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02-09-2010
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Just a wanderer
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Montreal, Canada
Posts: 2,073
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From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
Ten hours, spread over two days... That's how long it took me to write down the scenario to my first personal sequence, "From darkness comes light". I typed the last word of this at 1 PM eastern, just seconds before going for lunch.
To some, the ending might be a bit rushed, but I tapped myself dry. That's what happened when you pour all you got into what you do. I hope you guys will like it.
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Follow my ongoing story, 'Upon a Star', on DeviantArt: http://medierth.deviantart.com/ "In this egotistic world in which we live in, it is sometimes to wonder if we shouldn't be like mirrors for others to deem us worthy to be looked at." - 'Le Chat'  |
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02-09-2010
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 63
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Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
Nice
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02-11-2010
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Mostly gone
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Philadelphia, PA
Posts: 2,122
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Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
I saw your sequence on dA before reading the story, but both are great.
I liked how you made the changes very slowly and detail, writing about them as an actual process instead of using numbers and writing.com-like phrases like "she got a DDD cup" to describe the changes going on. The hours you spent writing this story show. I also like the actual concept itself - demon to angel. Don't see many of those on any site, much less The Process. All in all, a good story. |
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