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12-16-2008
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 36
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Re: Fiction Contribution - "The Succubus' Wedding Night"
I don't usually post here, but I have to say this is one of my favorites stories already and I'm very much looking forward to any new stories from you. ^^ A sequal would be even better.
As for the little jokes, I thought it was pretty original and refreshing. I wouldn't change a thing. |
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12-17-2008
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Transformer
Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 488
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Re: Fiction Contribution - "The Succubus' Wedding Night"
I liked the little jokes. The pineapple one was especially amusing, as I love pineapple as well. :P
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