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Re: Magic Rings

Interesting story.

I like the way you've described the fury and the human world.
Also how Rose describes things from her point of view.
It reminds me a bit of the point'n'click game Inherit the Earth.

I've enjoyed reading this story, except for the last part.
It went a little too fast and I'm not into diapers.

I like also the drawings.
The artist did a great job on the face expressions.

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Re: Magic Rings

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Interesting story.

I like the way you've described the fury and the human world.
Also how Rose describes things from her point of view.
It reminds me a bit of the point'n'click game Inherit the Earth.

I've enjoyed reading this story, except for the last part.
It went a little too fast and I'm not into diapers.

I like also the drawings.
The artist did a great job on the face expressions.

Greetings
Captain Ash
Thank you for the critique Ash.

I think there's going to be a long line of these since I know my boyfriend got one of me and Alyssa.

But yeah, I agree this was a bit short. But this is more practice for the three/four shrunken women novels I was planning on writing.

So any and all feed back is welcome on these exercises.
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"Though I am always in haste, I am never in a hurry." - John Wesley
"But it's an easy fix. One line of dialogue. 'Thank God we invented the... you know, whatever device.'" - Rob Lowe, Thank you for Smoking
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