08-30-2010 | #13 |
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It's a pretty good story, I suppose that's the kind of conflict you wanted in this kind of Transformation. Although if I didn't watch an Alan Wake playthrough, I think I might've been complaining the lack of depth in parts of the page, but it does make sense because it is the choose your own path story. Anyway, it was pretty good, sure there was a missed process or rather an off screen process, it's fine, I think there might be a couple of typos in some parts, but it's okay enough that I think you should write your own stories about rather than hoping one could jump on the chance or using someone else's story to make off of, unless it's from a shared universe. I think you should try to make a few of your own stories to see if it gets closed enough.
About the story itself there is alot of things that I think you can make more of in this branching kind of story, because I'm thinking there's alot of things that could've been different for the characters. Like how you made Karyn's situation worse by having her choosing to wish herself to be seen as a pet rather than a person. That ticked me off mostly because of how I view that being an anthro is still being a human and as one character states "I guess half human is better than no human at all." Meaning since she still has her humanity, still like herself, she can still be seen as a person, no, she still is a person. Especially with the wishing stone she could have had everyone see her as a person instead of an animal, however given the treatment you gave her it makes sense that the characters would think the way they did. The way it ended was okay, even if it was uneventful and it did show how the character deeply regrets and hates the situation she was put into, it's just that there could've been better things. But since it's a transformation story it's bound to be a bittersweet ending regardless. It's just that it bugs me that she chose to be a pet instead of being treated like a human. Overall the story is fine, it's not bad, but it's not that great either, it's okay. |
08-31-2010 | #14 |
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Re: TF Romance
Did you read the very original branch for this story? Wishes can't be reversed. At all. People will see her as a pig, not an anthro pig, no matter what.
I had more planned for the story though, including potentially reversing a lot of the worst bits of this. Just haven't had the energy to go through with it. Suppose I should have remembered this is the process forum. People really care about the transformation here, whereas I'm more of an aftermath guy. Flattered you think I should write my own stories though. Actually had one planned a bit, I'm just really undisciplined and have trouble making myself write. I can't remember who said it first, but to paraphrase: "I don't like writing. I like having written." |
10-25-2010 | #15 |
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I'll answer your questions in the PM when I eventually get to it. Two stories that actually involve this kind of romance should interest you mostly the second one actually.
http://doc.tf-media.net/Stories/MrNi...dladyshow.html In this story her love for her husband kept her from being taken and losing to the bad guy here. Although this is a major TF story any dealings with the plot may happen later. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4673826/ This is probably the kind of story you're looking for but you need an account to view it. A mysterious virus turns about half people of the world into anthro lizards, in this particular story a married couple's love is put into the ultimate test. |
11-02-2010 | #16 |
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That lizard one was pretty much exactly what I was looking for.
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11-02-2010 | #17 |
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The Pro, I liked the pig story.
I'd recommend checking out Mule Boy's stories on FA: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/muleboy/ Pay particular attention to Strange Love (skunk romance, some violence), A Special Forgotten Place (lizard demon romance), and The Bog (deer romance). Forewarned: In all of the above stories, the male is TFed, the female has already been TFed. |
11-27-2010 | #18 |
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Just thought I let everyone know that I'm starting to post the continuation of the Amazing Leopard Lady Show at the forums in Doc's Lab as I edit the story.
This expanded story will definitely fall under the category of TF romance. http://www.thelabforum.com/forum/vie...php?f=8&t=1553 |
11-28-2010 | #19 |
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Awesome.
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01-26-2011 | #21 |
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Too bad that there's not that many comics that involve those situations, here's the first one that went into this after the transformation.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4588383/ Here's the end: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4644754 Here's the one about Nibz's last story but it's not a comic, just illustrated parts of the transformation. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5090308 But the last picture is still heart warming. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5090342 Then I remember Newenglander's commissions with Ulario. Tara the anthro Snow leopard http://us.vclart.net/vcl/Artists/Ula...a/index01.html Sheila the anthro bear woman who becomes one if she doesn't get coffee. http://us.vclart.net/vcl/Artists/Ula...2/index01.html Laurie the anthro collie http://us.vclart.net/vcl/Artists/Ula...e/index01.html |
01-26-2011 | #22 |
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It's definitely got story potential no matter how you look at it. Creates a lot of interesting conflict.
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07-19-2011 | #23 |
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I just remember that ADF made a couple of romance commissions too.
This one is a funny sequence of the guy's girlfriend becoming a dragon girl during sex. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6088341/ I can't believe I forgot about this sequence as well. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241334/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241343/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241355/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241358/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241365/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3241374/ Also the second part of Jit's "My Pet Girlfriend" comic now qualifies too. |
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