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[spacemonkeys]

yeah i get what you mean but i think it was she inflated cos she and Chris both bought special herbs and when they mixed it reacted badly, maybe Chris is a transsexual or maybe its just lazy lazy writing

[generallyawesome]

Until we can get a definitive answer from Expansion-Fan comics I'm going to go with the latter

[Valeyard Vince]

Genetic Destiny, a very hot and sexy comic written by The Process Forums' very own Element, is out now!

[J Yubari]

Meta-Fiction Love Story is now available for download. This comic was written by our very own Valeyard Vince and illustrated by Dai.

[dragon6860]

Hey guys! Writer here for Lin's Rounding, and perhaps I can answer some questions?

[generallyawesome]

Originally Posted by dragon6860

Hey guys! Writer here for Lin's Rounding, and perhaps I can answer some questions?

Hi there, thanks for showing up. I just want to start by saying that I did enjoy the comic as it did feature a wide variety of body expansions that are not featured very often. I hope I did not offend you with my initial review of the comic, its just that after I read it I felt that there were two plot holes in the final piece.

1) As mentioned in my first post, on page 4 (of my PDF, page 2 of the actual comic) Lin wonders where Chris purchased the special herb. The next page then shows Lin purchasing the special spice from the store. I would like to know what happened there.

2) Page 4 also has Lin refer to Chris using male terminology - Him/He. However when Chris arrives in page 15 He is quite clearly female. The question is was Chris always a woman or did he change due to the effects of the spice?

I think page 5 is the key to this mess of plot holes, say had it depicted a male Chris purchasing the spice from the store and returning later as a woman, the plot holes would have mostly been removed. Yes, it would still not explain how Chris became female, but the "to be continued" at the end would give partial closure in knowing that the answer may be in a second installment.

Thanks for reading my questions and I do hope you answer them. Again I would be very sorry if I offended you in an earlier post, writing for comics is not easy (I have attempted it myself in a number of commissions).

generallyawesome

[dragon6860]

Oh no, and no worries at all! This was in fact my first comic script, and while I've written a lot of normal stories, this was the first time that I've tried to write a comic. Very tricky, as many of the descriptions and whatnot you have to streamline and figure out where the "breaks" are in the flow of the story.

As for the plotholes, I think this stems from miscommunication between myself and the artist. But I'll be sure to try and improve with my next story! I think you'll like it, I'm having a lot of fun making the world!

[generallyawesome]

I can accept that, It was my initial thought anyway. But just to be clear, Is Chris a man that got turned into a woman or was she always a woman?

As a fan of TG comics it would be a thing to look forward to in the next one

[halifax32]

I'd love to join the website, but CCBill is probably one of the worst online services. An issue I had with credit cards over five years ago has flagged my name as a potential risk, and no amount of time can change that apparently. And it sucks, because so many sites use it.

[J Yubari]

Originally Posted by halifax32

I'd love to join the website, but CCBill is probably one of the worst online services. An issue I had with credit cards over five years ago has flagged my name as a potential risk, and no amount of time can change that apparently. And it sucks, because so many sites use it.

We accept other forms of payment as mentioned on the first page of this thread.

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[BillPratt]

Originally Posted by halifax32

I'd love to join the website, but CCBill is probably one of the worst online services. An issue I had with credit cards over five years ago has flagged my name as a potential risk, and no amount of time can change that apparently. And it sucks, because so many sites use it.

Try being on the other end and getting cut off and your funds impounded for violating their terms of service because the porn was just a wee bit too much for them.

[halifax32]

Originally Posted by BillPratt

Try being on the other end and getting cut off and your funds impounded for violating their terms of service because the porn was just a wee bit too much for them.

Sure, but five years? I understand that they're trying to protect their assets, but how much time is going to be enough? I want to give them money and they don't want it.

Glad to hear you have Paypal as a payment option, that's great. I'll look into it soon, sign up.