Sweet Dreams 1 Remastered

[Grand Storm]

The Thread vanished during the sever moving stuff so I gotta recreate it which is annouying, but here goes.

first post again but short version lol
I went back and saw that My original sweet dreams comic though one of my best was also my worst comics so I decided to return to it breifly and remaster everything including adding new pages and such... ext... ext

Old pages next too new ones for comparison for those that wanna see how much better it has gotten.

[Grand Storm]

Page 6 remaster and I am now back up to date....

But wait!

[Grand Storm]

A new Page has entered the ring!
This is no remastered page either... no this is 6.5 newly added page to the series to fill a time lapse.

Sorry there is no comparison for this one since it is entirely a new page added in.

EDIT: seems to be some issues with the size and the text so I added the full monster sized one in as well.

[SoylentOrange]

Very nice. Some wacky foreshortening on the lower-left panel, but I admit it's a really tricky angle. ^^;

[Grand Storm]

Bam! update! here comes page 7

I'm sure everyone is loving the fact I'm actually updating regularly now XD

As usual remastered page is posted next to the original. Story so much better now it hardly even resembles the old.

[frice2000]

Much much better dialogue. Gives the victim a much better personality. A huge step forward thanks for sharing!

[catfish27]

I still find the dialogue a bit hard to read -- have you thought about using what we used to call "typeset" lettering, or at least doing your hand lettering in all uppercase?

[Lurker#12763412]

If you wouldnt mind... I could go through and replace the dialogue with text, maybe even fix some of your slight grammar mistakes as well.... But of course I understand if you want to keep it this way.

[Grand Storm]

Originally Posted by Lurker#12763412

If you wouldnt mind... I could go through and replace the dialogue with text, maybe even fix some of your slight grammar mistakes as well.... But of course I understand if you want to keep it this way.

Yeah I have tried typing in text in the past in past comic and works and it always either looks messy, never fits properly or simply doesn't fit with the comics look. I prefer writing it even if its got some grammar blemishes.

OH! Almost forgot! NEW PAGE IS HERE

You know the drill by now old page uploaded with new one for comparison reasons for people that enjoy that kinda stuff.

[inchide]

Please, embody the .png pic inside the post, so that we don't have to download it.

[Grand Storm]

Did a lot of text editing and fixed grammar problems on 8

enjoy

[inchide]

.png are still a problem on this forum