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Unread 04-09-2018   #1
Tancred
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I need improvement...

Hi everyone! I really need your help! I would like to improve my art, but for this, I would need your! If you have afew minutes, could you, please, take a look to my recent work and give me constructive critics here.

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Unread 04-11-2018   #2
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Re: I need improvement...

you should make the odd research thread dealing on what you wish to improve on. I'm sure you have see mine. feedback is the key to growing as and artist.
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Re: I need improvement...

I honestly like the recent work! You've definitely improved over time. ��
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Unread 04-12-2018   #4
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Re: I need improvement...

Thanks for your comment guies! But I have to admit that it is hard to juge my own art and this is why I'm searching for feedback! XD
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Unread 04-14-2018   #5
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Re: I need improvement...

Honestly you have improved a lot, the biggest thing I would suggest is working on faces a bit more, sometimes you nail it, but other times it looks like you are trying to force proportions that don't work on a face. The big eyes thing is kind of your style, but you have to make sure that you scale them to the size of the head still, sometimes your characters have disturbingly large eye sockets. Also, don't be afraid of references, I can see in your work that you are drawing on other animals for anatomy, like your donkey that looks a lot like a rabbit. I can see you are using references for some stuff, your chicken for example. Honestly improvement is just about working at it and being able to look at your work and hate it, and see all it's flaws and work to fix them. Which is easy for most artists. :P Good luck!
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Thanks for the help! ^-^'
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