Naruto Doujin (Offsite)

Amber_Neko · 08-24-2009

I recently stumbled on this at DA. http://enock.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-Period-122625597

I hope you will enjoy. Ny the way is there any similar doujin out there with the same premise?

otaku88 · 08-24-2009

Not too shabby; can't wait to see how it progresses!

Styerion · 08-24-2009

Hmm... I don't like it.

The artwork is good. It looks like a lot of time was dedicated to the linework. It's the writing that's killing me. Fourth wall breaking in a reality that doesn't constantly see it. Plot rushing. Bad event staging. Akward dialogue, not to mention significant deviations from established character.

It doesn't feel right to me. Good find for those who feel different about it than I do.

I also don't like the author's attitude much. Taking such a hostile, pre-emptive tone towards viewers doesn't exactly convince me to stick with it. I don't agree with the author's intent for conceiving this series, but that alone is hardly a reason for me to back away. You guys know me by now; when it comes to TF, I dislike hostility. I find more error in the composition, though, than the originating idea.

unkown111 · 08-25-2009

looks good.

Kyrex · 08-25-2009

Styerion... You're not to familiar with anime fandom communities, are you? The author's hostile tone is actually well deserved, considering how utterly obsessive some fans are when it comes to fan-art and fan-pairings and all that shit.

Either way, it's pretty interesting. The plot is a little rushed, but it's not really that bad. I'll be keeping an eye on it, at least.

Styerion · 08-25-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kyrex

Styerion... You're not to familiar with anime fandom communities, are you?

It's a blissful ignorance, I suppose.

Mitchell · 08-26-2009

Hm. Infinity-Sign did another Naruto TG.

Vengeance1701 · 08-26-2009

And isn't fourth-wall breaking/etc all part and parcel of most animes?

08-24-2009	#1
Amber_Neko Leecher Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 7	Naruto Doujin (Offsite) I recently stumbled on this at DA. http://enock.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-Period-122625597 I hope you will enjoy. Ny the way is there any similar doujin out there with the same premise?

08-24-2009	#2
otaku88 True Ronin Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 19	Re: Naruto Doujin Not too shabby; can't wait to see how it progresses! __________________ Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? Final Fantasy 7

08-24-2009	#3
Styerion Happiness in detachment Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 441	Re: Naruto Doujin Hmm... I don't like it. The artwork is good. It looks like a lot of time was dedicated to the linework. It's the writing that's killing me. Fourth wall breaking in a reality that doesn't constantly see it. Plot rushing. Bad event staging. Akward dialogue, not to mention significant deviations from established character. It doesn't feel right to me. Good find for those who feel different about it than I do. I also don't like the author's attitude much. Taking such a hostile, pre-emptive tone towards viewers doesn't exactly convince me to stick with it. I don't agree with the author's intent for conceiving this series, but that alone is hardly a reason for me to back away. You guys know me by now; when it comes to TF, I dislike hostility. I find more error in the composition, though, than the originating idea. Last edited by Styerion; 08-24-2009 at 10:36 PM.

08-25-2009	#4
unkown111 Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 114	Re: Naruto Doujin looks good. __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

08-25-2009	#5
Kyrex The Thread Ender Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Directy above the center of the Earth Posts: 251	Re: Naruto Doujin Styerion... You're not to familiar with anime fandom communities, are you? The author's hostile tone is actually well deserved, considering how utterly obsessive some fans are when it comes to fan-art and fan-pairings and all that shit. Either way, it's pretty interesting. The plot is a little rushed, but it's not really that bad. I'll be keeping an eye on it, at least.

08-26-2009	#7
Mitchell Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,107	Re: Naruto Doujin Hm. Infinity-Sign did another Naruto TG. __________________ http://schismgalaxy.freeforums.net/

08-26-2009	#8
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: Naruto Doujin And isn't fourth-wall breaking/etc all part and parcel of most animes? __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.