Amahain's Stories

[Amahain]

Thanks Rick404. There'll be more stuff coming later this month.


... Crap, I'm committed now.

[sodacat]

I'll second rick404's opinion on that. Reading your stuff makes me want to start up writing again myself, but between my wiki and ingrained lethargy I never seen to get around to it. Plus I'm on a major Terminator kick right now, so nothing I'd make would fit on this board.

[Mitchell]

I can't wait to see more fromya!

[Amahain]

Originally Posted by Amahain

... Crap, I'm committed now.

Fuck commitment. Procrastination wins again. That said, I've got something for you all. As always, my newest stories are in my first post, so check out that growing list of attachments. Here's what's new:

Return of the Queen: It's a sequel to the first story I ever wrote for this forum, so if you haven't read it, check out Fall of the Lady (follow the link in my first post). I'll just warn you - Return of the Queen is long, and it's more story than it is TF porn, though I tried to include a few scenes of that nature. I guess I should mention that it's a succubus TF story.

Night at the Museum: Another testament to my inability to come up with good or original titles. It's an anthro-cat TF that's a bit lighter in tone than my usual fare (it's not comedic per se - it just doesn't involve anyone getting killed by a ferocious beast that used to be a woman).

Career Change: A canine TF with all the usual lesbianism and gore.

[no-name]

A sequel to one of my favorite stories? Woohoo! I'll give it a read when I get back from school. I seriously need to get to sleep, but still, this is great news!

[Hardcase]

I just discovered this thread and must say, Amahain, your narratives are well told and the process is amazing! Keep up the great work!

[Amahain]

Thanks!

[TF-Viewer]

Awesome stories.

[ivan11422]

Good job. I really liked the catgirl story.

[odysseusut]

Really enjoyed all of them - but Return of the Queen was a standout for me. Awesome writing.

[Amahain]

Originally Posted by odysseusut

Really enjoyed all of them - but Return of the Queen was a standout for me. Awesome writing.

I'm glad you liked it - I was really worried about that one. Not only was it long, but there were several plot holes in there as well. Although I intend to explain how Ravanda has changed and how Sythea has become corporeal since Fall of the Lady, I feel like I should have inserted something in there besides Ravanda saying "I'll tell you later." Problem was, Ravanda's explanation is a long story in and of itself.

I also retconned a few things since Fall of the Lady like Sythea and Ravanda's appearance (I do have a half-assed explanation for Ravanda's new look but I wish I had made her visually distinct from the rest of the succubi from the beginning), the method for creating succubi, and how long such a process takes. Hopefully I didn't turn too many people off with my lack of consistency.

[frice2000]

Really liked the Return of the Queen as well. I quite enjoy your stories character internalization of the transformation. You do really nice stuff with the psychology and kinesthetic feel of the changes, and that's one of the best elements when reading your work. I would greatly enjoy reading something a little slower and more developed from you. If that's your succubus work or it's something else that's great. While I really do enjoy your transformations I do want to see what you do with those changed long term especially since your psychology is so great in the short term. Also would like to see you try something where with the main character becoming an animal/feral we see the text degenerate as well until we're only reading about feelings, could be interesting to see.

Anyway, the three newish editions were very good reads. Thanks a lot for sharing.