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08-22-2008
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Re: Untitled Fiction
I'm getting more and more interested in this story. The transformation sequence was very good.
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08-24-2008
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Someone has already said it, but I too suspect that his sister was not always his sister.
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08-25-2008
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It really helps when you comment fella's.
Getting back to business, expect a slight delay on the next chapter. Life and School bog me down. I'm still working on it though; just be patient and I guarantee a big payoff. |
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08-25-2008
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The suspense is killing me. XO
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08-28-2008
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I want a big pay off now though.
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08-29-2008
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Chapter Four is complete. Two sex scenes. I worked real hard on this and I may have made a mistake here and there. Maybe I'm getting writer's paranoia. Anyways, enjoy the read!
The final chapter looms ahead, be prepared for the twist! What's a good story without an original yet dramatic plot twist? |
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08-30-2008
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Another great piece. Little heavy on the sex scenes for my taste as I would have preferred more character development but still a very good story. I'm anxiously awaiting the last piece
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08-30-2008
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Very good indeed; the way you write perfectly retains my attention and the story itself is very very good.
I too look forward to the last one. |
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08-31-2008
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Truly execellent story you have going there.
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08-31-2008
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It's done. Enjoy the ending everyone!
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08-31-2008
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Fantastic. Can't wait to read more from you.
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08-31-2008
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Awesomeness incarnate, the ending was both surprising but perfect for the story, let none tell you otherwise. Well crafted empathic characters are so rare. Now let us see if we can persuade one of our artists to take a shot at bringing Rosabella to illustrated life.
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