02-19-2014 | #13 |
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Join Date: Jun 2008
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Re: Mako's Collection: Metamorphosis
Great work, MsMako, thanks for sharing!
I'd echo the feedback (hopefully in a more polite/constructive way) that the youtube + panning method sort of under-sells the quality. The source images seem like really good quality stuff, though, and I'd love to see it as images or arranged as a comic. To be fair, I don't think the image-panning is a lost cause if you like doing them that way. I think I would minimize panning with text in view (maybe have text always be in a static box at the top/bottom/side of the pane while the image scrolls behind it.) The pacing also felt weird to me, but this may have been largely related to trying to read the text as it appeared (sometimes in reverse order). (Because yeah, apart from the text it's pretty useless feedback for me to describe the pacing as "weird" as that doesn't communicate too fast or too slow, heh. Sorry) But again, great stuff overall and thanks. |
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