The Breast Expansion Story Club Updates

[SoylentOrange]

Er, is the "publisher's review" supposed to be written from first-person view of the author? ^^;

[BillPratt]

I've never really grasped what use they are in general. Hate writing them. Try coming up with something worth saying when you get to chapter 6 that isn't a rehash of 1 through 5.

The brief teasers, them I get. The publisher's reviews I don't.

[qzar9999]

What I don't understand is why they persist in calling it a Publishers Review when they make the author write both it and the teaser. Presumably it's to give the impression that they actually have an opinion on the material that appears on their sites, but having written for them AND been a member for a while, I don't think I really believe that's true.

[SoylentOrange]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

What I don't understand is why they persist in calling it a Publishers Review when they make the author write both it and the teaser. Presumably it's to give the impression that they actually have an opinion on the material that appears on their sites, but having written for them AND been a member for a while, I don't think I really believe that's true.

I have to agree. The amount of typographical errors- not just misspellings, but misalignments, balloon errors, etc.- I saw on their stuff when I was a member convinced me that the art is all they care about, and sometimes (From discussions with other authors) not even enough to follow instructions in the script.

I might want to write for them, like I do for the ___FanComics sites, but not until I hear from some script authors that are actually satisfied with how their scripts come out the other side...

[BillPratt]

My experiences with the Expansion Fan site were mostly positive. they have a much more controlled roll out and editing process. The downside is a need to get expanded boobies on the page early, killing anticipation and making the comics feel rushed. A waste because with 15 pages an issue you can tell more complex stories than you can in the BESC's 10.

When you see the roughs of the artwork, you have time to adjust things that didn't translate from writer's brain to artist brain. When I see the finished pencils, I really get to see what stayed in my head and didn't make it to the paper, or didn't get emphasized well enough. That's generally when I give the dialogue a once-over to suit the artist's vision, insert a caption or two, and maybe re-attribute dialogue to a different character because they're on a better side of the panel or have more real estate around them for the speech bubble.

I'm colourblind so my input into the colouring checks aren't that useful, but I have had comics (though not at BESC or Fan) where characters were drawn too similarly and the colourist kept on mixing their hair colours, probably as confused as the rest of us, and confusing things worse. Even I could have caught that.

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

I have to agree.
I might want to write for them, like I do for the ___FanComics sites, but not until I hear from some script authors that are actually satisfied with how their scripts come out the other side...

Simple answer, Don't.

I can go into more detail to any who care, but I would strongly state do not work for 'them'.

If you really need money I'd suggest picking up aluminum cans first.

[BillPratt]

I've neglected a few things. I've LIKED how he vast majority of the BESC and Bimbo SC stuff turned out. The real high point is Three Wish War. Celestin's work was brilliant.

[bimbostoryclub]

Sam is in desperate need of a job. Luckily she was able to find work at a local sexy gimmick restaurant called Knockers with very busty ladies. Although not ideal, Sam decides to persevere through anyway. One of the girls tries to help Sam to help her so she doesn’t feel like an outsider but she gets a little bit carried away… The first day at her new job will change he life and breasts forever.





OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW
Another one shot that is a sexy breast expansion parody of sex appeal chain restaurants like Hooters. The story has plenty of breast expansion and sex acts despite its short length.






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[bimbostoryclub]

Without a moment to spare Zereva escapes the prison ship. The unguided escape pod soon crashes a strange planet called Earth. Dazed and confused, Zereva emerges from her vessel. Suddenly, Zereva is greeted by the local heroes who came to investigate the crash. Seeing them as a threat, Zereva prepares to fight. After defeating the heroes with ease, Zereva mounts the lone male hero to learn about Earth…










OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW
Zereva is a new original character for the breast expansion club. The heroine is inspired by the hero aliens that come to Earth and use their otherworldly powers to save the day. With Zereva, her powers involve her huge breasts and sex. Her breasts can be used to hypnotize, sense, and even attack! Readers are sure to enjoy the thrilling tale of Zereva.






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[bimbostoryclub]

Once found, lost artifacts of great power rarely stand still. They are lost, fought-over, and stolen. Bodies lay strewn in their wake. And few artifacts are greater than the genie’s lamp. Karen had the lamp. Now Melanie does, and Melanie is not nice. Melanie also learns why discovers why the genie is so opposed to the three wish limit. And things go downhill from there. roommate, Melanie, has no such concerns and quickly Meanwhile, the grand vizier, Dr. Bey, takes matters into his own hands, travelling to the human world for the first time in thousands of years and finds it has changed greatly in his absence. He needs and makes allies of his own.











OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW
The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? And how far are they willing to go to maintain the status quo? This time around, the genie is bound by the new rules, and he hates them. Worse, his attention is divided by a rebellion turned bloody back in his homeland. He can’t do his job with a paltry three wishes, but a bloodbath to win back the right to perform his job as he sees fit is not what he had in mind. His clients this time around are three roommates: the quiet one, Karen, wants to be an actress. The pretty one, Melanie, enjoys a life of easy leisure, but always wants more. And Natalie just wishes her two friends could get along. Literally.







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[Choppy]

Originally Posted by bimbostoryclub

Once found, lost artifacts of great power rarely stand still. They are lost, fought-over, and stolen. Bodies lay strewn in their wake. And few artifacts are greater than the genie’s lamp. Karen had the lamp. Now Melanie does, and Melanie is not nice. Melanie also learns why discovers why the genie is so opposed to the three wish limit. And things go downhill from there. roommate, Melanie, has no such concerns and quickly Meanwhile, the grand vizier, Dr. Bey, takes matters into his own hands, travelling to the human world for the first time in thousands of years and finds it has changed greatly in his absence. He needs and makes allies of his own.











OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW
The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? And how far are they willing to go to maintain the status quo? This time around, the genie is bound by the new rules, and he hates them. Worse, his attention is divided by a rebellion turned bloody back in his homeland. He can’t do his job with a paltry three wishes, but a bloodbath to win back the right to perform his job as he sees fit is not what he had in mind. His clients this time around are three roommates: the quiet one, Karen, wants to be an actress. The pretty one, Melanie, enjoys a life of easy leisure, but always wants more. And Natalie just wishes her two friends could get along. Literally.







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Thank you for the update <3

[BillPratt]

Looks like it's turning out well. Hopefully people will forgive the slow pace of the first issue. Needed some space to establish the "before" state before going gonzo.

And Celestin is a wonder.