My shot at a TG drawing. - Page 2

mr small · 06-06-2006

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Originally Posted by Lorekeep

It is very nice, please do continue. ^^

I Agree, I can't wait to see your next work. Very nice.

milkfish987 · 06-06-2006

This is great, you have the mood and facial expression down cold.

mr_x11 · 06-09-2006

I like this very much. I before pic would be great....but even the after is good since you can actually get a feeling of the transformation. Look forward to future images.

Ninja Jay · 06-10-2006

I agree. Great pic, but show the process. I liked the look on her face.

06-10-2006

*two thumbs and two toes up* XP

06-11-2006

I like the shading job you did on the clothing, very nice touch.

However... I did have some problems with it.

- The eyes seem too squarish. I know you're going for an anime effect with them, but you need to round the eyes out a bit more to give them a softness inherent in the picture.

- The skin appears too light. Maybe it's just the lighting of the picture, but I feel that she's far too pale considering what she's wearing. You could try darkening the flesh tone slightly to match the rest of her design.

- Her breasts seem a bit large. The clothes serve to hide it a little bit... though it's still noticeable. She's going to have some back problems later on. :-P Not really a problem in most senses, just my taste in the picture. Personally, I think she'd be better off with smaller breasts as a way of pulling attention away from the chest and more on the rest of the picture.

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06-06-2006	#14
milkfish987 Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 61	This is great, you have the mood and facial expression down cold.

06-09-2006	#15
mr_x11 Leecher Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 7	I like this very much. I before pic would be great....but even the after is good since you can actually get a feeling of the transformation. Look forward to future images.

06-10-2006	#16
Ninja Jay Very Melon Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In the dark place in your mind Posts: 437	I agree. Great pic, but show the process. I liked the look on her face.

06-10-2006	#17
reality_bender098 Guest Posts: n/a	two thumbs and two toes up XP

06-11-2006	#18
Kitsune Dragoon Guest Posts: n/a	I like the shading job you did on the clothing, very nice touch. However... I did have some problems with it. - The eyes seem too squarish. I know you're going for an anime effect with them, but you need to round the eyes out a bit more to give them a softness inherent in the picture. - The skin appears too light. Maybe it's just the lighting of the picture, but I feel that she's far too pale considering what she's wearing. You could try darkening the flesh tone slightly to match the rest of her design. - Her breasts seem a bit large. The clothes serve to hide it a little bit... though it's still noticeable. She's going to have some back problems later on. :-P Not really a problem in most senses, just my taste in the picture. Personally, I think she'd be better off with smaller breasts as a way of pulling attention away from the chest and more on the rest of the picture.