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Unread 03-13-2016   #1
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Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

It's finally here! This is without a doubt the biggest endeavor my humble little giantess shop has undertaken so far. A full ten page greyscale comic (plus color cover) written by myself and illustrated by the amazing Javier Martinez!

Story: An angry well endowed Ogre picks a fight with a voluptuous crafty witch. He seems to have the upper hand until a shrinking spell starts to level the playing field..

Feedback definitely appreciated and I sincerely hope you all enjoy

Buy it here: http://www.e-junkie.com/bustyshrink/...#Ogre+vs+Witch

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Unread 03-14-2016   #2
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

Charge $3 or $4 and you might have a sale. Ten for ten grayscale with no previews is ridiculous.
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

I think a preview might be a good idea. Or at least samples of your artist's work.
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Unread 03-14-2016   #4
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

I took one for the team.

Don't buy this comic. The artist has good lines and shading, and there are bits and pieces of good "art," but the layout and paneling are all over the place. It's a mess.

The main female character has some of the weirdest and downright unsexy facial expressions I have ever seen in a size fetish comic. She looks like an emaciated corpse in some panels. Look at those fucking eyes.

The shrinking is minimal -- first she runs scared from the Ogre, then she sees his giant penis and decides to give him a blowjob, then she shrinks him, BJ, shrink, BJ... completely different from what the marketing blurb told me. The writing is nonsensical. The size fetish qualities of this size fetish work are almost as infinitesimal as the Ogre eventually ends up.

The best shot is after she first shrinks him and he's now shoulder height to her. That's about it. One panel out of, what, 50?
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Unread 03-14-2016   #5
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

Ugh, well I'm sorry you didn't like it man. Thanks for the feedback regardless. If you send me ur email in a PM I'll paypal you a full refund.
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Unread 03-14-2016   #6
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

Also here's the first three pages of the comic as a preview. Should have done that already, sorry. I'm brand new at this. I definitely don't want anyone feeling like they're being taken advantage of or not knowing what they're buying.

And apologies if the price seems to high. I'll definitely try and make the next one cheaper. It cost me $760 to produce the comic and I honestly thought $10 seemed fair but you might be right.

I promise anyone who buys it and really doesn't like it a full refund for sure. I know it sucks feeling like you're not getting your money's worth. I've been a member of the process forum forever and the last thing I want to do is try and scam the community.
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Re: Ogre vs Witch - New GIANTESS/SHRINKING COMIC

Good on you, MNIRP.

Not my favorite subject matter, but I think the art's rather good. Just talking from the quality of the lines, can't speak to the quality of the shrink/growth.
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Unread 03-15-2016   #8
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Thank you for the refund.

The disappointing part is that I can see great qualities in the art mired by truly dreadful ones. The work is clean and looks good at high resolutions. It's a hodge-podge.
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Good on ya LK for being honest.
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