Test Reading: Bimbos, Expanding Boobs and Early 80's Nerd Science

BillPratt · 05-27-2018

Looking for readers for a comic script.

60 pages, of which I want to know if the first chapter can attract and hold an audience, so in this pass only the first chapter is being exposed.

It's 1982. Harold and Clayton are Nerds. They play D&D, anxiously await the third Star Wars Film, tinker with computers, and they are about to build a device that records, edits, and alters reality.

Meanwhile… Their friend and TA Isaac just bombed his thesis defense because the panel refused to look past the unfortunate side effect of his research: The female participants all grew enormous breasts. To a man who will one day be the greatest scientist in human history, this is quite a blow, but the panel will pay for their blindness. Oh yes. Vengeance will be his.

Meanwhile… The college’s award-winning Cheerleading squad is headed for upset as Missy unleashes her Machiavellian plot to unseat her rival Christie and steal Cissy’s boyfriend, college basketball superstar Ken.

Oh. And a madman stalks the campus with a ray gun that transforms women into busty and sex-hungry bimbos.

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BillPratt 789th level Draco-Ninja Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: In my home. Posts: 2,047	Test Reading: Bimbos, Expanding Boobs and Early 80's Nerd Science Looking for readers for a comic script. 60 pages, of which I want to know if the first chapter can attract and hold an audience, so in this pass only the first chapter is being exposed. It's 1982. Harold and Clayton are Nerds. They play D&D, anxiously await the third Star Wars Film, tinker with computers, and they are about to build a device that records, edits, and alters reality. Meanwhile… Their friend and TA Isaac just bombed his thesis defense because the panel refused to look past the unfortunate side effect of his research: The female participants all grew enormous breasts. To a man who will one day be the greatest scientist in human history, this is quite a blow, but the panel will pay for their blindness. Oh yes. Vengeance will be his. Meanwhile… The college’s award-winning Cheerleading squad is headed for upset as Missy unleashes her Machiavellian plot to unseat her rival Christie and steal Cissy’s boyfriend, college basketball superstar Ken. Oh. And a madman stalks the campus with a ray gun that transforms women into busty and sex-hungry bimbos.