Trouble Before Twilight

[LOD]

That makes me feel a lot better. I was afraid that she was pitied too much from the way I presented her.

[Captain Ash]

Uh! I feel sorry for all the girls in the purse!
I wonder why Gwen didn't put Casey in her purse like the other girls.
Well, it gives the story for tension for sure.
Now, I really want to know how this story ends.

Captain Ash

[LOD]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

I wonder why Gwen didn't put Casey in her purse like the other girls.
Captain Ash

Because she was in the shower and went unnoticed.

[Edit] I totally blew this response. For some reason I thought you were talking about Wendy. Casey's fate was due to the very careless and spiteful way that Gwen delt with the situation. I can imagine her running after the shrinking vehicle and purposefully stomping on it just to stop her escape.

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

Now, I really want to know how this story ends.

I'll give you a hint. Jen brought one of Ryan's failed experiments I mentioned in 'A Day in The Life' with her.

[LOD]

Thanks to the suggestions from other writers like Wussy and Illun I have rewritten the purse scene in Trouble Before Twilight pt2. (Posted above)


I hope you guys think that it's better suited for the way the story has been progressing.