Palcomix New Comic "Misato's New Girlfriend" (Offsite)

All I'm seeing are complaints about the relative lack of process, so I guess I'm the only one bothered by the fact that the scenario made no sense, the characters teleported around (such as when Misato asks a question, then when Shinji replies they are in completely different positions), the dialogue is screwy and artificial, the pacing, flow, transitions, and layout are amateurish, and yes, Misato and Shinji are both out of character.

Palcomix really needs a decent writer/storyboardist/editor. With comics like this, it's hard to believe that the referenced-in-this-thread price of $175 per page is accurate.

Now, let's see how quickly people start bitching at me for actually having standards this time around...

[agamemnon]

I had a heck of a time getting it all because slow site is sloooooow; so I rared it and uploaded it for the rest of you who are interested and haven't sat through the foreverload.

http://rapidshare.com/files/11642732...riend.rar.html

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CVSDRRV3

[Headshot]

Could someone pleasejust attach the pictures to a reply

[Hardcase]

I hope this works...

[muffin_wins]

to me the overall art was great sure it would have been better to spread the change over souple more panels but otherwise its was good. the artwork itself was up there with the KIng Mako himself.
i wish i could find an artist to do the story i wrote a long time ago.
Billy's 21st birthday party it was the first story i wrote. its on http://www.nifty.org under transgend/magic / sci -fi / date july 27,1999
the story itself is good but the spelling and grammar needed work spelling because i didnt use spell check the first time. story is tf and tg along with possession. check it out.

[The-Pro]

Originally Posted by Physalis

All I'm seeing are complaints about the relative lack of process, so I guess I'm the only one bothered by the fact that the scenario made no sense, the characters teleported around (such as when Misato asks a question, then when Shinji replies they are in completely different positions), the dialogue is screwy and artificial,

Have you never actually watched Neon Genesis Evangelion?

[no-name]

Is it just me, or did they alter the title page from their first posting?

[DarkTranswar]

Hun? why everybody arguing comic finished why not everybody happy

[Gumbyx84]

Originally Posted by DarkTranswar

Hun? why everybody arguing comic finished why not everybody happy

I'm happy its done. Shinji came out all hot and cute. yay TG process (even if its not the best)!!

[Miracle overloading]

Originally Posted by Physalis

All I'm seeing are complaints about the relative lack of process, so I guess I'm the only one bothered by the fact that the scenario made no sense, the characters teleported around (such as when Misato asks a question, then when Shinji replies they are in completely different positions), the dialogue is screwy and artificial, the pacing, flow, transitions, and layout are amateurish, and yes, Misato and Shinji are both out of character.

Bad dialogue and Out-of-character-ness in a Hentai Doujin?!

Say it ain't so!

[michelous]

it was pretty good

[Vengeance1701]

I dunno, it ended up as kind of a letdown compared to the setup. None of the changes beyond the ass had any focus really.