TMC's Scripts To Clips Contest!

[poppert56]

First of all, I have edited my script to make it more like a script.

Secondly, in order to drum up more conversations, I have decided to voice my opinions on every single script thus far,excluding my own of course. Well, here we go.

Sweet revenge: I was thinking that someone was punishing someone else when I read the title, but apparently it's a giantess script. I'm partial to giantesses, though

this particular one I'm not a fan of. I guess it's because the script wasn't that descriptive of the growth, making it hard to imagine was really happened.

Werewolf Futa Transformation: This was barely a script, more like a basic idea.

Alyssa's Secret: I do not werewolf transformations at all, since it has been done so many times. This one was just boring to me.

Party Preparations: I really like this idea, especially the ending. It just felt right for the tone of the script.

Quiet Time: This is a weird one. I found it way too weird for a clip, as just careless removal of body parts seems REALLY freaky to me.

Script!(aka, I think we've found happiness):

Deep Breaths: I do not like Saw, nor the popping at the end.I do like the rivalry between the two characters however.

Pressure Luck:Awesome idea using a game show as a reason for BE

Bedtime Beasties: I don't really have anything to say about this one.

nBEulized: Ninja in a BE clip? No. There is another version of this, but I didn't read it yet.

Seven Minutes in Heaven:Pretty cool I guess. I really don't like or hate this one, it's just meh.

kymanthropy: I like the creepy aspect of this, though the expansion seemed a little rushed.

BytorScript Idea 2(aka Wonka's Revenge): Like the werewolf, I didn't fully read this, since I feel like the whole blueberry thing has been done to death.

Sarah(aka Sarah's Power) This too is not my favorite since I really don't like FMG.

a berry bad batch: I like the idea of blueberry breasts, though the popping at the end turned me off.

ThreeWiseWomen (aka The Three Wise Women): This is pretty awesome. With three expansions with different reactions in one script, it was pretty cool, and well executed.

WorldsBiggestBitch(aka World's Greatest Bitch): Pretty awesome trying to get back to the roots of TMC. The BE was cool too.

TMC Script Clip(aka Blueberry Boobs): Like "a berry bad batch" I also enjoyed this one, and the ending was just perfect to me.

He had it coming (aka Karma's a Bitch): TG is another thing I don't like. Besides, the title might confuse some people, as there is already a clip with the same name.

Alien-Futa-Impreg(aka Alien Futanari Impregnation): Way too disgusting for my tastes.

Perfume Transformation Script:I really don't like bimboization. I can't explain why, I just don't like it.

Drink to Shrink: Sorry to disappoint Nom Anor, but I really didn't like this. I liked how it actually looks like a script, it's that I'm not a fan of SW. It was well presented and dialogued. Again, sorry if I disappointed you.

That's all the scripts up right now. Good luck to all the writers right now and in the future.

[Nom Anor]

Originally Posted by poppert56

Drink to Shrink: Sorry to disappoint Nom Anor, but I really didn't like this. I liked how it actually looks like a script, it's that I'm not a fan of SW. It was well presented and dialogued. Again, sorry if I disappointed you.

Not at all. I knew going into this that SW isn't everyone's thing.

I'm glad though you liked the presentation and dialogue.

[Weirdoid]

Here they are. My finished scripts. (warning, they contain male gay scenes). With four characters and six scene changes their is a chance that Forever Love may be too complex for this contest though.

[mysteryman29]

Originally Posted by Nom Anor

Speaking from one detailed scriptwriter to another, I can't wait you see what you've cooked up.

Thanks! I will go ahead and say that the script I'm working on is a Female to Horse TF... Two women to horses to be precise.

We don't seem to have many animal TF scripts in the running for this contest and I think the way I've laid everything out, it would be feasible for TMC to execute and not go over-budget on.

I look forward to seeing what the outcome of the contest is!

[Nom Anor]

Heh, that'll be a horse of a different color, eh?

[Blackbat]

Originally Posted by Nom Anor

Gentlemen, behold! My beautiful fiancee!

Sorry; I love ATHF'S Dr. Weird.

Okay, script is posted in both a Text and PDF format (the latter is to make reading the script formatting easier).

I will post additional comments momentarily.

Edit: Okay, so we have the contest's first (and thus far only) shrinking-themed script.

I know it's been a while since TMC has done a SW video (2009's "A Little Revenge"), but I was always a fan of that effort and I'd love to see them return to that arena.

As I say in the document, the key with this script was to develop an idea that's not too expensive or too technically challenging for TMC. It's a bit ambitious, but it's completely doable without ANY composting or green screen. All it'll need is some forced camera perspective, clever angles and direction, and lots of baggy clothing.

Best of all, as I outlined, the script is designed to be split into two different videos if it's too expensive to do the whole thing at once. I?ve written it so that either Erin or Andrea's experiences can be viewed on its own without having to watch the other.

Also, I'm sorry for the overly detailed script. I kinda got carried away, I really wanted be as specific and helpful. Plus, there are pieces of dialogue that I would love to hear come out of the mouths of whoever could play Andrea or Erin. As anyone who's read the script can guess, I naturally had the most fun writing Erin's lines.

So, I hope everyone enjoys and that "Drink to Shrink" will have your support in the voting.

Edit # 2: I've deleted the original attachments and re-uploaded it. I realized I missed both a few grammatical errors and direction text left over from an earlier draft (ex. the mini-bottles no longer exist as they were a plot point I ultimately deemed too complicated).

So, everything is essentially the same aside from a few pieces of direction and fixed dialogue.

i want this, would be an instant buy

[mysteryman29]

Okay, so I've FINALLY finished up my script submittal after about a week and a half of work on it.

A few notes:

MOST IMPORTANTLY, I need to give a huge thanks and a shout out to Darkcousin, who I am not sure if he's a member here or not.

This script is an adaptation of his original series titled, "Pills"

I have been a big fan of that series since he first started it years ago and I think it lent itself incredibly well to being shot by TMC. The concept he came up with is kept the same in this script, however I had to consolidate many of the locations in the original story into just 2 locations to make this easier for TMC to film. Ultimately, this has changed the timeline of events, but the changes that happen to the girls are basically the same and the story is even more fun as they transform together.

There is quite a bit of dialogue in this story which is why I have suggested that Holly Webster and Coco Velvet play the two characters. They each have done animal TFs very well and I know they have the acting chops to make this the best animal TF clip yet!

So without further delay...

Pills
(Women to Horses TF)

[chipper]

Originally Posted by Rei-Lin

Hope to see it soon Nom Anor.

Also, here's another new script, hot off the TMC forums. This one is by DCMV. Hope you read and leave some feedback. Good luck!

I'll admit, I'm a big fan of bimboization (thus leading to me being just a BIT biased), so this one caught my eye. However, I do like the way they've set up the storyline in this script, it's very detailed and probably an easier one to set-up. It's not too long of a script and it's well-written.

Lots of other good scripts here too. I'll try and review some more when I have time.

[qzar9999]

I would like to cast 1.2 trillion votes for Nom Anor's Drink to Shrink script. I would unquestionably buy that clip.

[sleeper248]

I've posted two new scripts in my original post.

http://www.process-productions.com/f...0&postcount=16

[Laughingman]

Oh no! I completely forgot about this . Oh well, I have a script so I'm submitting it, and maybe I'll try to squeeze one more in before the deadline, lol. There's not a lot too this, it would mostly be a process video with just the inflation, nothing really major going on before or after.

[mysteryman29]

Just a heads up that I'm quickly trying to finish up one more script before the deadline tonight. It's coming along great and I definitely would like it to be considered for the contest.

Thanks!