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Unread 10-14-2019   #1
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Comic script that will never be published by anyone

Dave and Tim are instant best friends after meeting at a lake-side vacation spot. Soon to be broken up to head home with their respective single parents, they decide the only thing they can do to keep on hanging out is to get their parents married.

Fun and breast expansion ensues.
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Interesting. I'm not having a problem with it in Acrobat reader, Chrome, or Edge. What are you using as a viewer?
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Re: Comic script that will never be published by anyone

Works fine for me
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Re: Comic script that will never be published by anyone

The story is pretty fun, and I really like the concept of using playing cards for inciting changes.

I think I'll put this in alongside the other possible story adaptation ideas I have piled in the corner, if it's all the same to you.
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Re: Comic script that will never be published by anyone

Not a problem and an honour. But a warning on what killed this story: the kids. One person with a group I sometimes write for described it perfectly: "People under 18 do not exist in porn." Even if they are not involved in the porn, so much as mentioning them in a story can bring down the unholy wrath of credit card processors.
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Not a problem and an honour. But a warning on what killed this story: the kids. One person with a group I sometimes write for described it perfectly: "People under 18 do not exist in porn." Even if they are not involved in the porn, so much as mentioning them in a story can bring down the unholy wrath of credit card processors.
I realized that immediately when reading the the character descriptions, and that if I were to ever approach this story I may have to find clever workarounds to the child aspect because, as you say, even if under 18 characters aren't involved with any adult acts, it could still raise red flags for certain outlets.

Having kids present in the story is what generates much of the humor from their ignorance to the sexual implications happening around them, but I think there's way of making slight changes without losing the humor.

It's honestly the playing card angle that intrigues me the most, so if I ever do anything it would probably lean more towards that - even if the mechanics of the plot isn't wholly 1-to-1
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