free hit counters
Teen Titan Starfire WG - The Process Forum
The Process Forum  

Go Back   The Process Forum > Content Forums > Body Inflation and Expansion

Inflation and Process ClipsProcess Productions Store Inflation and Process Clips

Reply
Thread Tools Display Modes
Unread 06-01-2008   #1
calvin228
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
n

Last edited by calvin228; 06-04-2008 at 07:32 PM.
  Reply With Quote
Unread 06-01-2008   #2
long john silver
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

May I be the first to say that was a complete and utter load of shit.




Pardon my lack of pirate-talk, but it's just that bad I have to state it off the bat as such.
  Reply With Quote
Unread 06-01-2008   #3
wasurenai
Ail-Soft Aficionado
 
wasurenai's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 482
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.
wasurenai is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-01-2008   #4
Metatron
Alea iacta est
 
Metatron's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 687
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

An interesting story if I may be frank I think you need to work on color consistency your character (starfire) seems to have her uniform break on page 3 and it turns to blue on page 4 but then at the top of page 5 for 3 panels it turns back to purple then back to blue.
Over all I'd give it a solid B+
Metatron is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-01-2008   #5
humble.fool
Rubber Band Man
 
humble.fool's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 320
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

I can't tell if it's all done in MS Paint, or if you drew this out by hand and then tried to color it in MS Paint; in the end, it's pretty poor as wank material.
__________________
My Homepage.
humble.fool is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #6
TanukiCannon
Lurker
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 19
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class.
Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too.

It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".
TanukiCannon is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #7
Anurubius
engage your mandibles!
 
Anurubius's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: on my gts wife's shoulder
Posts: 223
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

...
...
...
..."eat-o-matic"
...
...
wow.
__________________
Blurring Lines: the struggle between light and dark just got more complicated
Anurubius is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #8
long john silver
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Quote:
Originally Posted by wasurenai View Post
Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.
It be lookin' like I be in the mob mentality fer this topic.
  Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #9
ProfessorMishap
Oh dear, not again!
 
ProfessorMishap's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: I'm standing right behind you!!
Posts: 2,158
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Quote:
Originally Posted by long john silver View Post
It be lookin' like I be in the mob mentality fer this topic.
If I'm not mistaken it was Lorekeep himself who said "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So let this be a warning to you Cap, watch what you say when reviewing art or you'll be walking the plank, ya get me?
ProfessorMishap is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #10
long john silver
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Quote:
Originally Posted by LinkG07 View Post
If I'm not mistaken it was Lorekeep himself who said "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So let this be a warning to you Cap, watch what you say when reviewing art or you'll be walking the plank, ya get me?
Aye, that might be true, but no one else be against sayin' this sorta thing fer this land-lubber's wares.
  Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #11
ProfessorMishap
Oh dear, not again!
 
ProfessorMishap's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: I'm standing right behind you!!
Posts: 2,158
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

Wrong way: Ugh, this is the worst art I've ever seen. It stinks!

Right way: Ehhh, you need a little more practice. If this is what you want to do, keep trying.

And besides, he said he did this comic a long time ago. Its not his current art style.
ProfessorMishap is offline   Reply With Quote
Unread 06-02-2008   #12
long john silver
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG

If ye be goin' soft on this type, they be only goin' to perpetuait their current methods, and never progress.

Trust me, I be seein' it all over the place, there be this one guy who be drawin' the same damned circles in MSpaint fer more than ten years, and has the gull to say he be progressin' in his art style, with no viable evidence to prove it.
  Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -7. The time now is 06:35 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.