Monstergirl Quest (monstergirl, TF, seduction, evil conversion) Dev/Suggestion Thrd

[Keichan]

Originally Posted by rb9

Kewl. Want to write some dialogue? Go back a page or two, I still need dialogue for the Venus Weed bad end and Harpy bad end.

As you probably noticed, no RPG elements. No money, no experience. There is equipment though, but it's found just by exploring (a la Zelda). Actually, this pretty much is a Zelda-ish clone.

I've seen. But like I said, I'm reluctant to WRITE dialogue, but I wouldn't mind contributing as an editor instead.

Also, you might want to check out Dassyutsu, it's a Japanese TG adventure game developed with RPGMaker. I loved the way it used RPGMaker to create a non-RPG, something that it seems most TF/TG game developers completely overlook in favor of the leveling/random encounter scheme.

I'll upload it to MegaUpload sometime later. I have to run some errands and get something to eat so I can think properly.

EDIT: You know what, I'll think about writing some dialogue, but again, I think I'd shine more as an editor, since it's more a process of revision than creating new content, and I wouldn't want to upset the balance you've already established with your writing and such.

[golgari]

i'd contribute, but have a severe lack of skillz, sry rb9

[Devilot]

My comments; I realize this is a very preliminary version, but I just want to point out everything I've noticed:

a) The "Celebrate" as Celes, Bath, and Sacrifice Bad Ends end a bit abruptly -- it would be nice to at least have a brief "after" scene. If you're ever feeling especially ambitious, the Celes "Bad End" would actually be a pretty good spot to hang a plot fork giving you the option to play as a monstergirl instead.

b) You haven't yet flagged the cave or similar areas as "no save."

c) The regular catgirl and Rosa bad ends don't go anywhere -- they don't end in a game over, fork the plot, or anything. You get to wander a bit, then hit a snag and have to quit to the title. A bit more closure would be nice.

d) I might be willing to help out. I've done some writing before, and I've also worked with RPGMaker 2k and 2k3 a bit. Just dabbled, though.

e) A nice cute AR would be nice.

f) Hmmm... running out of things to say at the moment. Guess I'll end here for now.

g) Oh, wait, just remembered something: Someone mentioned an rb9 yahoo group. Does it still exist? If so, does anyone have the address?

[Lady Amanda]

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ricoba...guid=118767469

you can find the yahoo group there. enjoy

[keitaro_2006]

Hello rb9, this is bandot11a from your yahoo group, i will keep your group alive, in facts, there is more alive nowadays because your game IMO...

[209Icey]

Originally Posted by keitaro_2006

Hello rb9, this is bandot11a from your yahoo group, i will keep your group alive, in facts, there is more alive nowadays because your game IMO...

You couldn't be more right. hahaha.

[Lady Amanda]

Well, the game is good. The artwork in rb's group is also very good. I hope to have a story to contribute soon. I'm not much good with the art work and maniping of photos or I'd contribute there too.

[keitaro_2006]

It is too bad that i have not learned the RPG Maker Map Maker T_T For now, i can only help you as a tester / reviewer and perhaps a creative to some idea XD

[Shattering Howl]

Hey RB should I e-mail any artwork finished or post it up in the group? Might as well post on the main forums at least once while I'm here heh.

[209Icey]

Tell me I'm NOT the only person checking this thread every half an hour? XD Because if it is, then I'd be pretty pathetic. :/

[erolunai]

Well, not every half-hour, but I must admit I'm enthusiastic over the new release myself.

[Lady Amanda]

I've been eagerly awaiting the new release myself and have been checking in on the thread a lot.