New Story, Good for Your Figure

somnium · 02-03-2014

Raquel is an aspiring writer. When it seems that she'll be stuck working in the grocery store for the rest of her life, she gets the power to manipulate her body and changed her figure. Big boobs are nice, but what's the catch?

http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/a...gure-431676495

Laughingman · 02-04-2014

It was a little different than I expected, but I did like it for the most part. The slime girl thing certainly came out of nowhere, not really sure about that. My biggest complaint would be the people and their reactions. Didn't really feel real to me, and they were all so grouchy, lol. Still, that was probably what you were going for, lol. I liked it and it had good distinct characters.

02-03-2014	#1
somnium Fetish Writer Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: New Jersey Posts: 321	New Story, Good for Your Figure Raquel is an aspiring writer. When it seems that she'll be stuck working in the grocery store for the rest of her life, she gets the power to manipulate her body and changed her figure. Big boobs are nice, but what's the catch? http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/a...gure-431676495 __________________ She smiled. ...The fragrant breeze drifted up from the sea again. A magician wandered along the beach, but no one needed him. -Douglas Adams

02-04-2014	#2
Laughingman Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 374	Re: New Story, Good for Your Figure It was a little different than I expected, but I did like it for the most part. The slime girl thing certainly came out of nowhere, not really sure about that. My biggest complaint would be the people and their reactions. Didn't really feel real to me, and they were all so grouchy, lol. Still, that was probably what you were going for, lol. I liked it and it had good distinct characters.