Looking for test readers.

BillPratt · 05-10-2020

Heavy re-spin of a story I've been working on for a while now. Turns out the folks I was writing it for didn't realize that a story about a cursed Eroge would involve Anime style art.

Rather than removing the Anime, I'm testing to see if the story paces well for the 15 page count at Expansion Fan.

Ted introduces Phil to an Eroge (A Japanese interactive sex story-game) that Ted's been having trouble beating. Phil dives into the game like he would any other game looking for exploits he can take advantage of and... things get a bit out of hand.

05-10-2020	#1
BillPratt 789th level Draco-Ninja Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: In my home. Posts: 2,047	Looking for test readers. Heavy re-spin of a story I've been working on for a while now. Turns out the folks I was writing it for didn't realize that a story about a cursed Eroge would involve Anime style art. Rather than removing the Anime, I'm testing to see if the story paces well for the 15 page count at Expansion Fan. Ted introduces Phil to an Eroge (A Japanese interactive sex story-game) that Ted's been having trouble beating. Phil dives into the game like he would any other game looking for exploits he can take advantage of and... things get a bit out of hand.