12-13-2013 | #1 |
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New Short Story: Control
I'd been sitting on this short story idea for a while, and I finally got around to completing it. It was a challenging departure from my normal style, being a bit more serious in subject matter and bigger in the GTS. I think I'm happy with the results though. Feedback encouraged!
Control - by RobClassact |
12-13-2013 | #2 |
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Re: New Short Story: Control
Pretty damn good. I love your stuff :-)
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12-13-2013 | #3 |
Happy owl
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Re: New Short Story: Control
Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.
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12-13-2013 | #4 |
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Re: New Short Story: Control
Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)
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12-13-2013 | #5 |
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Re: New Short Story: Control
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