The Good Son (Complete)

[Obsidian Reaver]

Hello all,

The Good Son is my first TG story, so I hope it's up to par with the other content here in the TG forum.

Since TG seems to have a strong following, I may be posting in this sub-forum more often.

Hope you enjoy, and tell me what you think!

[Chaos Echo]

That was awesome, especially for a first time.

You should definitely continue with TGs.

And yeah, I'm pretty sure the only other one that competes with TG is TF, while BE dominates both.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by Chaos Echo

That was awesome, especially for a first time.

You should definitely continue with TGs.

And yeah, I'm pretty sure the only other one that competes with TG is TF, while BE dominates both.

Thanks, Chaos. Good to know at least one person so far liked the story.

I didn't realize TG was so popular. Then again, I've always rated it as a step below TF and Growth, so it's probably just my own bias blinding me to its popularity.

Btw, I just noticed your request that I respond to my own questions in the "Who are you" thread. I didn't initially see it, and I apologize. I will answer them shortly.

[thisguy18]

I thought that was really good for a first time TG story.I thought it was well written. Nice job =)

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by thisguy18

I thought that was really good for a first time TG story.I thought it was well written. Nice job =)

I thank you, good sir. I'm glad you liked it.

[thisguy18]

No problem! Hope to see more stories like this from you!

[The Goggles]

I quite enjoyed that. It was an interesting way of presenting the genre. Is that the right term? Genre? Whatever, the point is, it was... You know. Good. Thank you!

[frice2000]

Nice story. Really could've used some better context and framing though. Also description of setting and appearance could've used some more work but overall very nice transformation.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by frice2000

Nice story. Really could've used some better context and framing though. Also description of setting and appearance could've used some more work but overall very nice transformation.

Good points. I'll try to work on that in the future.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Chaos Echo]

I just remembered I intended to do a TG at some point where the victim was sleeping as well.

Oh well~

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by Chaos Echo

I just remembered I intended to do a TG at some point where the victim was sleeping as well.

Oh well~

You're not going to do it?

[Chaos Echo]

Originally Posted by Obsidian Reaver

You're not going to do it?

I might eventually still.

It's just I've still got nine chapters left in my running BE story, and I have a few other side TG ideas, and something I've promised someone on DeviantART.