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Uber shy
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Well hello Process board
Here are some TG sequences I drew up-I hope it's ok for a lurker to shamelessly advertise himself like that
 I only recently started drawing,so some feedback would be highly appreciated 
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Just a wanderer
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Re: Well hello Process board
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Leecher
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Re: Well hello Process board
Your work looks great! Some of the poses are stiff, especially in the third one, but a solid start. The first sequence is my favorite. Thanks for contributing!
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Process Disciple
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Re: Well hello Process board
Good work! Thanks for sharing
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad.
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You know you like it!
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad at all!
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English 真城の城 Webmaster
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Re: Well hello Process board
Aside from technicalities (I figure others will be more than happy to point them out), good sequences.
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Uber shy
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Thank you for the kind words everyone
And thank you for the feedback,too,I really want to keep sequences like that coming and knowing what looks off or could be improved really helps (Especially the head size seems to be an issue now  )
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Frequent Poster
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad for your 1st dive into posting.
If I had any criticisms it's that you need to practice your body proportions abit more. |
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Re: Well hello Process board
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No Man's Slave
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Re: Well hello Process board
Perhaps.
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Re: Well hello Process board
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Linear Mode
