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Unread 04-24-2015   #1
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Tell me a story! (Comic)

I want to start drawing again, but I am blacking out on story. Looking for ideas. I'll draw something 6-12 pages. Process welcome of course, you probably can guess which ones I like. Due tomorrow morning!
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Re: Tell me a story! (Comic)

I have been going to college for a few years to become a writer... Granted I've never posted anything here, but still I'd be happy to collaborate with you on something.
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Re: Tell me a story! (Comic)

Okay. I want to have it done by 9 tonight though.
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Alrighty.... hm....

For a basic idea: A pair of witches get in to a heated argument that escalates in to a magic battle which can pretty much have any kind of process in it that you want.
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Re: Tell me a story! (Comic)

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*been in public view long enough*
Maybe not, since I didn't see it.

I drew some stuff, but none of it was process related. oh well.
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Re: Tell me a story! (Comic)

Here's something: A girl making a drink out of various other drinks and shrinking from it. Process of course
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Re: Tell me a story! (Comic)

I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.
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I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.
Huh?
That problem can be controlled if you plan out your end scene and nail it.

Now if you are like me and you have a hard time killing your babies try asking these questions:

1. What is the purpose of the scene?
2. Does the scene drive the story forward?
3. Is there a a bunch of 'info dump' without much else within the scene?
4. Will your main character(s) (let alone readers) remember the scene 10 pages into the story?

Me~ I'm super guilty of wanting and trying to explain everything.

If your stories are nothing more than a long chain of transformation scenes I'd say collect the best ones and turn them into comic scripts.

But if you are trying to write something more than just a 10 page BE comic, I hope these 'suggestions' help.

All I see now are (BE)comics, (GTS)comics, (FMG)comics... over and over again.

Its nice to see people talking about writing.
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Why not shrinking a woman but she doesn't why.
Now her roommate and her has to go along with it.
Or her roommate has to find another roommate to pay the rent.
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I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.
It ends with a happy ending of her getting a nice doll house.
Or what most people do, death by vore -_-
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