12-13-2018 | #1 |
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New Story
I've read and appreciated contributions to this community for years, and I've finally decided to try and make my own contribution.
I uploaded it to Overflowingbra, link below, but I don't consider it a final draft. I keep changing little things here and there, so input is greatly appreciated. I will be very honest and say I loosely threw a plot together just to justify a story series focused solely on transformations, BE being the first. http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=1117
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04-29-2019 | #2 |
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Re: New Story
Not bad. The set-up is actually quite intriguing. The idea of a woman who can change her shape at will has lots of possibilities. Have you thought of writing a sequel where she tries other transformations?
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05-06-2019 | #3 |
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Re: New Story
I have several chapters in mind, it's just a matter of when I can finish them- I think I will probably move it away from the 2nd person perspective as well. I was trying something I never see in other stories but that in itself caused hurdles.
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