Looking for feedback

[AstroDomina]

Hi everyone,

I'm fairly new to the world of Special Effects. I'd love to get some feedback from this community on my work and what areas I can improve in.

You can check out some of my work at: http://clips4sale.com/studio/56587/Cat29/AstroDomina

I also love shooting custom videos for my fans, so don't be shy!

If you'd like to check out some of my work that involved SFX, here are some direct links:

METEORITE MADE ME GROW

THE GIANTESS ATE MY VILLAGE

GIANTESS WORLD DOMINATION

I look forward to hearing your feedback. And let me know if you have any questions for me.

Astro aka Sydney Lee

[Greebrun]

Welcome to the forum, Sydney

[75thparellel]

Great to see you on here! I had grabbed a custom video from you ages ago and you did an awesome job with it. Its cool to see you trying your hand at some SFX stuff now. I might just have to bug you again for another!
Id say for your first few SFX clips they're pretty good.
Me personally and pretty much everyone else on here likes the aspect of actually growing into a giantess and focusing more on that, so it would be awesome to see more growth in your upcoming clips! Everyone has there own opinions and likes/dislikes though.

[RedJack]

Originally Posted by 75thparellel

Great to see you on here! I had grabbed a custom video from you ages ago and you did an awesome job with it. Its cool to see you trying your hand at some SFX stuff now. I might just have to bug you again for another!
Id say for your first few SFX clips they're pretty good.
Me personally and pretty much everyone else on here likes the aspect of actually growing into a giantess and focusing more on that, so it would be awesome to see more growth in your upcoming clips! Everyone has there own opinions and likes/dislikes though.

110% Agreement in bold in the above quote from 75thparellel Actually growing into a giantess, with clothes rippage to complete nudity (No Pasties, I'm looking at you Gary!) and growing out of the house is a must.

[TBG]

I'm glad you decided to check out the growth-focused part of the community. The special effects in your last few vids have been REALLY good. I think you worked with Missa once or twice before? Not sure if you've seen any of her other Giantess/Growth related videos, but right now, those are kinda setting the standard for quality most of us here enjoy. Full process growth that is all on screen with emphasis on the body parts busting out of clothing. (Shoes, Socks, Pants, Tops, etc.) I think you have the talent and acting skills to pull it off.

[Conker]

Originally Posted by RedJack

110% Agreement in bold in the above quote from 75thparellel Actually growing into a giantess, with clothes rippage to complete nudity (No Pasties, I'm looking at you Gary!) and growing out of the house is a must.

I will buy a clip if it has (good) clothing destruction with the growth. Tbh that is the most important part to me.

[LK]

Sure, send me download codes in a PM and I'll give you feedback.

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by LK

Sure, send me download codes in a PM and I'll give you feedback.

Jesus. Seriously? If I'm not mistaken, asking for paid content for free is the kind of thing you'd have banned people for, once upon a time. What happened to you to make you such a jerk? Or were you always like this and it's just more evident now?

[LK]

Damn, you see what you want to see man. The distinction between pirates asking the audience for a free copy and a producer asking for feedback and a reviewer with experience asking for a *review copy* must be lost on you.

What, you expect me to pay for the *privilege* of helping her improve her products? Or did you miss how asking for feedback on paid content is itself a form of coercive marketing?

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by LK

Damn, you see what you want to see man. The distinction between pirates asking the audience for a free copy and a producer asking for feedback and a reviewer with experience asking for a *review copy* must be lost on you.

What, you expect me to pay for the *privilege* of helping her improve her products? Or did you miss how asking for feedback on paid content is itself a form of coercive marketing?

I'm aware of the concept of a review copy, yes. And I know it's not the same thing as piracy. The fact remains that you're saying "Sure, I'll be happy to give you feedback if you send me a free copy." You wouldn't have accepted someone saying that for your paid content on Process Productions; matter of fact, I'm picturing you laughing scornfully at the very idea. There's also a certain level of arrogance implied by the idea that your opinion is just so valuable that it's worth giving you content for free--an idea that frankly doesn't hold water given your incredibly sour and cynical disposition these days.

What's "expected" is for people who've actually bought this to give suggestions for improvement. The idea is to "pay for the privilege" of getting some content that's maybe in your area of interest, maybe something you can fap to, and then you say what worked and what you'd like to see in future. You know, kind of like Missa's threads, or the ones Gary or Taylor had on here. And you know that. Don't play dumb.

I see what I want to see? Maybe so. But I'm far from the only one who sees that you've been a real jerk for a long time now. I used to have a lot of respect and gratitude for you, man. Now I'm wondering if that blinded me to your general unpleasantness, or if this is a more recent development.

On topic: Sydney, I couldn't agree more with posters who've said that growth clips are always better when they include a lot of detailed process and clothes busting. It's definitely something you should see about incorporating into your clips.

[LK]

Actually, I gave out free copies on multiple occasions to those that asked. Tell me, what facts do you have to support any of those opinions? You could imagine my behavior based on an impression of me garnered over the fucking internet? Damn! Your life must be hard (Not that I'd know....)

I do think as someone who has worked with several fetish clip producers, ran his own store for years, written scripts, been on set to one clip shoot, and possessing a general film education, I am one of the most qualified to provide the kind of feedback I assume she wants. The only people I see more qualified are those who produce clips for a living rather than a side business. But sure, sour attitude and temper when dealing with autistic fetishists is my defining feature. *Sarcasm.*

Ask yourself this: do you think I care about critiquing one producer's work? Wouldn't I just contact her in private?

WHY would I post this in a public thread where everyone can see? And qzar, be careful: you wouldn't want to look dumb. Here's a hint: it's not about the review copy, even if it appears to neatly fit into that narrative told by your biases.

And if you think I'm trying to be a jerk? Here, now I am. That pathetic excuse you think counts as feedback is this general, nearly useless statement about what you'd like to see in clips based on personal taste. It implies you know fuck all about what sells or how hard makijg size fetish clips are, let alone the Do's and Don't's of clip production. Also? You gave the impression you didn't buy the clips either and offer specific critique to that effect. Is it because she's sexy that you immediately have a high opinion of who she is? Not that I'd know.... in fact I bet guys slobber over the female fetish producers because of their character, business practices, and seeming interest in their fetish. Review my clips by buying them first, teehee!

*Sarcasm.*

Actually I think you tossed that last bit in there to refocus the conversation and show Sydney your support. Ignore this asshole, I'm with you, sexy, kinky creator! Comrades in creativity, amirite?

Do I even need to point out the sarcasm this time?

[LK]

And yeah, reading and writing these things is exhausting, but I guess that's my fault for engaging a writer high off his own shit.