My shot at a TG drawing.

Daimajin17 · 06-04-2006

Hi. Thought I'd try and stop lurking and contribute more. Best idea I had was to try a drawing. (TG is my main interest). No process, just the changed-and-clothes-don't-fit idea. I'd appreciate some feedback and suggestions for the future. Thanks.

Case Scenario · 06-04-2006

It's nice. Process may have been preferable, since that's essentially the theme around here, but I've certainly seen much worse. Keep at it, maybe concentrate on anatomy. Particularly the hands. It's been said by some that to draw good cartoons, all you really need to know is how to draw the head and hands. You might try getting the basics of the realistic face down before tackling more iconic, "manga" styles. She looks just a smidge like her eyes are going in opposite directions. Oh, and I'd have the shadow under her connect with her feet and pants. When shading ends around a character it can indicate separation, like foreground/background. In other words, it looks like she's floating just slightly over the floor. Also, and this is sort of a pet peeve of mine, loose pants wouldn't quite fall that way... they seem like they should be bigger around the knees and/or less wide at the bottom. It's like the character's wearing bell-bottoms. Though I admire your sense of form under the clothing, how the hips are wide enough to make the fabric go taut. Definitely a nice job for the first time.

TGJunkie · 06-04-2006

Excellent drawing, I agree with Case Scenario though, it could use a little process, even if it's just a "Before" pic to go with your "After" pic. Still, it's quite a good picture. I hope you do more of them!

Nunkiller · 06-04-2006

THAT IS FREAKING AWSOME
Very NICE TG, one of the best i have ever seen.
(What can i say, i dont like clothes morph)

Kheben · 06-04-2006

Well well, my second post within the same hour, let alone the same month...

Not a bad picture man... Although of course the concept around here is "process" stuff (as many people like to remind every contributer), in my eyes any relevant drawing that's done well is more than welcome. I mean, hey, maybe now you'll go and draw a nice sequence/processy pic for us. ;P

Seriously though, keep it up...

Sailordolly · 06-05-2006

If this is your first TG drawing then it is definitely excellent for a first. ^_^

Sutibaru · 06-05-2006

Reminds me of my first TG drawing. ^^

Sucht17 · 06-05-2006

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Originally Posted by Sutibaru

Reminds me of my first TG drawing. ^^

The good 'ol days huh?

Sutibaru · 06-05-2006

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Originally Posted by Sucht17

The good 'ol days huh?

Only a year ago.

Daimajin17 · 06-05-2006

Thanks very much for all your feedback. I'll be sure to take it onboard when I try something else.

DarkTranswar · 06-05-2006

I dont know how long u been drawing but its really good. I like to draw myself. so if u need help let me know.

LK · 06-06-2006

It is very nice, please do continue. ^^

06-04-2006	#2
Case Scenario Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 452	review It's nice. Process may have been preferable, since that's essentially the theme around here, but I've certainly seen much worse. Keep at it, maybe concentrate on anatomy. Particularly the hands. It's been said by some that to draw good cartoons, all you really need to know is how to draw the head and hands. You might try getting the basics of the realistic face down before tackling more iconic, "manga" styles. She looks just a smidge like her eyes are going in opposite directions. Oh, and I'd have the shadow under her connect with her feet and pants. When shading ends around a character it can indicate separation, like foreground/background. In other words, it looks like she's floating just slightly over the floor. Also, and this is sort of a pet peeve of mine, loose pants wouldn't quite fall that way... they seem like they should be bigger around the knees and/or less wide at the bottom. It's like the character's wearing bell-bottoms. Though I admire your sense of form under the clothing, how the hips are wide enough to make the fabric go taut. Definitely a nice job for the first time. Last edited by Case Scenario; 06-04-2006 at 08:40 PM.

06-04-2006	#3
TGJunkie Mega-Procrastinator Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 244	Excellent drawing, I agree with Case Scenario though, it could use a little process, even if it's just a "Before" pic to go with your "After" pic. Still, it's quite a good picture. I hope you do more of them! __________________

06-04-2006	#4
Nunkiller Boner Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 56	THAT IS FREAKING AWSOME Very NICE TG, one of the best i have ever seen. (What can i say, i dont like clothes morph) __________________ New one.... 1/2 plus 1/2 make 1/2 of a 1/2. What is the last 1/2?

06-05-2006	#7
Sutibaru --- Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 5,865	Reminds me of my first TG drawing. ^^ __________________ Deviantart\|FurAffinity\|Tumblr\|Picarto

06-05-2006	#11
DarkTranswar Process Fan Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 60	I dont know how long u been drawing but its really good. I like to draw myself. so if u need help let me know. __________________ My fate is this ...to sit alone and bring pain to others...My soul shall eternally wander, While you are free to fly. I want to be like you- Be with you forever-And stop my heart from burning. Life brings death, Death brings life, Never the two shall meet. But, how I Pray to be accepted, And I long to be in your arms...Hold me, my angel. Break my spell of loneliness...

06-04-2006	#5
Kheben Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 35	Well well, my second post within the same hour, let alone the same month... Not a bad picture man... Although of course the concept around here is "process" stuff (as many people like to remind every contributer), in my eyes any relevant drawing that's done well is more than welcome. I mean, hey, maybe now you'll go and draw a nice sequence/processy pic for us. ;P Seriously though, keep it up...

06-05-2006	#6
Sailordolly The Tiny Sailor Senshi Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 360	If this is your first TG drawing then it is definitely excellent for a first. ^_^

06-05-2006	#10
Daimajin17 Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: UK Posts: 162	Thanks very much for all your feedback. I'll be sure to take it onboard when I try something else.

06-06-2006	#12
LK Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 3,258	It is very nice, please do continue. ^^ __________________

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