plentiful bottom. ?It?s amazing too?? She sat and felt her buxom form gently for a while. ?But what am I gonna do for clothes? My blouse will be way too tight, and I don?t trust my skirt to not expose me right now.? Anni shrugged. ?Maybe Tuicia could whip something up. She?s good at that.?


Almost as though she?d been summoned by the mention of her name, Tuicia appeared in the doorway. ??ow is it going in? ?ere?? Her eyes travelled back and forth between Denise, who was topless and buxom, kneeling with her hands over her huge breasts, Allie, who was bent over behind her and feeling her own butt cautiously, and Anni, who was in front of her and admiring her handiwork with Denise?s breasts. ?What is?? ANNEE!? ?Shit.?

[Chaos Echo]

And hey, just cause I can and since she's fairly important, have an Allie.

And I could go on and on about how I hate anatomy, but I'll just leave it at I suck at hips.

[DevonCory]

Originally Posted by Chaos Echo

?What is?? ANNEE!? ?Shit.?

Hehehe. Fun one. I liked it.

[sadmanofshadows]

awesome!
Much love!
The only thing I have bad to say is that at times it got hard to tell who was speaking...
Otherwise amazing! can't wait for the next one!

[Chaos Echo]

So, I was looking at the viewcount, and I noticed it's



...sorry. I should probably be shot now.

Anyway, chapter 16

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As per Praeli?s request, Carline stuck around Redlich for the rest of the day. Surprisingly, with it being the small town that it was, she didn?t come across her and Rose again until nightfall when they all retired to the inn. Instead, she spent the day chatting up people, finding out why they were there, and it turned out to be basically equal parts locals and people there for Dalia?s speech. She had decided, though, even through the pretty bad depression she got from doing so, to ask exactly who was lost from pretty much everyone who didn?t tell her flat-out. Aphira and Praeli were right. She had to confront it. She heard of parents, children, siblings, lovers, pretty much any relation one could have within those 217 victims. At least, she thought after it was over, flopping down into her and Rose?s bed on her arrival at the room, she?d gotten over her silly and useless man-phobia while she was out, and that was a plus.


The next morning, that of the anniversary, things were inappropriately, or perhaps perfectly appropriately, sunny as Princess Dalia made her speech. It was, as Praeli had told Carline earlier, a combination of a memorial and a coronation. Dalia seemed rather emotionally invested, which, while somewhat improper, was understandable. The woman looked only a few years older than Carline, and royalty or not, she?d just lost both parents but a month ago. The princess herself looked regally beautiful, in an elaborate dress of many blues; quite different from the overtly sexy manner in which Ceyllitar?s princess presented herself. Back on the subject of the speech, though, Carline was surprised to find Praeli listening intently the entire time, with an expression of absolute seriousness.


The newly crowned queen had finished after a long address, and Carline had insisted that she and Praeli leave right away. They did, with Rose going back with her new boyfriend to wherever it was they lived. She and Carline had had a talk again before they went their separate ways, in which the sorceress tried to come to terms with her mother?s murderer. Rose really had reformed, and Carline had tried her hardest to forgive her for what she?d done, but?


Regardless, after that had been pleasantly uneventful. Amazingly, Praeli had been right about being able to use her heroism as credit, and they were perfectly happy to let her and Carline fly overseas to Baltrond for free. The several hour plane ride went by with only a bit of idle conversation, and now the two were on their way to Ectri?s house after catching a bus to the neighborhood, with Carline insisting they pay a fare for this one. Luckily for her, though, Aphira?s purse had included some money in it.


?So Praeli, I?ve been wondering? what did you do that got you all renowned anyway? I doubt just coming in and chasing me out of my mansion every now and then did it.? ?Eh, it helped. But seriously, you don?t remember?? ?Nah; being ostracized from society and all doesn?t do wonders for my current events skills.? ?Well?? Praeli scratched the back of her head. ?It was like? five years ago, maybe? Four? Remember Jade at all? That sorceress supremacist who decided our kind are the only ones worthy of living?? ?Now that you mention it?? ?Yeah, I just happened to be in the right place at the right time then. That there was when I first discovered how much power I can really put out. I shut her and her closest followers? asses down so fast.? ?Did you kill her?? ?Hell no. I was a pussy back then. I handed them over to the Knights; they keep them under constant magic drain in prison.? ?Back then? Does that mean you?ve killed now?? ?No, it was only ever personal enough for me to want to kill when it came to you.? ?Er?? Carline wasn?t exactly sure how to feel about that, so she started a new line of thought.


?S-so, you mentioned an Arice when you were talking about your family yesterday. Or is it two days ago? Freakin? time zones.? ?Arice? She?s my little sister by? seevveen years.? She said it as though she had to think a bit too hard. ?She?s a total pussy.? ?What?? ?Yeah, she doesn?t want to kick ass at all. Total disgrace to the family name apparently.? Praeli shrugged. ?I don?t really care though. I mean, yeah, it?d be cool if every one of us carried on our legacy and all, but? I think she?s fine as is. Especially since I never intend to be tied down, and someone in the family?s gotta poop out some babies for it to continue.? ?So where is she now?? ?Well, I know I?m no-damn-where near responsible enough to take care of her, so she lives with our grandparents. She still stays with me for a few days at a time every now and then though.? ?Where do you-? ?I?m not telling you that, bitch! What is this, twenty fucking questions? No way in hell am I telling you where I live. I?m still struggling with being a bigger person and dealing with you as is, Mrs. Murderer of My Dad and Mum and Brother.? The rest of the walk was in silence after that.


Regardless, the two reached the house Aphira had given Carline the location of. It was rather modest, in the suburb that the two were in. Apparently Ectri had taken after her mother when it came to home grandiosity. Carline ran her hand through her short blonde hair. ?Am I supposed to go by Carol, or my actual name?? ?Hell if I know. Let?s just ring her doorbell and find out if she knows who you are.? Praeli closed the remaining distance quickly and did just that. There was a bit of silence, and they heard a ?Come in, I can?t come to the door!? from inside.


Praeli opened the door and went in, making no effort to keep it open for Carline. Slightly miffed at this, Carline looked around at the house?s innards to keep from calling her out on it. Just like Aphira?s, the house was pretty normal inside as well. A bright, neon-blue haired woman came out of another room, holding a tray of cookies with oven mitts on. ?Hello, Praeli and Carline. I?ve been expecting you.? She nodded down at the tray. ?I?ve made some cookies for us. Let?s sit down in the dining room and talk.?


The two younger women sat on either side of the table, while Ectri got all the cookies on a plate and set the oven mitts aside. As she came over to sit down herself, Carline looked her over. Her hair was strange; it was parted in the middle, many blue strands coming down to frame her face, and yet at the back it was very long, coming in around her upper back, but flaring back out as it approached its end near her hips. Carline briefly wondered how long it took her to style it that way, or if she just used magic. Ectri seemed to have deposited herself in her mid-twenties age-wise, and possessed a pretty average-shaped body, almost the same height as Carline. She was very pale, almost completely white, and she, just like her mother, had eyes and lips the same color as her hair. She had on a deeply v-necked sleeveless shirt which bared her midriff, and white pants that ended just above her knees.


Ectri seemed to have noticed Carline studying her, but didn?t acknowledge it. ?So, Carline, Mom filled me in on a quick blurb of what happened at her place with you two.? ?Oh? Did she? ah? did she tell you everything?? ?Not everything, but she did mention your titty spell.? ?Bah. Troublemaker. She would.? ?And since I know you?re curious after seeing her?? Ectri grabbed the top of her shirt and pulled it sideways, exposing her bright blue nipple. Praeli hastily swallowed the cookie she?d already grabbed and was in the middle of eating, and yelled at her. ?Damn it, woman, keep your clothes on! I don?t wanna see that!? Ectri let go and sighed. ?Prude.?


?That aside, though, Praeli, I?m honored to have you here, being the hero that you are and all.? ?Stuff it. I?m sick of being talked to like I?m some kinda goddess. I mean, I like the free shit that comes with it, but being revered as a hero gets annoying after a while. I?m still just a woman.? ?Why don?t you ever join the Knights? Their organization is set on justice and whatnot.? ?The Knights? Nah. They?re useful, but I don?t like organized shit like that. Justice should be spontaneous and ready. And I don?t think I?d be able to fight as much that way.? Praeli paused to take a bite of the second cookie she was waving. ?And they?re all sho pretenshious wiff how they add ?shir? and ?dame? in front of their namesh. No one knighted them!? ?Swallow, Praeli.?


Ectri watched Praeli for a moment before turning to Carline. ?So anyway, what?re you here for? Mom didn?t really give me too much detail, aside from me needing to talk with you.? ?Well?? Carline hesitated, hoping Ectri wouldn?t doubt her so quickly like Aphira did. ?It?s about Bella.? ?Bella? Wasn?t she that mercenary out killing a bunch of sorceresses a few years ago?? ?Yeah. Thing is, she came back.? ?D-did she?? There was something in her voice. Not quite nervousness; more like guilt. ?I mean, Praeli and I stopped her quickly, and it turns out she reformed after that, but?? ?Well, that?s good. But what?s that got to do with me?? ?Your mom said that you were experimenting with how to bring people back from the dead, so-? ?W-well I never got anywhere!? Ectri said these words firmly. ?You hear me? Nowhere!?


Carline stared at the sudden shift in demeanor. Ectri quickly reverted to a more reserved attitude. ?Sorry. It?s just that I started that so long ago to bring back someone who meant a lot to me. It?s? never amounted to anything.? Praeli cocked her head quizzically. ?If you didn?t, then??? ?I dunno!? Ectri interjected quickly. ?But I didn?t have a thing to do with it!? She calmed down again after getting stares from the other two women. ?Ectri, you?re acting kind of strange. Are you feeling alright?? ?Praeli, idiot, she?s obviously hiding something.? ?No! I?m not hiding anything. Please, if it were something so serious as someone like Bella returning from death, don?t you think I?d be a bit more forthcoming if I had anything? I?m sorry? it?s just a sensitive subject.? ?Let?s approach a different way then. Has anyone talked to you about your tests within a reasonable time of about a year ago??


Ectri rested her chin on her hands in thought. ?Actually, I think I do remember something like that. I wrote it down then. It?s in the other room I think; let me go fetch it.? Ectri got up and left the room. Praeli grabbed yet another cookie. ?So whaddayou think? Think she did it?? ?No, but she?s definitely hiding something. Maybe we should keep our voices down, y?know, so she can?t hear us?? ?What do I care if the bitch hears us? If she?s good and all, then she shouldn?t care, and if she?s evil, then we can take her, right?? ?I don?t know? she does have a few centuries of experience and magic-building over us. And I don?t think she?s evil. More just trying to be inconspicuous. Badly. And why would she write down-? Carline suddenly stopped. ?Is that her??


Praeli turned her head to look out the window, and saw Ectri briskly walking away down the street. ?What the hell?? She jumped up and opened the window, and shouted out it. ?HEY! THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!? Ectri half-turned her head at the voice, and broke into a run. Praeli jumped out the window after her and gave chase. Even though Ectri had a head start, Praeli quickly caught up with her due to much greater physical activeness and half a foot of height advantage. She grabbed the woman and threw her over her shoulder, walking her back to the house while she struggled. The front door was kicked open, and Praeli came back into the dining room. She dropped Ectri on her butt unceremoniously.


?So, what the hell was that about? And why didn?t you just teleport or something?? Ectri got up as she answered. ?I thought it was worth a shot to get away. And I don?t like overrelying on magic.? She sat back in her chair as though nothing had happened. ?But I wasn?t lying. Someone did ask me about my studies. I think it might be my fault. I think she might?ve been the one to bring back Bella.? ?So you did know, you lying bitch!? ?Praeli, that?s not helping. Ectri, exactly what happened?? Ectri looked off to the side. ?I?m not telling you.? ?What. Ectri, please, this might-? ?I?m not telling you,? Ectri interrupted, ?unless you do something for me.? ?And what would that be?? ?I want you to show me a spell I?ve never seen before.?


Carline racked her brain for a spell she might know that a 500+ year old sorceress, who was also the daughter of the world?s most powerful one, wouldn?t. She landed on just one very predictable spell. ?You?re not serious are you?? Ectri cracked a wide smile at Carline?s realization. ?Yep. Bring on the jubblies.? Carline waved a hand, so experienced now at the buxom spell that it took little effort to do. Ectri wiggled a bit in her chair. ?To be honest, I was gonna tell you anyway. I just wanted to see how this feels.? Praeli walked over resignedly and sat down in her spot, taking the cookie tray closer to her. ?Can?t just have a normal-ass day with you, witch, can I, without you blowing up someone?s boobs?? ?Oh, quiet, Praeli. I?ve grown to like doing this. Do you want me to do you too?? Praeli crossed her arms over her chest. ?Fuck no! Stay the hell away from my tits!?


Ectri, meanwhile, was excitedly staring at her breasts. ?Mom said you?d just come across this randomly. What book was it in?? ?Uh? Magic of Physical Self-Alteration, I think?? ?Really?? She thought idly as her nipples began to poke through her shirt. She instinctually reached up to scratch, as though as was an itch. Upon contact with the hardened nub, though, she stopped her line of thought and looked down. ?Oh! Oh my!? She rubbed it slower and more carefully. ?Is this how this starts? Who thought this up anyway?? ?I don?t know? the author says he?s not the one who did it.? ?Of course he isn?t! Even men who can do magic with their silly methods rarely conceive new spells? even though this seems just the kind one would think up?? She was feeling up her breasts now. ?I feel so hot? like I?m in the mood? why would this even be part of it?? Carline shrugged. ?Dunno. Never questioned it.?


Ectri?s breasts began growing at that point, filling her yellow top. She happily grabbed both and felt them swelling in her hands. ?If you?d been the one to discover this? my god, you?d be rich, Carline! This feels? incredible?? Her eyes closed while she fondled the enlarging mounds, which steadily tightened her shirt. ?So, what kinds of questions do you have?? Carline watched the blissful woman feel herself up, and responded. ?First, Aphira said something about the other world she created-? ?Created? No, she didn?t create it. Mom likes to exaggerate. She helped improve it and convinced all that stuff of legend and myth to return there, but the Otherworld?s always been around.?


More and more of Ectri?s stomach showed as her breasts demanded her shirt in their growth. She didn?t seem to mind, though, and continued to grope them unbothered. ?A-as you were saying.? ?Well, is this person from it, do you think?? ?Not at all. She looked Gatznian.? ?Gatznian?? Carline thought. ?Anni?s Gatznian, isn?t she?? ?She was real tall, too. Like? 6?4, 6?5 maybe.? Carline was relieved on hearing that, since Anni was nowhere near that tall. ?Wait? was she?? Carline tried to remember how Bella had described the woman who revived her. While she did, Ectri leaned forward, allowing the table to take the weight of her breasts. By now they were both overflowing her neckline and the bottom of her shirt, and the bottoms of her breasts already hung out of it.


Praeli interjected between cookies, very deliberately maintaining eye contact with Ectri and avoiding looking at her breasts. ?Since bitchface there doesn?t seem to be good at memory, I?ll go. Lessee? mid-lengthish hair.? ?Yep, deep red and a bit more than shoulder length.? ?Uh? emo-like over an eye or somesuch.? ?Oh yes, very seductively.? ?Pretty but mean face.? ?So hot, and in that lovely but somewhat darker tone Gatznian women have. Red eyes too.? ?Big ol? curves.? ?Yes!? With perfect timing to the current part of the questioning, her breasts slipped out from beneath her shirt, the pale twin orbs pushing out on the table. ?Oh! Sorry!? She threw her hands over them, covering her cyan nipples. Praeli waved a hand dismissively. ?Don?t bother. I don?t care any more, and Carline the Lesbo I seriously doubt does.?


Ectri released herself, and looked at Carline. ?So you are gay then? I thought you were married to a man before?? ?Because I?m bi, thank you, Praeli. But yes, I guess that means I?m into women too.? ?Really?? Ectri said sarcastically, pressing her arms into the soft flesh of her massive mammaries. ?I never would have guessed.? Praeli laughed. ?I will admit, though, she gave you some pretty nice knockers.? She reached out and laid a hand on one of Ectri?s breasts, and the sorceress breathed a little faster. ?Oh my?? Praeli let her hand slide over the lovely form of her breast. ?I have to say, Carline, even though I?m not into chicks, there?s something magical about when you do this spell.? ?Really? Something magical about a spell?? ?Shut up.? Ectri?s breasts slowed and stopped, coming to a large and round finish. The two globes took up almost a third of the round table, and the other two women could have easily fondled them without moving anything but their arms. She sighed a sigh of contentment. ?I think they?re done growing.?


?Good. Maybe we can get back on track.? ?Where was I? Oh yes, her curves. Quite nice. Her breasts were big and full and bouncy, her butt was tight and round, her legs firm and muscled?? ?That was the other thing! Bella- er, Rose, said she had a bit of muscle!? ?A bit? A bit hardly does justice! She had these wonderful, solid thighs, thick with both womanly fat and muscle? she wasn?t even wearing a shirt, just a sports bra, showing off her great six-pack abs? she had these big biceps; beautiful, strong arms that still were feminine enough to not be off-putting?? Ectri trailed off at the other two women staring at her. ?Um??


Carline turned to Praeli. ?Well, I think I know just how she got the information from Ectri.? ?N-no, it?s not like that!? Ectri exclaimed, flustered. ?Okay, yeah, sure, I fucking bet.? Praeli jabbed one of her again hard nipples. ?And I?m sure your nips here are still the spell, too. Check your panties. Probably all wet from that loving description.? ?Okay, okay, so maybe she did seduce me. But I definitely didn?t sleep with her!? ??but you did give out the information on your research.? ?And you?re a total dyke, too.? ?Don?t tell Mom that! Please!? ?What, does she not approve of-? ?No, she wouldn?t care. But I?ve spent so long painting myself asexual in her eyes, and I don?t want that ruined because of a flawless seduction!? Praeli grabbed yet another cookie. ?Whatever. Fucking weird request, but whatever.?


Carline was determined to stay on track. ?Did she give you a name at all?? ?No, not a thing.? Carline thought hard. The only darker-skinned, red-haired people she knew were Anni and Allie, but neither was even close to six feet or had muscle. ?Um, Carline, I don?t mean to interrupt your thinking?? Ectri started, ?but do? uh? does this wear off?? She rested her arms on her large, heavy bosoms. ?Hm? Oh, yes, in a day or two.? ?Good. These look and feel great, but I don?t think I?d be able to go about my day with them.? ?What should we do about that woman then?? ?I don?t know. I?ll get into contact with Mom and we?ll figure something out.? ?And what about me?? ?You, Carline? just ignore her. That?s the best I can tell you. Otherwise, if you want my honest opinion? do all the good you can.? ?What? What does that-? ?You heard me. You may think the public will never see you positively, but any reputation can be turned around.? ?But I-? ?You can do it, Carline. I believe in you. Mom believes in you. I bet Praeli believes in you, don?t you, Praeli?? The one being spoken to looked up, not having been listening to the last bits of conversation. ?Hnh?? ?Praeli! Did you seriously eat all of the cookies?? She swallowed the last bit of evidence. ?Nah, no, not at all.? ??so as I was saying, just let Mom and I handle it for now. You two, just keep doing? whatever it is you do.? Praeli was at attention. ?Got it.? Carline nodded acknowledgement. ?If I could just help more?? ?No, it?s fine.? Ectri turned her attention to her engorged breasts. ?Now, if it?s not too rude, I?d like you two to leave. I?d like some? alone time with these.?

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I totally meant to write "pop out some babies", but I hit another o as I was typing, and really, I think it works better.

But more seriously, I have some questions for those of you who want to respond:

What do you think of the ratio of story/expansion? Should I be leaning it more one way or another, or is it good as is?

And do you think my writing, and the expansions, are good enough? I mean, I am always too harsh on my own work, but I don't think it's detailed enough on either side. Not enough "fluff", or whatever. But I've always been awful at that and really don't know how to pad it.

[sadmanofshadows]

Okay, First, Hahahahahaha over nine thousand.

anyway.

Ratio= it could use more expansion but if its a serious chapter i don't really expect much so it's fine as is. Though in chapters like this one i found the expansion a bit out of place haha not a bad thing, just out of place.
For descriptions, In this chapter at least, I kind of lost track of where she was size wise until she was big enough to take up most of the table.
It could just be me but details about milestones in growth would help i think...
and if any of my comments/critiques are confusing let me know and i'll try to explain better
Still, I liked this chapter!
I would like to know more about the Gatznian people now haha
like as a people... if you know what i mean?
anyway. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Woo!

[Chaos Echo]

Thanks for the advice/critique/whatever. I understood fine.

Haa, you would be particularly excited for the next chapter.

And just a note for everyone, the story's halfway over now; 16 of 29 chapters. No wait that means it was halfway over last chapter...

[Chaos Echo]

Another question for you guys: d'you think I should put this on DeviantART? And a further question then, going along with it: for anyone more familiar with DeviantART's ToS, does anything in the story breach it, if I do go to put it up?

[sadmanofshadows]

I think you should. Do know that doing so will open you to a lot of flame
but if you're ok with that it would also allow you to post more things about your characters if you wanted.
I don't think anything you have put in the stories so far could get you in trouble
though... i've never had to deal with the rules myself...

[Chaos Echo]

I don't care if I get flamed. Whatever. My main concern is if I'd need to edit anything to make it fly over there. I'm not sure what they allow as far as... er... sexness? I mean, I don't intend to get much more detailed than what happened in chapter 8 (the one where Carline got huge and climaxed twice) as far as that goes, but things like that are my issue.

[sadmanofshadows]

you should be fine. but just to be on the safe side i'd ask some of the more well known fellas out there about what content gets the hammer.

[Chaos Echo]

Alright; I decided to start putting it up over there too. A chapter a day should (hopefully) be going up until it's caught up.